shawtyy Posted August 28, 2006 Report Posted August 28, 2006 I was going to just post the first section as a teaser, but I thought that I couldn’t possibly be that cruel and let you think that Jack had died for very long. This Dom thing’s gonna be resolved next chapter as you know I like to keep my favourite couple happy. Yeh it would have been really cruel if you did that! Update soon I love this fic its fantastic!
Home and Away Always!!! Posted August 28, 2006 Report Posted August 28, 2006 Hey i'm a new member and still trying to figure out how to work it all, so plez forgive me if somethings wrong or i stuff something up!! This story is AWESOME!! Out of all the Martha and Jack fan fics I've read, this one takes the cake!! Sorry to all the other authors but it does. I luv how happy it is cuz i believe that they havn't had much happiness lately when i started reading this i was till a guest and now uve finally updated it!! its great!! But the beginning of the chapter scared me! my fave chapters were the one where they were dancing at night and when she had a nightmare and he was soo gorgeous, i want my own Jack!!! Oh and a Lucas. But seriously, ur writing is awesome!! U should b proud!
-ParaisGal- Posted August 28, 2006 Report Posted August 28, 2006 Well, welcome Home and Away Always. Someone will always point you in the right direction, never fear. And keep going with this fic mate, it's great!
lozzyluvscats Posted August 28, 2006 Report Posted August 28, 2006 Wow - your comments are amazing. I'm glad that I decided to keep going with this fic, and that you all seem pleased with that too. Home and away always - what can i say to your comment? Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! Anyways, thank you to you all, and hopefully i'll post the next chapter tomorrow or the day after.
loobieloo Posted August 28, 2006 Report Posted August 28, 2006 Anyways, thank you to you all, and hopefully i'll post the next chapter tomorrow or the day after. Gawd! We have to wait till then! Thats ages away! Can't you just write a little bit for us now *cheesy grin* please!! Lol jke take your time. That was a absolutely fab chapter, I'm sooo glad you are contionun wit this, I thought you had updated when i saw you had replied, I got all excited lol. Im seriously addicted to it x
lozzyluvscats Posted August 29, 2006 Report Posted August 29, 2006 Hope this was quick enough for you (although obviously not quick enough for loobieloo. lol. I'm glad that you're addicted to my fic. ) Everyone, look back at my previous post to see how much i thank you all. Enjoy... Chapter eight It was now late in the evening and Jack and Martha’s guests had left. “I can’t understand why someone would do that. It’s…sick,” Martha practically cried. “Hey, hey, it’s ok, I’m gonna sort this out,” Jack reassured her. “Well I want to be right there when you do!” exclaimed Martha. Jack wanted to protest but he knew that he would never stop Martha from confronting Dom, and after all what right did he have to stop her after Dom put her through such hell. Jack sighed, “Alright, but we’ll confront him together. Plus I think my Dad’s going to want to have a word with him too.” “I think your Dad wants to do more than have a word,” Martha smiled. “So do I” Jack told her. “I was in utter panic when I heard you were having a panic attack, I just can’t imagine what you went through when you thought I was dead.” Martha shuddered, “I still remember that nightmare I had a couple of months ago. I don’t know what I would do without you.” Martha began to cry. Jack pulled her in for a hug, and held her for several minutes. When they pulled apart, Jack brushed away a tear from Martha’s cheek and kissed her lovingly. Martha smiled and kissed Jack back, harder. The kiss soon became passionate, their tongues roaming each other’s mouths. Finally, breathlessly, the kiss ended. “Wow!” Jack breathed. “I may be as fat as a whale, but I’ve still got it!” Martha joked. Jack shook his head at her, laughing. “Fat as a whale? You’re gorgeous, inside and out.” “Well the charm’s certainly coming out tonight,” Martha remarked, standing up. Jack stood up and put his arms around her. “I’ve always got plenty of charm for my beautiful wife,” Jack smiled playfully. “Well I should hope so. I wouldn’t want Jack Holden’s famous charm going to anyone else.” “Never,” Jack whispered, before once again capturing Martha’s mouth in his and leading her into their bedroom. ~#~#~#~#~#~#~#~ The next day, Martha awoke to find that Jack had already gone to work. His shift had started pretty early. Later that morning she popped over to see Robbie and Tash, and she told them about Dom. “I can’t believe this guy!” Robbie exclaimed. “That’s such a horrible thing to do!” Tasha said. “It just makes me so angry,” replied Martha. “Jack’s pretty angry too. He wanted to go see Dom yesterday, but I needed him to stay with me after my panic attack.” “Thank god Kim found you,” Robbie said. “I know, I don’t know what would have happened if he hadn’t.” “Is the baby ok?” asked Tash. “Yeah, Rachel said that everything seemed fine, especially as I didn’t lose consciousness or anything.” Tash went and gave Martha another hug. Martha looked at her watch, “I’ve been here for hours! I better be getting home.” “It was good to see you,” Robbie said. “You guys are still coming over for dinner tomorrow, right?” Martha asked. “Of course!” Tasha replied. “Alright, well I’ll see you then.” Martha gave Tash a hug and said bye to Robbie, and then left. Martha was walking along the beach, rubbing her stomach, lost in her thoughts. Dom was also on the beach, and he spotted Martha. He ran over to her. “Martha!” Martha looked up at the sound of her name. Immediately her feeling of calm was replaced with anger, as she recognised the man calling her. Dom caught up with Martha. “Look Martha, you probably don’t remember me…” “Sure I do, you’re the guy who called me up and told me my husband was dead. That’s a hard thing to forget,” she retorted coldly. She tried to push past him but he held her back. “Let go of me!” she shouted angrily. “Look Martha, I’ve been tormenting Ric for a while now, and it’s been fun, but the prank I pulled on you and Tony, well that went too far.” “You think?” Martha cried out. On the opposite side of the beach Jack and Tony were walking along. “Hey, isn’t that Martha?” Tony asked, spotting Martha and Dom far away. Jack couldn’t make out the guy, but he could see that Martha was uncomfortable, and immediately ran off, with Tony behind him. “Jack!” Martha called out, as Jack reached her. “Who are you?” Jack asked the man rudely, stepping between the man and Martha. “This is the guy that told me you were dead,” Tony told him. “What the hell is wrong with you?” Jack shouted at Dom. “Do you have any idea what you did to Martha and my Dad?” Jack grabbed Dom’s shirt roughly. “I was trying to apologise,” Dom said. “I don’t care!” Jack let go of Dom’s shirt and punched him hard. Dom fell to the ground, his lip bleeding. Jack grabbed his shirt again and pulled him up. “Don’t ever come near my family again!” Jack threatened him, his face mere inches from Dom’s. Dom, snivelling and shaking started crying. “Jack! Enough!” said Tony. Jack threw Dom to the ground. “You disgust me,” Martha told Dom and they walked away, leaving Dom sobbing on the ground. “Do you think he’ll report you?” Tony asked his son. “No, I know his kind. He knows he went too far. I don’t think he’ll bother us again.” “You know if you hadn’t punched him, I probably would have beaten you to it,” Tony admitted. “Or me,” Martha added. Jack smiled at her and kissed her on the forehead. Then he turned to his Dad and patted him on the back. “What do you say we go to the surf club?” Jack said. “Sounds good to me,” Tony replied. Jack put his arm round Martha’s shoulder and the three of them walked down the beach. I'm enjoying writing this story, but hopefully for my next chapter it'll just be Martha and Jack, like the nightmare one and the one where she can't sleep. They're my fave. chapters I think. Love you all, Lozzy xxx
beckyboo Posted August 29, 2006 Report Posted August 29, 2006 omg this is amazing post more very soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 xxxxxxxxx
miss HAA Posted August 29, 2006 Report Posted August 29, 2006 That was a great chapter keep up the good work and update soon
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