Crazy In Love

[puja]

Really sweet update!

Have a nice holiday; hope you come back with more fab ideas for this fic!

[xsianx]

Aww....That chapter was

Looking forward to the next update

Have an amazing time on your hols

[beckyboo]

That was amazing more soon please!!!!!!!!!!!! xx

[loobieloo]

I was just wondering are you going to carry on with this fic? i really like it please do comtinue x

[lozzyluvscats]

Hi loobieloo, thanks for that. I've been really snowed under with school work recently, because (typically) I've left it until the last minute.

Lots of people have written really nice reviews, and you've asked me to carry on, which is really sweet!!!

I do love this story, so I'm gonna hopefully write another chapter this weekend.

Thanks for all the reviews - they mean A LOT to me.

Lozzy xxx

[loobieloo]

Yey!!! I am sooo glad you are continueing this fic, I absolutely love it!!

Hehe I allways leave my schoolwork to the last minute too and its really annoying cause you only notice how much you actually have to do when you finally get round to doing it

I know what you mean when you say the reviews mean alot, cause on my fic I love it when people show their appriciation to my hard work for taking the time to write it, so I allways make sure I comment when I read other peoples and you deserve all the good coments cause this is fab!

[lozzyluvscats]

Loobieloo – you’re so sweet!!!

Hi guys, I’m back. Several ideas have been buzzing round my head, but I’ve been so snowed under with work, that I didn’t have time to get them out. Anyways, thanks for the brilliant comments, and for loobieloo for asking me to keep going. In fact I’ve written another long chapter (I nearly forgot how much I love writing this story!) I hope you enjoy…

Chapter seven

Martha was now six months pregnant, and currently discovering that trying to tidy up the house was no easy feat when you had a rather large bump. Finally defeated Martha flopped down on the couch.

“I suppose Jack will have to tidy up for once,” she said aloud, and then laughed as the baby kicked.

“You’re right, that’ll never happen. Seems like you know you’re Daddy already.”

Just then the phone rang.

Grumbling to herself because she had only just sat down, and getting up was taking her longer and longer these days, a fact that seemed to amuse Jack, Martha slowly pushed herself up, and picked up the phone.

“Hello.”

“Is this Mrs Holden?”

“Yes.”

“Mrs Holden, I’m sorry to tell you that Jack’s been shot. I’m sorry but he didn’t make it. Jack died 30 minutes ago.”

Martha dropped the phone instantly and stood frozen in shock. She felt sick and numb. Tears streamed down Martha’s face.

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Dom hung up the phone and stepped out of the phone box. Tormenting Ric had just reached a sick new level. Dom was enjoying this, and as he saw Tony pass by, he couldn’t resist carrying the prank further.

“Tony!” Dom shouted running up to him.

Tony looked around, not really recognising the man running towards him.

“I’m Dom – I work with Ric. He’s pointed you out to me before.”

“Oh right,” Tony smiled at him, but something about this guy made him uneasy.

In actual fact, Dom had been spying on Ric, which had led him to find out who Martha was, and in turn Jack and his family.

“Look, I’m sorry I’m the one to tell you, but there’s some police people looking for you. It’s about Jack. He’s dead.”

Utter fear enveloped Tony’s heart. It couldn’t be true.

“I don’t believe you,” Tony told him.

“Look I’m sorry mate, but it is. There was, um, an incident at he garage where I work. That’s how I know about it.”

Tony put his hand up to his mouth, and a single tear escaped tracing a path down his cheek. He ran off home to phone the police and find out if Dom was telling the truth.

Dom smirked to himself, although his grin quickly faded at the sight of Tony’s heartbreak. For some reason this prank didn’t feel as good as he thought it would. With a bad feeling in the pit of his stomach, he strolled towards the beach, frowning.

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Martha was crying uncontrollably now. She backed up against the wall shaking her head, muttering “no, it’s not true”, over and over again.

When her back hit the solid wall, losing the little strength she had left, she slid down to the floor.

Her crying became more and more hysterical, until she couldn’t breathe properly.

Her breaths were coming out in harsh gasps and she was clutching her chest.

Kim walked up to the front door and knocked.

“Hello,” he called out. “Jack, Martha? Anyone home?”

He was just about to turn and leave, after no one came to the door, when he heard Martha’s crying.

He found the fron door unlocked and walked in to find Martha crying hysterically on the floor, struggling to breathe.

Kim rushed over and dropped to his knees.

“Martha, what’s wrong?”

Martha looked up at him with red, swollen eyes, gasping for breath.

“Ok Martha, I think you’re having a panic attack. It’s ok, just try and take deep breaths for me.”

Kim placed his hand on Martha’s arm, and grabbed his phone. He tried calling Rachel but she wasn’t answering.

“Ok Martha, I’ve got to find Rachel.”

Martha shook her head at him; she didn’t want him to leave her alone.

“I don’t want to leave you alone, but I don’t know what to do. I’ll be right back, I promise.”

Kim got up and ran out of the house.

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As Tony was running back to his house he crashed into someone.

“Whoa there, easy Dad.”

Tony looked up to see Jack looking concernedly at him.

“Jack,” Tony whispered, before crushing his son in a hug.

Jack pulled back, “What’s wrong?” he asked puzzled.

“I thought you were dead,” Tony told his son.

“What?” Jack exclaimed.

At that moment Kim came running towards them.

“Jack, Tony, I think Martha’s having a panic attack, I need to find Rachel.”

Kim had barely finished speaking before Jack was sprinting towards his house.

Tony was quick to follow, and Kim had barely got down the road, before he saw Rachel walking towards him.

“Hey, I was just coming to join you visiting Jack and Martha.”

“I think Martha’s having a panic attack,” Kim shot out.

Rachel’s face instantly turned to worry, and she ran to Jack and Martha’s house. Kim tried to catch his breath before following.

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Rachel ran in to the house, to see Jack on the floor holding a hysterical Martha’s hands, and Tony rummaging around the kitchen.

“I need a paper bag,” Rachel said.

“Got one,” Tony immediately announced.

“Good work,” Rachel replied as she took the paper bad and handed it to Martha.

“Ok Martha, I want you to hold this over your mouth and try to take deep breaths for me.”

Martha did as she was told.

“I want you to look at Jack. Just concentrate on him, and that should help to calm you down.”

Martha looked at Jack, who was stroking her hand reassuringly.

“Come on Martha, deep breaths,” said Jack and he took long, deep breaths so that Martha could copy him.

Eventually Martha’s breathing got back to normal.

“Good girl,” said Rachel stroking Martha’s hair and removing the paper bag.

Jack kissed the top of Martha’s head and then hugged her tightly.

Martha was overjoyed at seeing Jack alive and clung onto him for dear life.

When they eventually pulled apart, Martha thanked Rachel and Kim.

“No problem,” Kim replied.

“What got you in such a state?” Rachel asked concerned for her friend.

“Let me guess, someone told you Jack was dead?” Tony interjected.

Martha nodded.

“What?” Kim asked.

“I want to know who the hell’s going round telling my family that I’ve died,” shouted Jack angrily.

“It was that guy Dom who told me,” replied Tony.

“I just got a phone call, and I dropped the phone before anyone could say who it was,” Martha said.

“I think I need to have a word with this Dom person,” Jack said.

Martha felt Jack tense up.

“Not now, please, can’t you deal with it later?”

Jack looked at Martha with concern.

“I want to kill this guy as much as you, but I don’t have the energy.”

“Panic attacks can take a lot out of you, especially when you’re six months pregnant. You need to rest,” Rachel told her.

“I’ll be fine, I just need to sit on the couch for a little while. You three will stay won’t you?”

“Of course we will, love,” Tony said.

Jack helped Martha onto the couch, positioning himself next to her so that he could put his arms around her, and the five of them sat around chatting.

I was going to just post the first section as a teaser, but I thought that I couldn’t possibly be that cruel and let you think that Jack had died for very long. This Dom thing’s gonna be resolved next chapter as you know I like to keep my favourite couple happy.

[beckyboo]

hey hun ive missed this fic soo much

Absolutely good chapter!!!!!!!!!!

Oh my god poor Mac lol!!!!!!!!

xxxxx

[-lolly-]

YAY an update!! I missed this fic

That was a great chapter when it said Jack was dead i was like WHAT and i had to re read that but then i read down the chapter and noticed it was a joke i was like phew!

Can't wait for another update.

[xsianx]

Domonic!!!!!!!!!!!!! How can you be so cruel to a sixth month pregnant women?!?. Aww! Yay Marthas ok.

I'm glad you update I missed this fic!! hope you don't leave it too long before you update again but then again theres no rush