beckyboo Posted March 9, 2007 Report Posted March 9, 2007 And as he looked at her, he couldn’t help but still think that she was beautiful. ^^^ So cute Oh my god that was such a good chapter And now your next update is due Monday 3 days time We should be thankful your not abandoning this one again Thanks for the update!!
puja Posted March 9, 2007 Report Posted March 9, 2007 Awww, the last part of that last chapter was beautiful. I needed an excuse to cry today- and that did it Jack is adorable Great writing as always. Everyone seems to be having those stressful times with work at the moment; it's so darn annoying! Always a pleasure to read, update when you can
>>Emma<< Posted March 9, 2007 Report Posted March 9, 2007 Aww that chapter was soo sweet! I can't wait for more Jade. Your updating is brilliant, keep it up. As long as you don't abandon it again and we get an update once a month I'll be happy Update whenever you can!
vale4eva Posted March 9, 2007 Report Posted March 9, 2007 Awww. That really was beautiful Jade Excellent writing. Jack can protect Martha and keep her safe, im sure of it, Whats going on with his fiance though? She still exists doesnt she lol They didnt break up did they? Or is she still in the city? Not that i care, JnM need to be together, we dont need her coming back and causing more hassle! Update soon.
xsianx Posted March 9, 2007 Report Posted March 9, 2007 Beautiful, I think your writing is improving with every update ! I'm sure you'll whizz the English exams. lol
Tasha Posted March 10, 2007 Report Posted March 10, 2007 Yay, Jack likes Martha (duh!) We just need to get rid of that fiance who has seemed of have disappeared OH wait she's in the City. Oh wellz, hope she finds someone there and doesnt come back Great chapter More please
-Jade- Posted March 10, 2007 Report Posted March 10, 2007 lol! Alex will be back soon enough.... Thanks Sian. And thank you to everyone who has commented, I really appreciate it.
loobieloo Posted March 10, 2007 Report Posted March 10, 2007 Yo yo yo Jadey-o Love the last chapter, it was just so "awwww" Don't know what else to say really, the writing was eccelent as was every other before it. Haha don't I sound wise Can't wait for the next update.
beckyboo Posted March 10, 2007 Report Posted March 10, 2007 lol! Alex will be back soon enough.... Alex dont need to come back yano Jade
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