Trapped

[Lady Stardust]

I've just sat and read all of this story...

It's brilliant! You are such a good writer, well done!

I felt I knew right from the word go that she was pregnant, and that was the trap (or one of them at least) - I just hope she finds the strength to realise that she doesn't have to stay with him, no matter how much Chris blackmails her!

I'm intruiged as to if there are any other reasons why chris has Marths trapped... please update, soon, I really like this story!

[-Jade-]

I'm intruiged as to if there are any other reasons why chris has Marths trapped...

Well... since you ask, yes there is another reason. The pregnant thing was just an added trap, I only thought of it later on, but the main reason that he's got her trapped is still yet to be revealed...

[Lady Stardust]

Oooer! I will await the revelations with excitement!

I've just started my first fan fic, "Dan's Demise". It is great fun to write but I don't know if I could keep it going for as long as you have with yours! You have talent

[beckyboo]

Please please please

You have to update ASAP to reveal the truth lol!!!!!!!!!

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[-Annie-]

Yay! Can't wait jackandmartha!!!

[-Jade-]

Thanks everyone, (especially Lady Stardust) your comments are starting to motivate me to get on and write some more. Honestly though your comments are so nice! The secret will be revealed soon...

[-Annie-]

^Yay...*giggles excitedly*

[beckyboo]

Please update ASAP

I really miss this fic

I wanna no why shes trapped!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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[-Jade-]

I'm so sorry for leaving it this long! I'm having some major writing block. But I'm really really gonna try and update, hopefully tomorrow (???) I know it's annoying, sorry!

[xsianx]

^ Take aslong as you need. No rush.