shen Posted August 17, 2006 Report Posted August 17, 2006 Great chapter Drew! And i absolutely loved the promo! It is very cool that you spent the time to make one Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read the next few chapters leading up to the heartbreaking, backstabbing, unforgivable, murderous, heartstopping etc etc etc season finale!!! Very excited right now!
ilovahmenawy Posted August 17, 2006 Report Posted August 17, 2006 i cant hear sound on the promo cos my sound aint working can anyone tell me what it says? please
Drew Posted August 18, 2006 Report Posted August 18, 2006 i cant hear sound on the promo cos my sound aint working can anyone tell me what it says? please There's no dialogue in the promo. The first half of the promo is promo music I stole from seven promo's ... Actually not steal, borrow! And the second half of the promo is a song. You can still watch it without the sound, it's just the music gives it 'that' effect
~Lynd~ Posted August 20, 2006 Report Posted August 20, 2006 i cant hear sound on the promo cos my sound aint working can anyone tell me what it says? please There's no dialogue in the promo. The first half of the promo is promo music I stole from seven promo's ... Actually not steal, borrow! And the second half of the promo is a song. You can still watch it without the sound, it's just the music gives it 'that' effect How could you understand that,lol.Blue on blue.Anyway update soon or i'll be forced to talk soaps with you .
Drew Posted August 21, 2006 Report Posted August 21, 2006 Lynd I don't care if we have to talk about soaps. When will the new part comes up? I have no idea. I'm half way through writting the 16th chapter. But I think I may get Holly to finish it off for me...
Drew Posted August 22, 2006 Report Posted August 22, 2006 ^^Thanks This is a bit crappy this update, I rushed through it. CREDITS PREVIOUSLY ON BAY CRUSH Tony’s wife arrived at Summer Bay… TONY: Oh my god! [it’s Katie] KATIE: Tony! TONY: What… What are you doing here!? Leah and Dan’s world was torn apart… LEAH: Guys! I’m sure we could work something out, please! LISA: There’s nothing to work out Leah, she’s our daughter! [Lisa goes to take the baby out of Leah’s arms, Leah begins to cry. Dan hugs her] LISA: We really are sorry for doing this Leah. DAN: Well, we’ll see you later then. JOE: Yeah… Bye guys. [Joe smiles, they walk out the front door, as the door closes, Leah’s cry becomes louder] *** LEAH: Dan, we need her back! We’re getting her back no matter what! [Leah begins to cry, Dan hugs her] DAN: Well what do you suggest we do? [Leah pulls away from him] LEAH: We kidnap her. [Dan looks shocked] Amanda’s world crashed around her by karma… LADY: And by the power invested by me, I now pronounce you man and wife. [Macca smiles] You may kiss your bride. [Macca and Amanda kiss. Macca pulls away and whispers into Amanda’s ear] MACCA: What goes around comes around, baby. [Macca smiles, Amanda doesn’t look happy] Tasha struggled to get out of Mamma Rose’s twisted world… [Tasha picks up the baby and slowly walks away from the farm. The baby begins to cry. Mamma Rose, who is near the lake hears the cry and turns around] TASHA: Sh! Please be quiet Rebecca! [Mamma Rose runs towards Tasha’s tent and opens it. She notices that Tasha is gone] MAMMA ROSE: Who let her escape!? [Mamma Rose looks around the tent] Who!? [People slowly begin to get out] MITCH: What’s wrong? MAMMA ROSE: Someone has let Tasha out! MITCH: What!? [Charity runs up to them] CHARITY: What happened!? MITCH: It’s Tasha, she’s escaped. MAMMA ROSE: Who let her out!? Who? [she says, scanning everybody she looks at] If she tells the police anything all of you will be responsible for what you have done! Now go! Find her! We must not rest if the chosen one runs free! [People begin to run off slowly. Tasha looks scared] And Irene’s world finally came to an end… COREY: I told you I’ll be back to help you end this nightmare… And I’ve found the answer. [Corey pulls out a gun, Irene looks shocked] Don’t worry… I’m not going to harm you. [Corey slides the gun towards Irene] It’s to help you end this nightmare. To end you of your misery! [irene slowly picks up the gun and looks at it. Irene slowly moves the gun towards her head] This is it Irene. The end has come. [Corey says smiling] This is it!!! [From outside you hear a gunshot go off] Or did it…? EPISODE SIXTEEN: Bang, Bang. You Shot Me Down THE MENTAL HOSPITAL-IRENE’S ROOM [The window within the door has a hole in it from a bullet. The room is still totally dark. Slowly and softly you can hear someone breathing. Irene is still holding the gun, crying] IRENE: Oh my god. [irene looks over to Corey, who has been shot dead] Oh no! [irene just sits there. Not knowing what to do. She quickly gets up and puts the gun under her bed. A doctor races in] DOCTOR: What happened!? [Noticing Corey’s body] Irene!? TWO MINUTES AGO [irene is sitting in a corner, Corey is slowly walking up to her] COREY: It’s ok Irene. I told you everything will be ok. IRENE: Leave me alone! COREY: I told you I’ll be back to help you end this nightmare… And I’ve found the answer. [Corey pulls out a gun, Irene looks shocked] Don’t worry… I’m not going to harm you. [Corey slides the gun towards Irene] It’s to help you end this nightmare. To end you of your misery! [irene slowly picks up the gun and looks at it] You wont be a prisoner in this room, you will be free if you end it all now! [irene slowly moves the gun towards her head] This is it Irene. The end has come. [Corey says smiling] This is it!!! [irene’s cry gets louder, Corey is smiling. She then quickly shots Corey to the floor. Irene sits in shock] IRENE: Oh god! [irene looks at the gun in her hand] DOCTOR: What was that!? [You can hear him in the background. Irene quickly shots the window in the door, to make it look someone shot Corey from the outside] IRENE: Oh my god. [irene looks over to Corey] Oh no! [irene just sits there. Not knowing what to do. She quickly gets up and puts the gun under her bed. A doctor races in] DOCTOR: What happened!? [Noticing Corey’s body] Irene!? IRENE: I don’t know, one second we were talking the next some man shot him from the outside! [she says terrified. The doctor runs into the hallway] DOCTOR: Can we get some help here please!? THE FARM-OUTSIDE [People are running everywhere. Mamma Rose is sitting next to the fire, just staring into it, Charity walks up to her] CHARITY: What are we going to do if we don’t find her? MAMMA ROSE: Pray Charity… Pray this doesn’t end in tragedy. CHARITY: What if faith isn’t enough to get us out of this mess? [Mamma Rose gives her an evil smirk] MAMMA ROSE: Then we have no choice but to sacrifice the ones that created this mess! CHARITY: What? MAMMA ROSE: We cannot go down my child. The Lord’s won’t accept us if we leave this earth how we did. CHARITY: You’re not making sense. MAMMA ROSE: Just go find the child Charity! Go! [Charity runs off. In the distance Tasha is watching] THE MENTAL HOSPITAL-IRENE’S ROOM [irene is sitting on the bed, watching Corey’s body being covered up by doctors, a doctor walks over to her] DOCTOR: How are you feeling Irene? IRENE: I just want to go home… I don’t like it here, it’s dangerous… Look what happened to him! [staring back at Corey’s covered body] DOCTOR: Did you get any glimpse of the man that shot Doctor Corey? IRENE: No, I didn’t even see anyone at the door it happened so quickly. DOCTOR: Would you like me to call your family? IRENE: No… I just want to go home… Please, I feel fine! [The doctor stares into space and thinks] DOCTOR: I’ll keep you here over night… Then tomorrow we’ll see ok. [The doctor weakly smiles, so does Irene. The doctor gets up and walks towards the door] IRENE: Thank you doctor! [irene smiles, the doctor walks out. Irene stares deathly towards Corey’s body as it’s being picked up] THE HUNTER HOUSE-OUTSIDE [Continued from before] TONY: Well? What are you doing here? KATIE: Isn’t it obvious Tony? I came back to be with you, Jack and Lucas. Too be a family again. Like how we always planned when I went away. [Tony still looks confused but also upset] TONY: Katie they said along time ago when you were put away that there’s a definite chance that you wont be back! That you’ll be there for life, your condition was that bad. KATIE: But they also said there’s a chance that I could get better… A small chance, but it worked. [Katie says smiling] TONY: Katie… A lot has changed since you have been gone… Too much has changed that we can’t go back to the way things were. [Katie looks upset and confused] KATIE: So… Where do we go from here? [They just stare at each other] THE FARM- OUTSIDE [The baby begins to cry again] TASHA: No, please Rebecca. Be quiet! [The baby screams louder] MITCH: I’ve found her! [in the distance. Tasha begins to run. A few people chase after her] Hurry, quick! TASHA: Oh please help me! [Mitch grabs onto Tasha] Get off of me! MITCH: Stay calm Tasha. [someone takes the baby out of Tasha’s arms] TASHA: Hey, give her back! That’s my baby. [Mamma Rose comes running towards the crowd] MAMMA ROSE: Thank you Mitch! Thank you! [Mamma Rose looks at Tasha] What were you hoping to accomplish by doing this? [she gives her an evil smirk] Who freed you? [Charity and Tasha look at each other] Who? TASHA: It was Mitch. MITCH: What!? [Mamma Rose looks at Mitch] I never let her go! TASHA: You’re lying! You said you helping me escape will hopefully bring the Believers down! [Mamma Rose gives Mitch a very dark death stare] MITCH: I never said any of that! I didn’t even help her escape! CHARITY: But you were the keeper of the key! How else would she of got it? [Mamma Rose shakes her head] MAMMA ROSE: I’m sorry Mitchell… [Mamma nods towards two men, they get a hold of Mitch] MITCH: Mamma Rose! I didn’t do anything! MAMMA ROSE: I’m sorry my dear child… But whoever tries to bring us down… We’ll bring them down with us. [The two men begin to walk back to the tents] And you my child… You have no idea what you are doing to yourself… Take her back to her tent. [Two other men drag Tasha towards the camp site] TASHA: No let me go! Please! [Mamma Rose looks at the rest of the Believers] MAMMA ROSE: I hope this is a lesson for you… Never cross me like Mitchell or Tasha have done… Otherwise you’ll pay. [Mamma Rose walks off. Charity doesn’t look happy] THE HUNTER HOUSE-LIVING AREA [Lucas and Matilda are watching TV. Tony walks in and Beth walks in from the kitchen] BETH: I was about to send out a search party for you. [beth smiles and kisses Tony, Tony smiles weakly] TONY: There was some rubbish on the lawn, just cleaning it up. BETH: Oh, ok then. [beth smiles. From outside the kitchen window, Katie is watching them] THE HOLDEN HOUSE-BATHROOM [Kit is banging on the door, it’s now morning] KIT: Martha hurry up I’m going to be sick! [in the bathroom you can hear the toilet flush. Martha comes out, she doesn’t look well. Kit runs in, you can hear her throw up. Kim walks in] KIM: Are you ok? MARTHA: Yeah, I just don’t feel to well, same with Kit. We must have a virus or something. KIM: A virus? [Kim laughs. Martha looks like she’s going to be sick again] MARTHA: Oh no! Kit open up! [Martha says banging on the door] THE PATTERSON HOUSE- LOUNGE ROOM [Dan is finishing getting ready, Leah walks in] LEAH: Are you ready? DAN: Leah are you sure we’re doing the right thing? LEAH: Dan, I’m positive. [They kiss] DAN: I hope you know what you’re getting us into. THE HUNTER HOUSE-LIVING AREA [beth is trying on her wedding dress with Matilda. Tony is about to walk in] MATILDA: Hey! You can’t see the bride’s dress before the big day! [Matilda says pushing Tony back out the door] TONY: Oh why not? [Tony says with a grin. From the front yard, Katie is watching them] BETH: I’ll be done in half an hour ok! TONY: Righto. [Tony walks towards the car. He sees Katie] What are you still doing here? KATIE: You’re getting married? [Tony doesn’t know what to say] Tony, we’re married! We have a family! How can you do that to us? TONY: We’re not married anymore… Didn’t you get the papers? KATIE: What papers? TONY: A few years after you went away… I got some divorce papers drawn up… [both Tony and Katie look sad] KATIE: What? TONY: At the time, I thought this was it, you will never get out, what future will we have… KATIE: I can’t believe you did that… So that’s it? We’re not married anymore? [Tony doesn’t know what to say] Thanks for letting me know! Is there anything else I should know that’s happened since my departure? TONY: Um… There is something… But… I don’t think I should tell you… Just yet anyway… KATIE: Tony just say it. What else is going to effect me? TONY: Your boys… KATIE: What about them? They’re ok aren’t they? TONY: Of course they are… They just think that… KATIE: What Tony? TONY: Katie I don’t know how to say this, but they think you’re dead. [Katie looks shocked] When the doctors said you wouldn’t make a full recovery, I couldn’t tell them that their mother was locked away in a mental hospital for the rest of her life- KATIE: So you told them I died!? Oh my god! [Katie begins to walk towards the Hunter house] TONY: Hey, hey! Where are you going? [Grabbing onto Katie’s arm] KATIE: I want to see them! TONY: Are you crazy? They think you’re dead! How do you think they’re going to feel when you walk in there? All this time they think their mother has been dead, Katie! KATIE: Well you should of thought about the backfire before you told my sons that I was dead! [Katie tries to keep walking towards the house] TONY: You’re not going in there! KATIE: They’re my boys Tony! TONY: And you’re their dead mother! I’ve built a relationship of trust with them… Don’t you dare destroy that! KATIE: What about your fiancée? Don’t you think she should have a right to know that your wife is not dead after all? TONY: Don’t you bring Beth into this! [Katie shakes her head] KATIE: I’m going to do everything possible Tony to get my boys back… Even if that means stopping the wedding. [Katie walks off] TONY: Don’t come here again Katie. KATIE: You can’t stop me Tony… No body can. [Katie smiles and walks off. Tony looks stressed] THE MENTAL HOSPITAL-IRENE’S ROOM [The doctor walks in. Irene is sitting on her bed, a suitcase next to her has been all packed] DOCTOR: Irene… You can go now. [irene smiles] Would you like us to call your family to pick you up? IRENE: No, no. I’ll get a taxi. I want to surprise them. [irene smiles and begins to walk out with her suitcase] DOCTOR: Oh, Irene… Police would be wanting to question you about what happened with Corey… [irene looks scared] But don’t worry, just tell them what you told me and it will all be ok. IRENE: Yeah… It will be. [irene walks off] THE HOLDEN HOUSE-LIVING AREA [Kit is lying on the lounge, not looking well. In the background you can here a toilet flush. Martha walks in looking sick] MARTHA: I feel like I’m dying! KIT: I know… We probably have some disease that’s going to make us die! MARTHA: Oh don’t say it like that. [Martha sits next to Kit] KIT: I know it’s a coincidence that we’re both sick Martha… But… MARTHA: But what? KIT: I… Martha… I think I’m pregnant. [Martha looks shocked, Kit looks upset] MARTHA: What? Are you sure? KIT: Most likely yeah… I haven’t exactly stayed on the pill and… MARTHA: Why don’t you go take a test? KIT: Yeah… I could do that… [They smile at each other] THE FARM-TASHA’S TENT [Tasha is lying down, chained up to where she was before. She looks sad and upset. Charity walks in] CHARITY: Tash… I’m so sorry about last night. TASHA: Sorry? You told her that I escaped? CHARITY: No, it’s not like that… I just feel bad that I got your hopes up. You were so close, but then… I’m glad you didn’t tell Mamma Rose it was me that let you escape. TASHA: How’s Mitch? CHARITY: I wouldn’t know. I haven’t seen him. TASHA: I feel so bad, I shouldn’t of done that to him- CHARITY: Tash, he’s the one that kidnapped you. TASHA: And so did you, remember? CHARITY: I know… I’m sorry… But whose the one that’s helping you escape? [Tasha says nothing, she gets upset. Charity hugs her] It will be ok… I will get you out of here… Though we have to think of something fast. [Tasha looks confused] TASHA: What do you mean? Charity? What’s going on? CHARITY: Mamma Rose has planned a ritual tonight… To clear your sole of your sins… So you can rest in eternal heaven… TASHA: What!? CHARITY: Just stay calm ok. TASHA: Charity? What does that mean? [Charity walks out] Charity!? Charity! AMANDA’S MANSION-LOUNGEROOM [Dan and Leah walk up to the front door, Leah is holding VJ. Ryan is next to Dan] DAN: So tell me exactly how is this going to work? [Dan rings the doorbell] LEAH: We just keep an eye on them… Hopefully when there is no movement we rush in and take her- DAN: It’s not going to be easy Leah. They live in a small apartment, we’re going to run into them! LEAH: Dan! It will work out. Trust me! [Amanda opens the door and smiles] Hi Amanda. AMANDA: Leah… Dan… I wasn’t expecting you. DAN: We just need you to take care of the boys for a few nights. Would that be a problem? AMANDA: No, not a problem at all. [Amanda smiles. Dan notices the wedding band on Amanda’s finger] DAN: Amanda… Is that a wedding band? [Amanda’s smile turns to a frown, Leah looks shocked as she looks at Amanda’s finger. VJ and Ryan run in] Don’t tell me you married him! AMANDA: Dan, I can explain! DAN: Leah, take the boys upstairs for me please. [Leah doesn’t know what to say, she takes the boys upstairs] What the hell are you playing!? AMANDA: Dan, please! DAN: Why the hell would you two get married!? Are you insane Amanda? Wait! That’s a stupid question to ask, how rude of me! AMANDA: Dan, please! You have to listen to me! [Amanda is getting upset] DAN: What’s there to listen to!? You got married for crying out loud! To Macca! [Macca walks in from the kitchen] MACCA: Dan… What are you doing here? AMANDA: Um Dan just dropped off the boys… They’re going to stay with us for awhile. MACCA: Um, ok then. [Macca just stands there] DAN: Macca, could you please excuse us. I need a word with Amanda. MACCA: Um, sure. [Macca walks up to Amanda and whispers into her ear] Mention anything about the situation… Bang! [Macca walks off, Amanda looks like she’s about to cry] DAN: Alright, I’m listening… What’s going on? [Amanda hugs Dan] AMANDA: Help me Dan! [Amanda says whispering] DAN: What? AMANDA: Help me! DAN: Amanda, what are you talking about? [Macca is listening in the kitchen, scared that Amanda is going to tell he walks back in] MACCA: Amanda, can I see you for a second? DAN: Yeah, take her. We’ve had our chat. [Amanda begins to cry] AMANDA: Dan, please. DAN: Leah! [Calling out to her] I’ll see you two later. [Dan walks towards the door, Amanda and Macca look at each other] THE BEACH HOUSE-LIVING AREA [belle is reading a magazine, Irene walks in] IRENE: Surprise! [belle looks up] BELLE: Oh my god Irene! [belle runs up to her and they hug] What are you doing home? Did they let you go? IRENE: Yes. [irene says smiling] BELLE: Oh that’s so good! [They hug again. Kirsty walks down from the stairs, Irene notices her] IRENE: Kirsty! KIRSTY: Irene! [They run and give each other a hug] IRENE: What on earth are you doing here girly? KIRSTY: Um… Long story… Kane was caught… Had no where else to go… IRENE: Oh, sweetie. I’m so sorry. [They hug] KIRSTY: Thanks Irene. IRENE: It will be ok. KIRSTY: Yeah. BELLE: So Irene, why are you back? Why did they send you back home? IRENE: Corey… BELLE: Corey? IRENE: I was right to begin with, that flippn’ nut head was poisoning me again. BELLE: How did they find out? IRENE: He was murdered. KIRSTY: What how? IRENE: Some person just shot a bullet right through my room which was pierced through his left lung. BELLE: Wow! KIRSTY: Are you ok? IRENE: Yeah… I’m fine. [irene weakly smiles and looks around] So, where are the others? BELLE: Robbie and Tash? IRENE: Yeah, where are they? [Kirsty and Belle look at each other] THE HUNTER HOUSE-LIVING AREA [Matilda and Beth are talking about the wedding still] BETH: I spoke to Scott, he and Hayley are arriving the morning of the wedding. MATILDA: Why so late? BETH: That’s the earliest flight they could book with such short notice. MATILDA: Oh ok…Well Henry is meant to be coming the night before. BETH: You spoke to him? MATILDA: Yeah, this morning… He didn’t want to come, but I talked him into coming. BETH: Why… Why didn’t he want to come? MATILDA: Mum, he doesn’t even know Tony. You’re marrying into a family he doesn’t even know. I think he’s going to feel a little isolated. BETH: No, that’s silly! [Tony walks in] Hi darling. TONY: Hey. [Tony doesn’t sound good. Beth notices] BETH: Tony, is everything alright… You’ve seemed weird since the wedding yesterday. TONY: Have I? Everything is ok… Seriously. [beth kisses Tony] BETH: Well, if you’re sure. [Tony walks away, he doesn’t look to happy] THE BEACH HOUSE-LIVING AREA [Kirsty is sitting on a seat, Belle and Irene are standing] IRENE: What do you mean Tasha’s been kidnapped!? BELLE: They came Irene! Those people she was with- IRENE: The Believers!? BELLE: They came for her and the baby. IRENE: You got to be kidding me! Are the police even doing anything about it? KIRSTY: They’ve been trying to locate them since the kidnapping. IRENE: Oh, is that the best they can do? BELLE: Well they searched the place they used to be at, but it was just a bunch of back packers. IRENE: And Robbie! The whole world has gone mad! I should go and see him! KIRSTY: Irene… He doesn’t even remember us… He doesn’t even remember Tash… There’s no use visiting him. IRENE: I can’t believe this. I was gone for a few weeks and look what happens! LISA AND JOE’S APARTMENT- OUTSIDE [Outside the apartment block, and in the car, Leah and Dan are spying on Joe and Lisa] DAN: Leah, we’ve been sitting here for two hours! This is ridiculous! LEAH: Dan. I’m not leaving here until we get her back. DAN: But is this the best way to get her back? We should of at least tried our chances in court. LEAH: What’s the use of that if we know they’re going to side with the birth parents? [They say nothing for awhile. Leah gets out of the car] DAN: Where are you going? LEAH: To go get the baby. DAN: Leah- You’re going to get caught! LEAH: Dan! Are you with me or not!? [They just stare at each other, Leah keeps on walking, Dan looks like he has no choice, he follows Leah] THE FARM [it’s now nighttime. Tasha’s eyes are red from crying. Mamma Rose walks in] MAMMA ROSE: Tasha… My sweet dear child… How you turned out like this I do not know. TASHA: I’m not your child! [Mamma Rose smiles] MAMMA ROSE: All people of Believers are children of mine. TASHA: I’m not a Believer anymore! MAMMA ROSE: Yes, you’re right. You’re not a Believer anymore. You have lost your ways… And you have lost your faith… That’s why we must end this madness. TASHA: Madness? What madness? You tied me down with chains! That’s madness! MAMMA ROSE: Only to help you see reality! TASHA: Let me out of these chains and I’ll show you some reality! [Grinning through her teeth, Mamma Rose smiles] MAMMA ROSE: You’re only making this matter worse for yourself Tasha. TASHA: Just let me go! MAMMA ROSE: [she sighs] We will set you free Tasha. The hour we rid you of your sins… The hour we let you enter eternal heaven… TASHA: What are you talking about? [Mamma Rose gets up] MAMMA ROSE: You’ve lost your way dear child. Your purpose has been fulfilled. You’ve given us a child. If this is the way you want to treat us then we have no use for you anymore. [Mamma Rose begins to walk out] TASHA: Wait! What does that mean!? MAMMA ROSE: All will end in your life Tasha! It’s too late… Nothing can save you now! [she walks out. Tasha begins to cry heavily] TASHA: Let me out! Please! LISA AND JOE’S APARTMENT- LIVING AREA- OUTSIDE [Leah and Dan sneak in] DAN: Leah, this is wrong. LEAH: Will you be quiet!? [Leah walks into the living room and sees the baby in a cot, she picks it up] Hey there bubs! [Leah hugs the baby] DAN: Ok Leah, lets go! [Leah walks out quickly. Dan shuts the door] *** [Dan and Leah are running to the car so they don’t get caught. They get in and Dan speeds off] THE HOLDEN HOUSE-BATHROOM [Kit walks into the bathroom with a box. It’s a pregnancy test. She opens it, looks at it and sighs. She looks at herself in the mirror, then closes the door behind her] THE BEACH HOUSE-IRENE’S ROOM [irene is sleeping, she’s dreaming. In the dream she’s back in her hospital room. Ken is there] KEN: I knew you would do this Irene, I knew you would beat this! IRENE: Ken? [Ken smiles] KEN: It’s all over now Irene. [irene doesn’t know what to do. She turns to look at the bed] ***FLASHBACK*** [irene sees herself lying there with Corey by her side, it’s a flashback from a year ago] IRENE: Oh my god it’s you! [Corey smiles] Help! Please! ***DREAM*** [irene looks back at Ken] Irene: It’s happening all over again. KEN: No, it’s not. [irene looks at her chair] ***FLASHBACK*** [irene drinks the cloudy water and chocks. She throws it at the wall and cries] IRENE: Please! Stop poisoning me! ***DREAM*** [irene looks back at Ken] IRENE: No, it is. It’s happening again. [irene looks back at her bed] ***FLASHBACK*** [irene is next to her bed, with Chloe by her side and doctors in front of her] CHLOE: Oh it’s happening alright Irene! It’s all because of you! You stuffed up your once chance of freedom! IRENE: No! CHLOE: You should have been more careful! IRENE: Leave me alone! [Corey and the doctors look at each other, the doctor nods at Corey, Corey smiles and exits] CHLOE: I’m going to hate you for this Irene! ***DREAM*** [irene looks away and begins to cry] KEN: It is over Irene… You have to trust me! Nothing is coming for you ever again! [irene looks at the door] ***FLASHBACK*** COREY:[irene slowly moves the gun towards her head] This is it Irene. The end has come. [Corey says smiling] This is it!!! [irene’s cry gets louder, Corey is smiling. She then quickly shots Corey to the floor. Irene sits in shock] IRENE: Oh god! [irene looks at the gun in her hand] DOCTOR: What was that!? [You can hear him in the background. Irene quickly shots the window in the door, to make it look someone shot Corey from the outside] IRENE: Oh my god. [irene looks over to Corey] Oh no! ***DREAM*** [irene begins to cry] KEN: Believe me now? [Ken smiles] IRENE: As much as I want to believe this… This is not the end… There’s more to come. I know it. [irene looks scared. Ken smiles] The countdown to the final episode has began… 4,3,2,1… Tick, Tock… Bang. Bang. Bang.
Tasha Posted August 22, 2006 Report Posted August 22, 2006 lol at Martha and Kit. Their both pregnant arent they? Martha is just being stubborn and wont take the test. Im happy for Kit though. And Martha's baby is Phil's isnt it? I know i keep saying this, but i just have a feeling, and well with the recent events in Martha's life, its not hard to put two and two together. But i hope for Jack's sack and Marthas and the 'baby's' sake, that the baby is Jack's and not Phils And omg Katie's back. Poor Tony, beth, Luke and Jacky. Kah! How much are you going to pile onto Jack. Please update soon
summer_bay_rules Posted August 22, 2006 Report Posted August 22, 2006 What a great chapter! Can't wait for more, keep it up.
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