xsianx Posted July 2, 2006 Report Posted July 2, 2006 YAY!!! Two chapters and Shes woke up! I'm so glad now they can be happy forever and send that Jeremy creep to prison lol Jack was sooooo sweet. Anyway can't wait for next chapter xxx
Tasha Posted July 2, 2006 Report Posted July 2, 2006 OMG i am so glad she woke up i hope her and jack can just be happy now no more drama great fic, continue please
-Jade- Posted July 2, 2006 Report Posted July 2, 2006 YAY!!!! She woke up! I'm really happy now!! Great chapter!! Please update as soon as possible!
puja Posted July 2, 2006 Report Posted July 2, 2006 Just caught up Tessa; very good! Please update soon
Martha_Jack Posted July 8, 2006 Report Posted July 8, 2006 i am so happy that she has woke up update ASAP
Nicom Posted July 8, 2006 Report Posted July 8, 2006 Awwww!! Just caught up! Awwww!! Great fic!! Awwww!! lol
xxtessaxx Posted July 10, 2006 Report Posted July 10, 2006 Sorry this chapter took a while. It's here now. Chapter 17 Martha looked over at Jack, who was sitting right next to the bed. She couldn't remember the last thing she had said to him, probably something nasty. She wondered why he cared so much. She smiled at him. “I thought I'd lost you” Jack said as he stroked her hand. “Me too” She whispered “Jack I just need to get something straight, Jeremy and I...” Martha started “I know.” Jack said “And I'm really sorry for not listening to you, I was completely stupid for believing somebody I had never met before in my life over my girlfriend!” He explained “Yes, you were.” Martha laughed “Why don't we give Tasha and Alf a call. They've been worrying about you for ages!” Jack said “Okay” Martha said Jack picked up the phone and called them. “They are sooo happy” jack said as he got off the phone. “They'll be here straight away” “That's great” Martha said “So Martha, do you remember what happened at all?” Jack asked “Yeah, sort of. But not in heaps of detail...” “I remember” she paused “I remember sitting on the beach, thinking about what happened... and then I saw Jeremy. We had an argument. Then he carried me to his house. I think” Martha explained. Jack bowed his head. “This is all my fault” Jack said “Hey... no you can't take the blame” said Martha “But, if I hadn't had believed him you never would have been on the beach at the same time” Jack said “He's a psycho Jack. He would have found out some other way to kidnap me.” “Martha!!!” Tasha said as she came running through the door and gave her a big hug. “We thought you were going to die!” She said “Haha, well I'm very glad I'm not” “So anyway, I'm sorry did I interrupt something?” Tasha asked “Oh, no no Martha was just explaining to me what happened” Jack said “Okok” Tasha said “So... have you fixed your break up?” Tash asked “I guess we have” Martha said and smiled at Jack. “Yes, we certainly have” Jack said and kissed Martha on the lips. Just then Alf, Morag and Ric came into the room. Everyone stayed for at least an hour but they all decided it was best they let Martha have a rest. The doctors had wanted her to stay overnight for observation. Just to be sure. Martha said bye to Tasha, Ric, Alf and Morag and they walked out the door. “Well, I guess i'd better be going too. You need your rest Martha” he teased. “Oh please, can't you stay?” Martha asked “Ooooh, you actually WANT me to stay?” Martha was happy, things were actually getting back to normal. Maybe she thought too soon though, as Jeremy walked through the door.
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