xsianx Posted December 14, 2006 Report Share Posted December 14, 2006 I was bored, so I read it all again. Amazinf how time changes,Krystal? lol You used to be so good at updating and now we're lucky to see one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted December 16, 2006 Report Share Posted December 16, 2006 Nicole fine we'll do pretend. I love you Sian go away this is an update within a reasonable space of time Who knew I was capable . . . Martha jumped up from her place on the floor, moving the fastest she ever had in her life. Her heart raced sending shock waves rippling through her entire body. Her eyes fell into the direction the bang came from and landed upon the man that had fired to gun. Their eyes finally and locked together; meeting in the dark. It was him that was for sure. Martha stood frozen and paralyzed by fear. Her eyes widened like an owls and she felt a cold shiver tingle down her back like someone had dropped an ice cube down her shirt. Her muscles tensed and her mouth dropped slightly, broadening at the corners in shock. Both stood perfectly still staring at each other until Harry's expressionless face turned into a smile and he laughed lightly. "I didn't wake you sweetie did I?" he said simply. Martha's blood ran cold; he was seriously disturbed. She didn't answer, she did everything possible to try and stop her bottom lip from quivering to hide how scared she was but it still did despite her resistance. Her lungs filled with the smell of the gunpowder that resided in the air and she started to feel extremely light headed, like it was all a bad nightmare. The pain from the knock on her head previously still ached and was excruciatingly sore. 'You're going to faint,' her head yelled a thousand decibels too loudly. Defiant to be in control she clenched her fists as tight as she could, digging her nails into the palm of her hand until she felt the pinching pain. She felt the warm liquid that came from within her skin trickle down her fingers, seeping into her nails. It hurt like hell but she had to distract her mind; think about something else, she couldn't let herself pass out. She was doing it for Jack. "I hope I didn't scare you either," Harry asked starting to get concerned. Moving closer and closer to Martha until he reached out his had to caress her arm. "It was only a test run to see if it work-" but she cut him off. "Get away from me!” she yelled, as loud as her lungs would allow her, pulling away from him as fast as she could. "Get the hell away from me!" She jerked herself backward, almost stumbling. "It's only me," Harry said gently, confused. "It's Daddy." "You really are crazy," Martha began to become hysterical. "You're DELUDED!" Harry's face turned from that of confusion to sadness. "Why are you doing this?" He asked, his face full of anguish. Martha shook her head in disbelief, panting for air between her battles for breathe and trying to stop her tears. "Why me?" she began to cry outloud."What the hell did I do that was so bad for this to happen?" She screamed rhetorically, looking upwards. "You really need to calm down sweetheart this-" "Don't tell me to calm down! And I'm not your sweetheart so stop calling me that!" ************ All the officers stood in shock, looking in the direction of the warehouse. Jack felt something pierce his skin, like a sharp knife, squeezing into him. Like there was no more feeling left in his body. His breath caught in throat like someone has just punched him in the guts, and his eyes filled with tears immediately. His ears were blocked; he couldn't hear anything other than the screaming that had just deafened him. "Nooooooooooooo!" He yelled suddenly, snapping out of his thoughts. "Noooo. No you're not taking her away from me." His feet raced from under him as he ran straight for the big dark building. "Jack! Jack come back here!" McGrath yelled but it was too late, he had already disappeared behind the massive shed like place. Everything looked iron clad; there was no way he was going to get in the door. But in the corner of his eye he saw it. Divine intervention, a miracle, pure luck or whatever it was it was there; an open window. "Get the hell away from me!" He heard her scream, which only encouraged him to move faster, he wasn't going to let anything happen to her. Anything. Jumping up until his fingers gripped the sill he mustered up all the strength he had left in his body and hoisted himself up. His legs dangling behind him he positioned them over and landed inside on his feet. When he fell the first thing he saw was Martha, bruises on her forehead and tears in hers eyes. He was almost about to run up to her when he spotted Harry. Their eyes came to a meeting point and Harry shoot him a look ready to kill, gun pointed in his hand aiming for Jack. O.k so I know that that was reeeeally lame and seemed like an easy way but I can't be stuffed to come up with something complicated and technically correct and Jack has to be in there for the next bit, so deal with it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxgulcanxx Posted December 16, 2006 Report Share Posted December 16, 2006 Great chapter as usual, yey Jack's finally in there trying to save Martha Harry better not kill Jack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted December 16, 2006 Report Share Posted December 16, 2006 Harry better not kill Jack...especially as Jack had just gotten there to save Martha, only Jack could go and get himself killed! Great chapter, more soon please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted December 16, 2006 Report Share Posted December 16, 2006 Wont mention the english or lack Krystal *shakes head* Well done Krystal, it must have been hard. Updating like twice in less then a month You should go rest haha Joke. It was worth the wait I don't want Harry to shoot Jack. Shoot McGrath, He can't do a topless sceen like Jack can. Please update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted December 16, 2006 Report Share Posted December 16, 2006 brilliant chapter!! soooooooooooooooooooooooooo glad jack came......pleas eupdate SOON!! xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted December 16, 2006 Report Share Posted December 16, 2006 Wow, well done for posting this year! Let's see if you can fit another in 2006, eh? Great stuff! I just hate the fact you left it at a cliff hanger. Nicole fine we'll do pretend. I love you That felt forced and unnatural. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bay girl Posted December 18, 2006 Report Share Posted December 18, 2006 YaY. Update. Nice. Great chapter. You'd better not kill Jack or Martha. If you do; i'll have to do something bad. LOL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gawguss_tiff Posted December 18, 2006 Report Share Posted December 18, 2006 ARGH harry soo better not kill jack i soo hope jack and martha get out of this ok o and how smart was martha for doing the thing into her palm to distract her from the other pain smart smart girl lol well excellent chapter update ASAP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldscott Posted January 16, 2007 Report Share Posted January 16, 2007 Great chapter!, Can't wait for an update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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