Trapped

[loobieloo]

stop it!!!! I keep gettin excited tihnkin you have updated, its not fair, its givin me a weak heart!!!

Sooo then when can we expect the next update hehe:P

[-Jade-]

lol! Sorry! Erm expect the next update on Saturday (UK time). Basically, I would have updated tonight but I was weighed under with work, and I've been very tired all day. Tomorrow, I will want to finish my homework and coursework before the weekend so I won't update then. But I promise that on Saturday I will post up Chapter 22.

[xsianx]

^^ Aww! poor you! Thank you for telling us, I can't wait to read the next chapter

[-Jade-]

Thanks Today, has to have been been the longest/most boring/tiring day of my life. lol

I might update earlier than Saturday but don't get your hopes up! However, in my mind, I'm working up to the next major thing to happen in the story and I can't wait to get to that point so I want to write the updates in between now and the next bit of excitement quickly!

[xsianx]

Sucky. I didn't have any school today so I slept most of it

Lol Thats evil your teasing us! its unfair.

But update as early as you can but again theres no rush.

[lollipop_lover11]

Right, I really, really, really want to feel sorry for Martha but I can't (over the 'Alex moving in' situation). If she loved Jack so much, when why not leave that abusive mongreal Chris??

Thanks for updating and hope to read more soon!!

I know I sound evil but I have to agree even though I know she has a reason for staying with that pig it is still a bit annoying.

Anyway great chapter Jade.

[-Annie-]

You evil smeegle.

What a cool word?!

Can't wait for more!

Soon. Please.

[sevenpuddings]

Oh and that makes two.

I just read it from the beginning Jade, and at first, I was worried that it would just be another one where they came together and all there was was fluff... but girl, I shall never doubt you again!

I so desperetly want to know about Chris. I stopped trying to guess about a third of the way through, I know why she stays with him, thats psychological, but why she ended up with him in the first place, thats the intriguing thing.

I don't hate Alex, maybe because she's not written to be hated. In the end I think I'll hate Jack for toying wit her while he tries to forget Martha. I admire him for actually believing for a second he could go past her... then I just wanna slap him because hes an idiot for thinking that... and for (unintentionally) leading poor Alex astray.

I shall also keep up with this one, too see how it all turns out.

[-Jade-]

Wow, Jess, I really did not expect you to read this. lol It's not exactly your favourite couple and in the end, it's quite unrealistic. However, thank you for your comments- they are always interesting and valued. And no it's not going to be fluff, there will be some but I'm hoping not to have it end in the typical way...

Aww Jess, now I have to make an effort to write a half decent story. lol Damn it.

[xGlowingAngelx]

OK, well I just caught up with the last few chapters that I missed, and they're as good as the others. (Well, as good as they can be when Jack and Martha aren't together). I can't believe she was stupid enough to go back to him, is she stupid? Gosh, I hope it's just her hormones and she sees sense soon enough. And Jack and Alex living together, that's just weird. He obviously loves Martha and moving in with her won't make that go away. FOOL.

I love the update though. Can't wait for the next (And don't worry, I don't mind waiting)