-Jade- Posted July 7, 2006 Report Share Posted July 7, 2006 Nicole, you are definitely strange. lol I have a good mind to change the plot so you have no clue of what happens. Btw, I promise that the next chapter will be up very soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted July 7, 2006 Report Share Posted July 7, 2006 Nicole, you are definitely strange. lol I have a good mind to change the plot so you have no clue of what happens. Btw, I promise that the next chapter will be up very soon! You dare and I'll stop the fic I'm writing at the mo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted July 7, 2006 Report Share Posted July 7, 2006 You dare and I'll stop the fic I'm writing at the mo. ^^ And that is a perfect example of how mean Nicole is! That's her, always blaming, threatening and insulting people...isn't that right xGlowingAngelx and jackandmarthaluver?! Only joking Nicole! Love you really! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted July 7, 2006 Report Share Posted July 7, 2006 You dare and I'll stop the fic I'm writing at the mo. ^^ And that is a perfect example of how mean Nicole is! That's her, always blaming, threatening and insulting people...isn't that right xGlowingAngelx and jackandmarthaluver?! Only joking Nicole! Love you really! ..me mean? Who said "I have a good mind to change the plot so you have no clue of what happens " That's just spiteful.. lol. I'm an angel. But, you've offended me now *weeps* so I'm going to go to boring, none-emotion posts. Such as "Next chapter soon please". There you go, that's what I'm going to do!! You'll miss my threats.. lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted July 7, 2006 Report Share Posted July 7, 2006 Yes but who was shouting from the roof tops that they knew what was gonna happen and that no one else knew??! Hardly nice is it? But on another note, please continue with your wacky posts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xGlowingAngelx Posted July 7, 2006 Report Share Posted July 7, 2006 You dare and I'll stop the fic I'm writing at the mo. ^^ And that is a perfect example of how mean Nicole is! That's her, always blaming, threatening and insulting people...isn't that right xGlowingAngelx and jackandmarthaluver?! Only joking Nicole! Love you really! YES! It is. She gets very mean to me when I don't updaye and then when I do she threatens me because of what's happening. There's just no pleasing her! lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xGlowingAngelx Posted July 7, 2006 Report Share Posted July 7, 2006 Yes but who was shouting from the roof tops that they knew what was gonna happen and that no one else knew??! Hardly nice is it? But on another note, please continue with your wacky posts She did that when I told her...so I changed it lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted July 7, 2006 Report Share Posted July 7, 2006 Yes but who was shouting from the roof tops that they knew what was gonna happen and that no one else knew??! Hardly nice is it? But on another note, please continue with your wacky posts It wasn't mean either. lol. Well, tough poo. You're getting no wacky posts, neither is xGlowingAngelsx. (Very nearly called you BackToTheBayRules. That's going to be a hard habit to get out of.. lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted July 7, 2006 Report Share Posted July 7, 2006 Ok, well I finally got the next chapter written! Please tell me what you think! Chapter 10 Jack just stood there for a few seconds, trying to comprehend what he could see. He was desperately trying to understand why anyone would want to do that to her. “Come here.” He said gently, offering out his hand for her to take it. She looked at him warily, as if she was considering whether Jack would ever hurt her; but as she looked into his eyes full of concern she knew that he could be trusted. It was looking into his eyes at that moment that she realised she loved him. Just as she was about to take his hand, Chris appeared at the door behind Jack. “Terrible isn’t it?” he said, as Jack spun around “She fell and just hit her face.” “Oh yea, and you expect me to believe that do you mate?” asked Jack, practically spitting out the words. He swivelled back to face Martha and saw that she was slowly backing away from the door, a look of fear on her face. Jack couldn’t bear to see her like that. “Martha, come here, I’ll help you. Come with me.” He said leaving his hand outstretched towards her. “I actually think she wants to stay with me, you know her fiancé .” interrupted Chris sharply. Jack just looked at him in disgust. “Come on Martha” he insisted, moving towards her. “She wants to stay here.” repeated Chris. Jack turned around furious. “I think we should give her that choice don’t you?” he said, trying to stay calm. “Ok, Martha” started Chris “Do you want to go with Jack or stay here with me?” he said, giving her a horribly fake, encouraging smile. However, as Jack turned back around to faceher, Chris’ face turned to stone. He glared at Martha menacingly, threatening her with his eyes. That look was enough. “Erm…Jack, thanks but you can go, I’m fine here.” She stuttered, slowly standing up. Jack moved towards her and she immediately moved away from him, afraid. “Martha, look what he’s done to you! He’s made you scared!” Jack protested. “Jack just go…” she answered quietly. “But Martha…” Jack started to insist. “Mate, I think you should do what the lady wishes. Now please leave!” said Chris, who finally, having had enough, started pushing Jack out of the door. As Martha heard the door slam shut, she burst into tears, wondering why she had just let the one person who could help her walk out of the door. Chris entered the room without saying a word. “Well done.” he said to her. She looked up, surprised. “I knew you were clever Martha. You just avoided a move which would have made your life hell. I’m glad to see that you know where your loyalties lie.” He moved forward, put his hand around her waist and pulled her towards him, roughly pressing his mouth to hers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted July 7, 2006 Report Share Posted July 7, 2006 Just wondering, how can you cringe when you're kissing? lol. I'm trying to imagine it.. Cringe/Kiss = Criss!! It's a Chris Criss! Sorry, I'm random.. "Great. LOoking forward to next chapter" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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