>>Emma<< Posted January 10, 2007 Report Posted January 10, 2007 Aww great update Jackie, they are all so sweet, bless little Katie's cotton socks. Please update soon
sevenpuddings Posted January 10, 2007 Report Posted January 10, 2007 Luke is the cutest dad in the world. He was so adorably sweet with Katie, who, in her defence, would probably really feel that way - five is a HUGE number - but guh! Luke was perfect with her. I love the family dynamics you've got going on there, it just always seems to fit into place! And I'm glad Dylan gets to come home! Yay for updates, can't wait to read more!
Jackieleanne Posted January 10, 2007 Report Posted January 10, 2007 Thanks you three im glad that im doing the family thing well.
tasha7905 Posted January 17, 2007 Report Posted January 17, 2007 I totally agree with everyone else, you really do write the family dynamic well. Lucas's reaction to Katie's worries was brilliant you wrote the caring father brilliantly. I cant wait to read more Jackie.
heidikri Posted February 4, 2007 Report Posted February 4, 2007 Great story. Love mattie and luc as parents and married
Jackieleanne Posted June 21, 2007 Report Posted June 21, 2007 Ok sorry for the long long wait I have been so busy. Next chapter is finally here. Chapter 27 “Here we go Dylan home sweet home” I say smiling as Lucas opens the door and making room for me to push the wheelchair inside, “Mummy I’m hungry” he says softly looking up at me as me and Lucas help him from his wheel chair onto the settee, “Ok well daddy will start to cook something now sweetie, and how about we ask grandma and granddad to stop for something as well when they bring your sisters home?” Lucas says to him as I prop some cushions around Dylan wanting to make sure that he is comfy, “Ok daddy” he says “can I watch the cartoons please mummy” he asks me as he rests his head against me, “Sure sweetheart” I say as I turn the tv on with the remote and switch the channel over for him, settling down next to him, “Lucas what are you going to cook?” I ask him, “Well I was thinking that I could do the four of us my speciality while the kiddies can have what they want. What do you want to have Dyl” he asks him as he walks over from the kitchen and messes with our son’s hair, “Chicken nuggets and chips daddy” he says before turning his attention back to the telly, “Lucas” I say softly smiling at him sweetly, “what babe you ok?” he asks me “Yeah I’m fine, just this” I say pulling him down to me for a soft kiss, “Mummy, daddy stop it I can’t see the telly” Dylan moans, I laugh softly and watch as Lucas kisses my protruding stomach softly before kissing me again and walking back to the kitchen. “So sweets when do you find out the babies sexes or are you going to wait again” Mum asks us as me, Lucas, Tony and her sit around the table, Katie and Chloe where outside playing while Lucas had carried Dylan up to bed, “Well” I start looking at Lucas and taking his hand, “We haven’t really talked about that yet” I say, “What do you want to do Mattie?” he asks me taking my hand across the table, “Well I think that this time id like to find out, I know Dylan is eager to get another brother” I say smiling “how about you Luc?” I ask him, “I’d like to find out as well, and god can you imagine if its two girls me and Dyl will be completely overruled” he says sighing sarcastically, “Shut up Luc you love it really” I laugh leaning over to kiss him, “Don’t you two ever stop”
heidikri Posted June 22, 2007 Report Posted June 22, 2007 Great chapter. Matilda and Lucas are so cute together.
shawtyy Posted June 22, 2007 Report Posted June 22, 2007 Loved the chapter, really missed this story! Mattie and Lucas are soo good together.
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