PINK Posted June 5, 2006 Report Posted June 5, 2006 Here's the next part enjoy! “Bye” Jack said as he kissed Martha on the head as he was getting ready for work “bye” Martha replied as she rubbed his arm as he left. Martha was sitting at the table eating break fast when Mary entered the room. Martha looked up “hi Mary want some pan cakes there are plenty” “thanks” Mary said sitting down at the table and putting two pan cakes on her plate. Martha finished her last piece of pan cake and looked at her watch “oh my God I going to be late sorry I’ve really got to get going or I’m going to be really late” “that’s fine” Mary said smiling sweetly “ok sorry” Martha said once again before racing up the stairs just then there was a knock at the door and Mary got up to answer it “Corey” Mary exclaimed what are you doing this is way to risky” “I’m ready to act know Jack’s not home now is he” “no he’s not but” “no buts” Corey butted in “we are going to act now” but Corey was cut off by Martha yelling “was there someone at the door” Martha yelled while walking down the stairs but stoped in her tracks when she saw someone that after three years was still having nightmares over. “Corey” Martha yelled and turned around and started “no your not going anywhere” Corey said while running up behind her and grabbing her “no Corey let go of me Marry help” Martha screamed “help” Marry said “why would I help you your not going to marry Jack because I’m not going to let you I can see you and Jack are in love and no matter what I do I won’t be able to convince him that your no good” “No good” Martha practically yelled “you don’t even know me” she said still trying to escape Corey’s evil grasp around her waist. “Let go of me” Martha yelled “sure” Corey said sarcastically “I think we might go for a little ride” he continued. “Mary” Corey said “yes” Mary replied “write a note for Jacky boy say” “I’m back and if you want your precious Martha back come to the burned up tire factory” “right got it” Mary said as she placed the note on the table and headed for the door with Cory dragging Martha with him. Jack was sitting at his desk at work with nothing to do except day dream. “Jack earth to Jack” Lara said waving her hand in front of Jacks face. “Yeah” Jack said shaking his head. “Your not busy are you” “yeah I’m overflowing with work” Jack said sarcastically. “Very funny” Lara said “here” she added. “What’s this” Jack asked looking at the huge pile of files on his desk. “Bail files” “right and I have to go through every one” Jack questioned “yep” Lara said sitting down Jack sighed and went to pick up a file when they all fell to the floor. “Great Jack said to himself and got down to pick up the files when a picture fell out of one “Corey” Jack said aloud. Lara looked up “did you know about this” Jack questioned “yes” Lara said as Jack opened the file “who would bail this mon..” but stopped when he saw the name Marry White “oh my God” Jack said “I have to go” Jack said getting up and racing out of the police station. “Jack” Lara yelled but it was too late. “Martha” Jack yelled as he ran into the house “Martha” he yelled again but noticed the note on the table he picked up the note and read it he noticed was his Grandmothers handwriting. “Oh my God” Jack said to himself grabbed his keys and left the house once more. “Let me go” Martha whined to Mary and Corey. “Shut up” Corey yelled “oh my God he’s coming” Corey said as he ran out of the warehouse. Mary looked at Martha “well it looks like Jacky’s come to the rescue” and at that moment Jack burst through the door “Grandma what the hell are you doing” “trying to fix your mistakes” Mary said “just let Martha go please” Starting to race over to her “stop” Marry yelled but Jack kept going and Mary pulled the trigger and one single bullet travelled through the air and landed in Jacks stomach. Mary dropped the gun realising what she had done and raced out of the warehouse Martha who was still in shock raced over to Jack “JACK, JACK CAN YOU HEAR ME JACK” she yelled as she got Jacks phone out of his pocket and dialled 000. Next time: Martha makes a shocking revelation. And will Jack ever wake up to hear the news. I will try and get the next part up later tonight.
Jamey-Maria Posted June 5, 2006 Report Posted June 5, 2006 Mary you stupid, old bag, you shot your own grandson and you didn't even stick around to see if he was alright. See what happens when you meddle in other peoples lives? Jack please wake up. You need to update as soon as you possibly can otherwise i will die of suspense! Great writing and great chapter.
Jacksthehottest Posted June 5, 2006 Report Posted June 5, 2006 lol Mary is so evil how can she just run out like that and leave Jack there, wow that was such a good chapter, i hope Jack's oki can't wait for more..great writing
Nicom Posted June 5, 2006 Report Posted June 5, 2006 I...She....he....fit.....blood....ouch.... Can't talk at the mo... might regain my speaking abilities if you update soon!!
bell Posted June 5, 2006 Report Posted June 5, 2006 right like nicole im in shoke and finding it hard to write killer granny on the loose Jack wake up i tell you, wake up, if you dont ill be so upset and fail all my exams and can blame it all on you. so please cause i need the bag for passing. please update soon
~Angel~ Posted June 6, 2006 Report Posted June 6, 2006 OMG!!! i hope jack isn't dead. i can't believe mary shot her own grandson. she's so evil. plz update soon. i need to know what happens!!
xGlowingAngelx Posted June 6, 2006 Report Posted June 6, 2006 OMG! I can't believe she shot him! Silly old fool! Please update soon and don't let him die!!!!
linzie_mac01 Posted June 7, 2006 Report Posted June 7, 2006 OMG I can't believe she just shot her own grandson! The big grey-haired silver gun-carrying nutter!!
PINK Posted June 9, 2006 Report Posted June 9, 2006 LAST TIME: Corey and Mary kidnapped Martha. Jack realized that Mary had bailed Corey out of Jail. Jack went to find Martha but it ended in tragedy when Jack got shot. CHAPTER 3: “What’s taking them so long” Martha said to Beth as she paced the waiting room. “I’m sure he’ll be out soon” Beth tried to reassure her. “What if he’s not ok what if he doesn’t make it” Martha said starting to break down in tears” “he will sweet” “but what if he’s not” Martha said again Beth was getting up and embracing Martha in a hug “it’s ok” Martha pulled away “I never, I never got the chance to tell him I’m pregnant” Beth looked at her and saw new tears forming in her eyes “oh sweet” Beth said collecting her in a tight embrace trying to calm her down. Just then a doctor approached them “hello Mrs Holden” the Doctor guessed “yeah” Martha answered without thinking “what’s going on” “well” the doctor started his in a very critical condition lucky for him though the bullet didn’t hit and major organs but it did cause some pretty bad eternal bleeding we won’t know the full extent of the damage until he wakes up” “but he will wake up” Martha questioned. The doctor looked uneasy and said “{we’ll just have to wait and see” Martha couldn’t hold back the tears she didn’t know how she was supposed to raise a baby by herself she was completely devastated can I see him please” Martha said “sure” the doctor answered and Martha hurried off. Martha walked into Jack’s room and stopped dead in her tracks seeing him there lying still looking so defenceless it took all her strength to go in there were tubes and wires everywhere but she knew she had to be there for him. She walked over to him and sat down in a chair right beside his bed and slid her hand through the railings on the bed and held his hand. “I’m so scared Jack usually when I’m scared I turn to you but know you’re the reason I’m scared I know this is kind of stupid but I believe that people in comas can hear you Jack this morning I found something out something that will change our lives forever I found out I was pregnant I’m going to have a baby Jack your baby and I can’t do it alone I want us to have our perfect life that we have always dreamt of please wake up don’t let it end like this” Just then Martha felt her hand being squeezed “you don’t think your getting rid of me this easily do you” he asked a smile forming across his face” Martha’s heart melted she was so relieved “I’ll go and get a nurse” Martha said hurrying out on the room. Martha left Jack lying there he had heard what she had said he was so happy at just that moment Martha walked in with a nurse in tow “hello It’s good to see you so alert so quickly “yeah well I heard something that made me wake up” Jack said glancing at Martha he knows she thought “hows the pain” the nurse asked “pretty bad hey um this may sound a bit silly but what happened” Martha looked at the nurse “I’ll take it” she said the nurse just nodded and left the room. Martha sat down on the edge of the bed “hey babe what happened” Jack said in a worried voice what was the big deal. “um honey what’s the last thing you remember” Jack looked at her “um” Jack thought and closed huis eyes and just then memories came flooding back. “I dropped the files and um” Jack’s eyes snapped open “COREY” Jack yelled what did he do to you” “he just came to our house. Jack sat there looking confused “then who did this” Jack said Martha sighed “It was your grandmother” “what” Jack exclaimed “no it can’t have been” just then Tony and Lucas walked in. “Hey Mate” Tony said walking over to Jack” “hi” Jack said still in shock. “I heard what happened I’m so sorry we got back from the City as fast as we could God I knew Mary went a little off the deep end after your mothers death but I never thought she’d stoop this low” Jack sat there he couldn’t believe it. He looked over to the other side of the room and saw Martha sitting on a chair in the corner and then remembered “the baby” “ah dad can I have minute with Martha please” “ah yeah sure we’ll be back soon take care ok” Tony said “ok” Jack said and as soon as Tony and Luc had left the room jack turned to look at Martha “I’m so sorry” “for what” Martha said “we need to talk don’t we” Jack said “yeah” Martha said getting what he was implying “so when did you find out” he asked excitedly “two days ago” “well at least there wasn’t only bad news today” “yeah I’m so sorry Jack” Martha said lying down beside him and he rapped his arms around her “so” he said breaking the silence “what did they do to Gran and Corey” Jack asked “Martha looked up she had been dreading the question” Martha sighed “they got away” she said what Jack said looking down at her “yeah but they’ve got people out looking for them. “Well at least we have each other” “yeah that’s the most important thing” Martha said snuggling into his body being careful not to hurt him. NEXT TIME: Mary’s back and goes to extreme lengths to stop Martha and Jack’s happiness will she succeed? Please review.
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