bay girl Posted August 23, 2006 Report Share Posted August 23, 2006 My foot is getting closer to Jack's face. He had better apologise quick smart. Great chapter. Hope you update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted August 23, 2006 Report Share Posted August 23, 2006 Great chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted August 23, 2006 Report Share Posted August 23, 2006 Grrrrrrrrr...poor Martha. Now im really mad at Jack. He better make amends soon, before i kill him. lol at Colleen, the poor thing Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Annie- Posted August 23, 2006 Report Share Posted August 23, 2006 Nice chapter Krystal! It was not boring at all! Krystal - Don't let Nicole threaten or bully you. It is very wrong. Just do it back to her and she'll behave! Great chapter! I'm loving this fic. If you spent your time actually doing what is asked and commented on the fic, more people would like you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted August 23, 2006 Report Share Posted August 23, 2006 Awwww, bless Martha! Jack had got an unbelievable amount of grovelling to do if he is to seek forgiveness! It wasn't a boring chapter at all; can't wait for the next update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shawtyy Posted August 27, 2006 Report Share Posted August 27, 2006 Can't Jack just apologise! Great chapter, update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted August 31, 2006 Report Share Posted August 31, 2006 Chapter Twenty-Six "You did what?" Tasha asked in astonishment. "Mac you can't just slap someone for no reason." "I thought he was using me, that's why I slapped him," Martha tried to justify herself, her tears had subsided and she had now started to discuss what had happened with Tasha. "Still, there's no need for violence." "Yea I know." "Anyway you must really feel bad about what happened if you're crying this much about it.," Tasha giggled trying to lighten the mood. Martha just looked back down at the pillows sprawled on her bed. "What is it?" Tasha asked, realising that there must be more to the story. "That's not all that happened," Martha finally mananged to get out. ************************************************** "So have the results come through for the blood on the car found at the Williamson place?" Laura asked McGrath. "Not as of yet. I just put a call through though so they should be here within the hour. In the mean time I think we should have a proper look in that book. Maybe it will give us some indication as to who's blood was on the grills." "Sarge," Rice called out. "We just got a frantic call from Betty Ausop. She found a man's dead body near the bushes on Carrawong road. Are you coming?" McGrath's eyes shot open. "Take Harper with you. I'm going to check out this book." ***************************************************** "WHAT A JERK!!!" Tasha yelled loudly. "If I was you I would of slapped him again!" Martha couldn't help but giggle. "What happened to the 'there's no need for violence'," She mocked. "That was before I found out what jerk he was to you. And he still hasn't apologised," Tasha shook her head in disgust and disbelief. "Well to be fair he did think that I was still with Corey." Martha didn't know why but she suddenly felt the need to defend Jack. "I can't belive you're making excuses for him. What he said was horrible." "I know that. believe me I know." Martha said getting off the bed and walking towards the window where the curtains were tightly shut. She thrust them open letting the rays of the sun fall diagonally into her room on it's angle. She stood with her arms folded and staring out the window with her back to Tasha. "But we were arguing and it was the heat of the moment. Maybe he didn't mean it?" Martha wanted to believe so desperatley that he didn't mean it. Tasha sighed and walked over to stand next to Martha. "Then answer me this. Why hasn't he been to see you to tell you that he didn't mean it in the past two days?" Martha was flawed. Tasha was right and she wasn't going to keep deluding herself. Tasha reached out to touch her but she abrubtly moved her hand away and brushed past her, making her way to her wardrobe. After roughing pulling out a pair of jeans and a singlet she went into the bathroom refusing to make eye contact with her. "Where are you going?" Tasha asked from the kitchen where she had just made her and Martha a cup of tea. Martha didn't aswer, she just kept walking towards the door. "Mac wait." But she still didn't listen. She just opened the door and slammed it shut. ******************************************************* "Easy, just take it easy," Beth said while trying to support Tony. "Yeah Dad there's no rush, just take your time." Lucas joined from the other side of his father. Tony had both his arms around Lucas and Beth's neck and was trying to get out of the car. He was trying to push himself to do it, he wasn't in total control of his body and it was beginning to play on his nerves. "I can do it!" He finally snappped. Lucas and Beth just went quiet and Jack looked up from the back of the car where he was getting out Tony's bags.'This is going to be a long task' Beth thought as she slightly shook her head at Lucas to ignore the outburst. "I'm just going to go out for a while," Jack said grabbing his keys from the table. "O.k love. Going anywhere special?" "ah no not really, just going to the station to pick up a few things." Jack decided to only to partially tell the truth. His main reason for going out was to see Martha. One way or another he was going to to apologise. He could almost have kicked himself in the head when he realised how long he had waited to do it. "O.k then seeya." Beth said, smiling lightly. ************************************************************** Harry saw Martha exit the apartment from the main road outside the diner. He stood back and watched her from a distance as she made her way along the road. There was harldy anyone about for that time of day. "This is it," Harry whispered to himself aloud. "It's showtime." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted August 31, 2006 Report Share Posted August 31, 2006 Omg Whats he gonna do to Martha!????????? Update like ASAP No not ASAP NOW!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shawtyy Posted August 31, 2006 Report Share Posted August 31, 2006 Interesting chapter! What is he going to do to Martha? Jack quickly save her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted August 31, 2006 Report Share Posted August 31, 2006 Oohhhhh!!! Nice way to end it (not!) Please don't keep us waiting for too long; can't wait to read on! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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