Jackieleanne Posted June 22, 2006 Report Posted June 22, 2006 Great work Des, I love it. Its good to see that Lucas is there for her.
*dW* Posted June 23, 2006 Report Posted June 23, 2006 Auctually have part 3 and 4 done written them up last night aswell just need to do little fixing and bit of a story change to some of them.
tasha7905 Posted June 23, 2006 Report Posted June 23, 2006 This is great. Im so pleased she heard Lucas maybe it will help her deal with everything. Cant wait to read the next parts.
*dW* Posted June 23, 2006 Report Posted June 23, 2006 I have auctually wrote few chapters and Lee Auctually hurts mattie at home.
Penie Posted June 23, 2006 Report Posted June 23, 2006 Wow it is very very good, why is Ric in school? It is fantastic!!!!
lil_tee Posted June 23, 2006 Report Posted June 23, 2006 oohh, nice fic =) My Mattie and Lucas escape....Poor Mattie i wish i could go into the fic and hit Lee a little bit =)
*dW* Posted June 24, 2006 Report Posted June 24, 2006 Matilda had run up to the rocks and decided to just sit there, She felt Happy of what Lucas had said But was so depressed over school and how everyone was treating her she started crying. Someone had put came up behind her and sat down with her and hugged her she looked up and seen it was Lucas. “Lucas What are you doing here?” He Replied “I came to see how you were I seen it all Maddie my heart broke for you im so sorry they did that to you and never going to let them hurt you anymore” He hugged her she started sobbing “ It hurt when they had Touched me and when Lee hit me in Math’s I was in so much pain” Matilda Sobs Lucas couldn’t take it anymore and kissed her she was stunned and then kiss him back “ Lucas I Still love you” Maddie said “I love you to maddie, Im going to help you get through this me and you togother” “Really” She said He Nodded they both start there in Each others Arms for a while then decided to go for a walk. “They went Walking down the road In each others arms talking “Lucas how do you feel about me now that I have these scars? Don’t you think I look disgusting , Lucas was so shocked she even thought that “No Maddie not at all I think your gorgeous doesn’t matter how you look to me you will always look beautiful to me” Matilda was so happy he said that, they started kissing then decided to go home.
Jackieleanne Posted June 24, 2006 Report Posted June 24, 2006 Awww sweet, they are back together. Can't wait for more.
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