Home and Away Always!!! Posted September 16, 2006 Report Posted September 16, 2006 You know what? I reckon I'm going to adopt kids when I'm older!!
lozzyluvscats Posted September 16, 2006 Report Posted September 16, 2006 lol - i hope i havn't put anyone off having kids. I have no idea what labour is really like, but I imagine it's not a barrel of laughs. Altho if I had Jack there to keep my mind off things... Update coming v. soon I hope. xxx
loobieloo Posted September 16, 2006 Report Posted September 16, 2006 I thought you had updated then you evil thing I allways do that with the fics on here, I think people have replied when they haven't The disappointment Ah wells..... I hope the update is soon lol Edit: and yes you have totally put me off having kids, well my cousin did that too she's pregnant and has had them braxton hicks contractions, they scared the life outta me
-ParaisGal- Posted October 11, 2006 Report Posted October 11, 2006 Is this being continued? Because its great hehe.
lozzyluvscats Posted October 15, 2006 Report Posted October 15, 2006 Hi everyone. I know that this chapter has been a long time in the coming, but I’ve been overloaded with work, and applying to Uni and stuff like that. Plus certain spoilers depressed me for a little while. Anyways, I’ve been really touched by everyone’s comments and asking me to keep going. I especially want to thank Home&AwayGal for her personal message, but thank you to everyone. Chapter eleven Jack opened the door to their home, and then went back to put his arm round Martha, as she carefully removed their son from the car. “Welcome home,” Jack proudly told his son. “I can’t believe he’s still asleep!” Martha said. “I bet that won’t last for long,” Jack remarked. Jack guided Martha into the living room, and she gently sat down on the couch, still holding her tiny son. “What do you think of your new home Chris?” Martha asked the baby, gently stroking his cheek as he sleepily opened his eyes, yawning. Martha looked up at Jack to see a massive grin on his face. “What?” she asked him. “I don’t know,” Jack said rubbing the back of his neck, “I just…everything’s so…” “Jack Holden, at a loss for words. Well I never,” Martha laughed. Jack laughed. “I bet that won’t last for long,” he replied, echoing his earlier words. Martha looked at him seriously for a moment, “I know how you feel.” Jack smiled and sat down next to his wife. He put his finger into the grasp of his tiny baby boy, and wrapped his other arm around Martha. “How long do you think it’ll be before the relatives invade?” Jack asked. “Well we’ve been home for nearly ten minutes already, so my guess is about twenty to thirty seconds,” Martha replied. Martha passed Chris over to Jack, who happily held his son in his arms. “Well at least if they come over now, he’s nice and quiet.” Jack said. “Oh no, they’ll time it just right, so that he’s shrieking the neighbourhood down probably.” “You wouldn’t be that awkward, would you Chris?” Jack asked him, as he jiggled him in his arms.” “I’m not so sure of that,” Martha smiled. “But he’s a Holden boy.” Jack said. “Exactly,” Martha quipped. “But you love Holden men,” Jack replied grinning. “I didn’t say he wasn’t gonna be a heart breaker,” Martha smiled. I’m sorry it’s not very long, but hopefully I’ll get back into the swing of things and my chapters will get longer again. Love to you all. Lozzy xxx
Tasha Posted October 15, 2006 Report Posted October 15, 2006 Cute chapter. Loved it. Awww...Baby Chris Jack and Martha are so sweet Please update soon
>>Emma<< Posted October 15, 2006 Report Posted October 15, 2006 I came on here and if I'm honest I didn't expect an update but to my delight there is one and it doesn't matter how long it was because I now know that this is gonna carry on!!!! :D Please update ASAP, this is so good its fabby!!! Em xx
xsianx Posted October 15, 2006 Report Posted October 15, 2006 I love Holden men! lol or Jack Holden in particular Cute chapter. Update soon.
ldscott Posted October 16, 2006 Report Posted October 16, 2006 Great chapter, Please update again soon.
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