summer_bay_rules Posted August 29, 2006 Report Share Posted August 29, 2006 What a great chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sally Posted August 29, 2006 Report Share Posted August 29, 2006 great chapter cant wait to read more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skykat Posted August 30, 2006 Report Share Posted August 30, 2006 Just read all of this and it's taken me about two hours! Great story, can't wait to see what happens. Such a shame home and away never did anything like this. It would have been a great way to kill off some useless characters. Great work though, hope you don't keep us too long for an update... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevkehaa Posted August 30, 2006 Report Share Posted August 30, 2006 I liked the chapter and I'm hoping that Chris en Drew will say they are a couple. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drew Posted August 31, 2006 Report Share Posted August 31, 2006 CREDITS PREVIOUSLY ON BAY CRUSH RIC: You were thinking about abortion? CASSIE: I’m thinking about adoption. *** RIC: You have to think hard about this Cassie. This is serious. CASSIE: I know… But I think it’s the right choice… I need to give this baby up… [someone is watching them from the bushes, they hear a noise] What was that? RIC: What was what? CASSIE: I don’t know… Sounded like someone was following us. [Cassie says looking around, the figure keeps watching which happens to be Mamma Rose. She smiles] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - [You hear a toilet flush in the background. Jack and Tony are standing in the kitchen] TONY: Is she alright mate? JACK: She’s just been sick for a few days. [Martha walks in, so does Beth] BETH: Are you ok love? MARTHA: Yeah. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - CHRIS: Drew… Be honest with me… Are you interested in men? [Drew laughs] *** [Drew and Chris are kissing on the bed] DREW: Oh this is so good to get over someone. [Chris laughs] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - PIPPA: Um, it’s not that much of a surprise. But Chris, I’ve decided that we’re going back home… Tomorrow actually. [Pippa smiles then takes a drink to avoid conflict] CHRIS: What? DREW: Oh. CASSIE: But why? PIPPA: It’s just better this way. [Pippa smiles, gets up and takes her plate to the sink] *** ALF: Are you sure? [Pippa smiles] I’m sorry Pippa, I just think you’re making a stupid decision. PIPPA: Stupid? [Pippa laughs] What’s the real reason Alf? ALF: Nothing… I just want you to stay. [Alf smiles and so does Pippa. He puts his hand on Pippa’s] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - DAN: What are you talking about? MACCA: Ryan… Is not your son Dan. [Macca says smiling] He was never yours. DAN: That’s crazy, of course he’s mine! He has my blood! He’s a Baker! MACCA: Yes! He is a Baker Dan… He’s Peter Baker’s. [Macca says with a cheeky grin] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - TRACEY: Sorry is not good enough Eve! I love you! [Zoe shuts her eyes and cry] You can’t say it back can you? [Zoe shakes her head. Tracey slowly walks out of the room] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - [Dani then notices that the door was left open, Tracey never closed it properly] DANI: Kirsty! [They look at the door] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - LEAH: No, no, no, no, no, no, no! [Rachel holds Leah back. The police car drives off] Noo!!! [The other policeman comes up to Leah and handcuffs her] What are you doing? POLICEMAN: You’re under arrest for kidnapping Mrs. Patterson. LEAH: No don’t! You don’t understand! She was mine! Wouldn’t you do anything to get back the one’s you love? Wouldn’t you? RACHEL: Kim…[Rachel says in a whisper] *** [Rachel begins to go through everything upstairs. She finds what she’s looking for… Dan’s gun. She picks it up and smiles] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - PRIEST: Is there anyone that objects to this union? VOICE: I do! [A female voice from the crowd yelled out. People are looking everywhere and gasping. Tony looks scared. Katie get’s up from the middle of the church and begins to walk down to where everyone is] TONY: No Katie. [Tony whispers to himself] JACK: Mum? [Lucas looks confused, Jack looks upset] LUCAS: Mum? [Hearing what Jack and Lucas said, Beth pulls away from Tony in shock. Tony looks at Katie and she smiles back] EPISODE TWENTY: The Meaning Of Bay Crush, Part ll Living in a small seaside town, where your feelings are buried six feet under, and where your actions take over your heart… Out for revenge, or out for lust… When your hopes, dreams and fantasies are crushed by nightmares and the impossible… Where the drama, the tragedy, the romance, the hope, the anger and the love take place… Where life and death is an option in this world… Living in Summer Bay… This is Bay Crush… THE CHURCH-INSIDE [Continued from before. Irene notices Katie, her friend from the hospital] IRENE: You’re flippn’ kidding me! BELLE: What? IRENE: She was my friend at the hospital, she said she was coming to Summer Bay, but I thought she wasn’t serious… JACK: Mum? [Katie looks at Jack, Jack looks upset] KATIE: Jack? [Jack and Katie hug. Lucas stands there in shock] BETH: What’s going on? [beth whispers to herself] KATIE: Where’s Lucas? LUCAS: Um… Here… [Lucas looks confused, Katie turns to Lucas and gives him a hug, she starts to cry] KATIE: You’ve grown up so much I hardly recognize you! [People begin to talk and gasp. Beth begins to slowly walk away. Tony grabs onto her hands but she pulls away] BETH: Tony… Just don’t! JACK: What the hell is going on? BETH: That is exactly what I want to know! What the hell is going on!? [beth says screaming in anger] KIT: Mum, calm down. BETH: Don’t you dare tell me to calm down Kit! [Jack looks at Tony] JACK: She’s meant to be dead! [Tony stutters for words, Scott is also confused] SCOTT: Um, everyone… I think some privacy is in order for a few minutes. [People begin to get up] TONY: There’s no need for that Scott, the wedding is still going on- [beth slaps Tony] Beth? BETH: I trusted you! TONY: Beth, you have to understand- LUCAS: All that time you talked about being open with us, having a close bond… You lied to us! All those years! KATIE: Guys, this isn’t what I wanted- TONY: Can you just leave and let us all be? BETH: Tony, just go. TONY: What? BETH: Just go! [Tony doesn’t know what to do. He looks around at Jack and Lucas, they look angry towards him. Tony steps down and looks at the crowd, they’re shaking their heads etc. Slowly, Tony walks back up the aisle. Matilda walks up to Henry] HENRY: See, I told you I was right. MATILDA: Why didn’t you say something? HENRY: I tried! You didn’t believe me! [Kit hugs Beth] KIT: Are you ok? [beth looks at everyone] BETH: I… I just want to go home. KIT: I think that’s a good idea… [Martha walks up to Jack who looks upset] MARTHA: Are you ok? [Jack looks back at Katie] JACK: How? That’s what I don’t get. KATIE: I think that’s a story for another time… Right now isn’t exactly a good place. [Katie looks at Beth] I’m sorry… I just had to stop this because you didn’t know what you were getting into… [beth just stares at Katie] BETH: I don’t know who you are, but right now I- KIT: Mum… We should go… [Kit tugs Beth away] BETH: Thank you. [beth says smiling at Katie. Katie turns around and notices Irene] KATIE: Irene? [People turn at Irene, Irene weakly smiles] RACHEL’S CAR [Rachel is speeding, she enters Summer Bay and just passed the sign. She smiles and looks at the passengers seat where the gun sits] THE CHURCH-OUTSIDE [Kim runs up to Kit] KIM: Hey, are you alright? KIT: Yeah… It’s mum I feel sorry for. KIM: I can’t believe Tony said his wife was dead when she wasn’t! KIT: Yeah… Kim, I don’t want to think about it ok. KIM: Yeah, that’s ok. [They hug] *** [Pippa is staring into the sky, Alf walks up to her] ALF: Are you ok Pip? PIPPA: Yeah… I feel fine thanks. [Pippa smiles] ALF: It’s ok to release your emotions… I’ve noticed this was similar to last week with you and Ian. [Pippa begins to cry, she rests herself on Alf’s shoulder. From the distance, Sally watches] THE PATTERSON HOUSE-LOUNGE ROOM [Rachel enters the house, she looks around and notices no one is home. Dan walks in slowly] RACHEL: Oh, thank god Dan! You will never believe what happened! The police came and took the baby away, Lisa somehow found Leah… Which got her arrested. [Dan keeps walking towards his bedroom] Dan? Did you just hear what I just said? [Dan turns around] DAN: Sorry? What? RACHEL: Leah’s been arrested for kidnapping. DAN: Oh… Ok… [Dan walks into his room and closes the door. Rachel talks from the outside] RACHEL: Dan, is everything ok? You seem a little down. DAN: I just need some space if that’s ok. RACHEL: That’s understandable… But what are we going to do about Leah? DAN: Rachel… Please… I’ll think about it when the time comes… RACHEL: But Dan she’s been- DAN: I said I’ll think about it when the time comes! [Rachel jumps, she looks upset, not knowing what to do] THE HUNTER HOUSE-LIVING AREA [slowly walking in, Kit walks in, then Scott, Hayley, Jack, Martha, Lucas, Matilda, Robbie, Henry and Beth. They all sit around the lounges except Beth] HAYLEY: Could I get you a drink Beth? [beth says nothing] MATILDA: What about tea? Would you like some tea? [beth just walks away] KIT: Just leave her for awhile… Let her deal with this in her own way… [Martha kisses Jack on the forehead] MARTHA: How are you? JACK: I’ve just found out that my mother is really alive and that my father has been lying to me… How do you think I feel? MARTHA: I know… It’s a pretty stupid question… But are you ok? JACK: I don’t know… This was something I wasn’t expecting. MARTHA: No one was Jack. You thought she was dead! SUMMER BAY HOUSE-PIPPA’S ROOM-THE BOY’S ROOM-LIVING AREA [Pippa is finishing of packing up, Sally walks in] SALLY: You’re really leaving, aren’t you? PIPPA: Sally, I have to leave… I can’t stay here- SALLY: Why? Pippa, your family and friends are here! We will support you through this! [Pippa begins to cry, she hugs Sally] Hey, it’s ok! PIPPA: No, no it’s not… I’ve been so selfish towards you Sally in the last couple of days… My fiancée attacked you and all I thought about was being humiliated in front of everybody. That’s nothing from what you went through! SALLY: Pippa, that’s ok! I forgive you! [sally says crying. They hug] But please don’t go! PIPPA: I’m sorry… I have too. *** [Chris finally finishes packing up, Drew is lying on the bed] CHRIS: Well that’s it… I’m done. [Chris says smiling] DREW: Can’t you protest a little harder not to leave? CHRIS: I’m sorry Drew… I’m thinking about mum here, not myself. DREW: Well in that case, I guess it’s ok. [Drew says smiling. Chris sits on the bed] CHRIS: You know what… I’m really going to miss you. [Chris kisses Drew] DREW: Yeah, on some level I’m going to miss you too. [They laugh, and share another kiss] *** [in the living room, someone walks in. It’s Mamma Rose. She looks around, seeing if anyone is home. She walks into the foyer and hears someone coming down the stairs. She hides in the closet] THE REVENGE HOUSE-REVENGE ROOM-LOUNGE ROOM [Dani slowly opens the door, she hears a noise from upstairs, she quickly runs back into the room] KIRSTY: Maybe we should wait until they go somewhere… Or until they sleep? DANI: Yeah, I think that’s our best option… [Dani is looking around the basement from the revenge room] KIRSTY: What are you looking for? DANI: I’m trying to find some protection if we’re going to need it. KIRSTY: You really think it will get that far? [Dani and Kirsty look at each other] *** [Zoe’s phone rings, she answers it] ZOE: Hello? KIM: Zoe, it’s me. ZOE: Hello Kimberly! [From the kitchen Tracey notices that Zoe is talking to Kim, she leans against the wall so she can hear] KIM: I need to see you. ZOE: Why? KIM: I don’t know. Kit’s had some major family issues at the moment, I just need someone to talk too. ZOE: Kim… Not tonight. KIM: Well when? ZOE: Tomorrow night, ok? KIM: Fine then. Bye. [Zoe hangs up. Tracey walks in] TRACEY: Making dinner arrangements with the pretty boy are we? ZOE: Tracey, please stop this! TRACEY: Well that’s what you’re doing! ZOE: No, it’s not what I’m doing! All he wants to do is talk! TRACEY: Oh I’m sure that’s all he wants to do! ZOE: You know what! If this is how you want to be, then maybe we’re better off without one another! Maybe I should just go back with Kim. TRACEY: He has a fiancée. ZOE: And she can get out of the picture easily if that’s what I really wanted. [They just stare at each other] TRACEY: Maybe you should just run off with Kim then? ZOE: Yeah, maybe I should! [Zoe walks off. Tracey begins to cry. She walks into her room, goes to her side draw and takes out her gun] TRACEY: I’m not letting you go that easy Eve. [Tracey smiles as she looks at the gun] SUMMER BAY HOUSE-OUTSIDE-LIVING AREA [it’s now night. Pippa is looking around the place, Alf steps out] ALF: Enjoying the view before you go? PIPPA: Something like that. [They smile at each other] I don’t know what I would of done without you Alf in the last couple of days… [They just stare at each other, Alf pulls in for a kiss and kisses her. They pull away and stare at each other] ALF: Sorry… PIPPA: For what? [Pippa pulls in for a kiss this time] *** [in the living area Chris walks in with a few suitcases with the help of Drew and Ric] SALLY: All packed I see? CHRIS: Yeah. I’m going to miss you Sal- [They hug] SALLY: I’m going to miss you too Chris. [Pippa and Alf walk in] PIPPA: All ready to go Chris? CHRIS: Yeah… Let’s do this. PIPPA: Bye Sally. [They hug] I’m going to miss you! SALLY: I’m going to miss you too. [Pippa hugs Drew, Ric and Cassie] PIPPA: And you three! Stay out of trouble ok! RIC: We’ll try. PIPPA: And don’t worry, I’ll be back when this one has the baby. [Looking at Cassie, Cassie barely smiles. In the closest Mamma Rose can see them, she smiles when she heard Pippa talk] Well, let’s go then. [Pippa and Chris walk out] SALLY: Buy guys! ALF: Have a safe trip. [Chris looks at Drew, they smile at each other] SALLY: Oh well today’s been really… RIC: Weird? SALLY: I guess you can call it that. DREW: What’s for dinner Sal- because I’m starving! SALLY: I don’t feel like cooking. Do any of you guys feel like cooking? [Everyone laughs and shakes their head] Diner? DREW: Yes! Let’s go! CASSIE: Um, I might stay here Sally, I’m not too hungry. SALLY: Oh alright, what about you Mister Stewart? ALF: Nah I’ll stay here love, I don’t feel too well, feel a little tired. SALLY: Ok then. Well are we ready? [Looking at Ric and Drew] RIC: Yep, let’s go! [sally and the boys exit] THE HUNTER HOUSE-KITCHEN [Jack is staring in space, Martha walks up to him] MARTHA: Hey, I’m going to go home for a bit… I don’t feel to well. JACK: Oh, well I’ll come with you. MARTHA: No, there’s no need for that. You need to stay here for Luc- don’t worry, I’ll be fine. [They kiss on the lips] THE REVENGE HOUSE-LOUNGEROOM-REVENGE ROOM [Zoe is playing with Holly, Tracey walks past in a disguise] ZOE: Where are you going? TRACEY: I just have some business to do. ZOE: Like what? The only business you have to care about at the moment is capturing the others. TRACEY: Eve, I have other priorities too you know. [Tracey smiles and walks out] *** [Dani is still trying to listen for any movement] DANI: Someone just went outside… [You can here Tracey start the car] They’re leaving! Kirsty! They’re leaving! [Kirsty jumps off the bed and runs to the door] KIRSTY: Ok, so what are we going to do? [Dani puts her eye on a knife close by] THE PATTERSON HOUSE-LOUNGE ROOM [Dan walks out, Rachel is sitting on the lounge] RACHEL: Are you ok Dan? DAN: Um… I don’t know… I just have to go to Amanda’s. RACHEL: Dan, Leah has been arrested and- DAN: Rachel! I was just told something that I thought was the truth but it turned out it wasn’t so excuse me if I have feelings towards that and not Leah. I told Leah that this would end in trouble! Right now I have other priorities! [Dan storms out. Rachel looks upset. She then takes the gun out of her pocket and also walks outside] SUMMER BAY HOUSE-CASSIE’S ROOM [Cassie is brushing her hair while she looks into her mirror, she looks down, then looks back up again. She jumps, Mamma Rose is right behind her, she turns around and looks at her] CASSIE: Who are you? MAMMA ROSE: Calm down Cassandra… I’m only here to help you. [she smiles and closes the door] CASSIE: Help me? Who are you? How do you know my name? MAMMA ROSE: You have something that I want… You want to give it away, and I want it. [Mamma Rose smiles and looks towards Cassie’s baby] CASSIE: You want my baby? THE HOLDEN HOUSE-BATHROOM [Martha opens a pregnancy test box and takes the test out. She just looks at it] ***FLASHBACK*** [Martha and Jack are making out in their bed] MARTHA: I love you so much. JACK: I love you too. MARTHA: I’m never going to let you go! [They smile and kiss] ***PRESENT*** [Martha has a tear flowing out, she looks at the test once again] SUMMER BAY HOUSE-CASSIE’S ROOM [Mamma Rose is sitting on Cassie’s bed] CASSIE: Why, would you want my baby? MAMMA ROSE: Because I need a child to take over my reign once I die. I need to know that the beliefs will be passed down. And that baby will do it for me. CASSIE: Beliefs? Beliefs of what? MAMMA ROSE: I understand that you’re a friend of young Tasha. Correct? [Cassie seems shocked] CASSIE: Oh my god, it’s you!? [Mamma Rose smiles] MAMMA ROSE: I’m not here to hurt you Cassie. I just want the baby. [Cassie doesn’t know what to say] THE HOLDEN HOUSE-BATHROOM [Martha puts the test down on the bench, she sits on the toilet and waits] ***FLASHBACK*** [Martha kisses Phil, they move towards his bed] PHIL: Are you sure that we’re doing the right thing? MARTHA: Yeah. [They kiss] ***PRESENT*** [Martha begins to cry and weep as she remembers her night with Phil] SUMMER BAY HOUSE-CASSIE’S ROOM CASSIE: If I give you my baby… What will I receive out of it? MAMMA ROSE: Anything you wish my dear. CASSIE: Why don’t I believe you? MAMMA ROSE: Believe Cassie! Just believe! Your baby will take us to places we never thought were possible. The future of the Believers lies with your baby… With our baby. [Mamma Rose says touching Cassie’s belly] CASSIE: Well I have to think about it- MAMMA ROSE: No! You must make a decision now! Let me raise the baby… Or hand it down to somebody else, because I cannot wait any longer, I need a decision now! CASSIE: The baby is only four months old… MAMMA ROSE: I know Cassie, I know… [Mamma Rose smiles] CASSIE: Um… Ok… MAMMA ROSE: I’m sorry? CASSIE: Yes… You can have my baby. [They both smile] MAMMA ROSE: Excellent! But, there’s only one small problem… CASSIE: What’s that? MAMMA ROSE: The people around you, your family and friends… CASSIE: What about them? MAMMA ROSE: When they hear what your doing, who your giving your baby too, they’re going to do everything possible to keep the baby away from me, to turn you against me! CASSIE: But, it’s my choice… MAMMA ROSE: I know… [Mamma Rose takes out a piece of paper] But we need to make sacrifices for the greater good… So nothing stands in our way. [Cassie opens the paper, it’s a list of names. Sally, Alf, Ric, Drew, Pippa, Chris, Matilda, Lucas, Robbie, Tasha and Belle] CASSIE: What’s this for? MAMMA ROSE: I’ve been watching you Cassie… They will be the ones that will stand in the way… They’re the ones we must sacrifice so the baby can have a better future. [Cassie looks completely shocked] THE HOLDEN HOUSE-MARTHA AND JACK’S ROOM [Martha sits on the bed and looks at the test. She seems shocked, then she begins to cry heavily. She rolls on the bed and drops the test onto the floor. It has a plus on it… Martha is pregnant] SUMMER BAY HOUSE-CASSIE’S ROOM-LIVNG AREA MAMMA ROSE: So… Will you sacrifice your loved ones…? So that you and your baby will have a better future? CASSIE: But what if they don’t get in my way, then I wouldn’t have to do anything. [Mamma Rose smiles and brushes Cassie’s hair] MAMMA ROSE: It still wouldn’t matter Cassie… So, will you decline my offer and keep the baby you don’t want… Or will you join me, and sacrifice those ones that you love? [Mamma Rose smiles, Cassie doesn’t know what to say] CASSIE: If I have to sacrifice my loved ones, just so my baby can have a better future… Then I’ll join you. MAMMA ROSE: I’m sorry? CASSIE: I’ll join you… You can have my baby. [Mamma Rose smiles] *** [Alf is walking around very slowly, he looks like he’s in pain] ALF: Aw… Cassie! [Alf says in pain, but softly. He puts his hand on his heart and collapses] PIPPA’S CAR [They just drove past “You’re now leaving Summer Bay” sign] CHRIS: Well that’s it… We’re out of Summer Bay. [Pippa says nothing] Mum? PIPPA: Yes? CHRIS: Are you ok? PIPPA: No… I don’t know… I think we’re making a wrong choice. CHRIS: What? PIPPA: This… Us leaving the Bay. It doesn’t feel right… I don’t want to go back home to a place full of memories with Ian… I want to stay here where our friends and family are. [Chris smiles] CHRIS: Well why did you make this decision in the first place? PIPPA: I don’t know. I don’t know! [Pippa brakes and spins the car around] We’re going back to Summer Bay Chris! [Chris smiles. Pippa whispers to herself] I’m coming Alf. [Pippa says smiling] THE HOLDEN HOUSE-LIVING AREA [Kit and Kim walk in, Kit kisses Kim but he moves away] KIT: What’s wrong? KIM: Nothing… [Kit gives him another kiss, but he moves away again] KIT: Kim? What’s wrong? [Kim says nothing] Kim? KIM: I can’t do this anymore… KIT: Do what? KIM: Lie to you… KIT: About what? [Kim just looks around, Kit looks upset] SUMMER BAY HOUSE-LIVING AREA [Pippa comes running through the house] PIPPA: Alf! Sally!? [Pippa sees Alf on the floor] Oh god! Alf! [Chris walks in] CHRIS: Oh my god! What happened? PIPPA: I don’t know! Call an ambulance! [Chris races to the phone. Cassie runs down, looking upset] CASSIE: Pippa? Mister Stewart? What happened? [Cassie says upset] PIPPA: Alf, wake up. It’s me! It’s Pippa! Where’s Sally? [Talking to Cassie] CASSIE: Her and the boys went out for dinner, do you know what happened? PIPPA: No. Is an ambulance coming? [Pippa says to Chris] CHRIS: They’re on their way. THE HOLDEN HOUSE-LIVING AREA [Continued from before] KIT: Well? What have you been lying to me about? KIM: I… I… Kit… You know I love you- KIT: Kim, I don’t like where this is going… [Kim moves closer to Kit, Kit moves away] KIM: You have to understand. It was just a mistake… But I’ve made a decision, and that’s going to effect what happens to us. KIT: What are you talking about? KIM: I don’t want this… Us… [Kit looks upset, Rachel walks in slowly without saying anything] Rachel? [Kim looks at Rachel] RACHEL: I’m sorry Kit… [Kim and Kit notice the gun in Rachel’s hand] KIM: Wait… What are you doing? RACHEL: I want you back Kim… I want you back. [Rachel says emotionally] AMANDA’S MANSION-LOUNGE ROOM [someone is knocking on the door. Amanda opens it, it’s Dan] AMANDA: Dan? DAN: Is Ryan really my son? AMANDA: What? DAN: Is Ryan… My son? [Amanda looks like she’s about to cry, she turns around and looks at Macca whose smiling] AMANDA: No… [Dan doesn’t know what to say, he looks very upset] DAN: Is Ryan, Peter’s son? AMANDA: Yes… It’s true… [Dan lets himself in] DAN: Why? Why!? [Dan says kicking the lamp over] AMANDA: You knew about the affairs already Dan! Why are we going through this again!? DAN: You never told me that my son was actually my brother’s! AMANDA: I couldn’t tell you! DAN: But you had to tell Macca didn’t you? [They look at Macca, Macca has a cheeky grin] What are you smiling at you idiot? [Dan picks up Macca by the t-shirt] MACCA: You… [Macca laughs. Dan throws a punch towards his nose] AMANDA: Oh my god! Dan! [Macca has a bleeding nose, he tackles Dan to the ground] MACCA: Argh!!! THE REVENGE HOUSE-REVENGE ROOM-DINING ROOM [Zoe slowly walks down the stairs with some food for Kirsty and Dani. She notices that the door is open. She looks around. Very quickly, Dani stabs Zoe in the back] ZOE: Argh! DANI: Kirsty! Come on! [Kirsty runs out of the room, they run up the stairs, Zoe takes out her gun and shoots the door. The girls scream. They enter the dining room, Tracey walks in] TRACEY: What the hell? How did you two escape? [Tracey notices the bloody knife in Dani’s hand, Tracey kicks Dani to the floor, she drops the knife, Tracey picks it up] DANI: Ok! Ok! [Tracey says pointing the knife towards them] You can have it! KIRSTY: Dani!? [Dani and Kirsty slowly walk back to the stairs as they’ve been cornered off] TRACEY: Where is she? [Kirsty and Dani look upset] Where is she? [Tracey says pointing the knife towards them] DANI: She’s downstairs! THE HOSPITAL-EMERGENCY [Ambo’s run in with Alf’s body on a trolly. Pippa follows behind them] DOCTOR GREEN: What happened? PIPPA: I don’t know, I think he’s had a heart attack. [They move Alf’s body into a room. Sally comes running in with Drew and Ric] SALLY: Pippa! PIPPA: Oh Sally! [They hug] RIC: What happened? Is he alright? [Pippa doesn’t know what to say] THE HOLDEN HOUSE-LIVING AREA [Continued from before. Kit is hiding behind Kim, they’re walking backwards] KIM: Rachel. Just put the gun down! RACHEL: I’m not putting nothing down, until I get you back! KIM: Rachel, please! You’re scaring us! RACHEL: I’m scaring myself, but you don’t see me complaining! KIT: Kim, get the gun. [Kit says crying] KIM: Rachel, just put the gun down… We can try and work something out! RACHEL: We can’t work nothing out if she’s in the picture! [Kim looks at Kit, Kit’s crying] AMANDA’S MANSION [Continued from before, Macca and Dan are fighting on the floor] AMANDA: Guy’s stop it! DAN: Are you enjoying this mate? [Macca punches Dan in the mouth, Dan falls to the floor] AMANDA: Macca, stop it! You’re scaring me! [Macca keeps punching Dan, who looks out of it. Amanda looks over to the coffee table, where Macca’s gun lies. Dan rolls on top and gets control of the fight] Dan stop it! DAN: I’m going to make you pay, you dirty son of a- AMANDA: Dan, I mean it! Stop it right now! THE REVENGE HOUSE-REVENGE ROOM [Tracey locks the door, Dani and Kirsty are back in the room. Tracey drops the knife and picks up Zoe who seems unconscious] TRACEY: Eve, wake up it’s Tracey! [Zoe says nothing] Eve! Eve!? [Tracey begins to cry, she hugs Zoe’s body. Tracey kisses Zoe around the face] Wake up! Please wake up! [she feels Zoe’s pulse, and has a shocked look] Oh no. No! No! No!!! [Tracey cries hysterically. She hugs the body again, and feels something in her pocket. She takes it out. It’s the gun. Tracey just looks at it] THE HOSPITAL-EMERGENCY [The doctors are doing stuff to Alf. Pippa, Sally, Ric and Drew walk in] JULIE: I‘m sorry guys but you have to stay outside! RIC: I’m not going anywhere, that’s my grandfather! PIPPA: What’s going on? Do you know what happened? JULIE: He’s had a heart attack- SALLY: Oh no. RIC: Well is he going to be alright? [Julie says nothing] SALLY: Julie, please! JULIE: We’re doing everything possible. [You can hear Alf’s heart rate going down in the background] DOCTOR GREEN: He’s resting! [Julie gets the machine ready to shock Alf] Charge to two hundred. [Julie charges it] JULIE: Charged. DOCTOR GREEN: Clear! THE HOLDEN HOUSE-LIVING AREA [Continued from before] RACHEL: I’m sorry… This is just how it’s meant to be… KIT: Rachel… Please… RACHEL: Sh… This is it… One… KIM: Rachel don’t… RACHEL: Two… [Kit begins to cry heavily] Three! [Kim runs right in front of Rachel, the gun goes off. Kim stops and Kit screams] KIT: Oh my god Kim! [Kim’s been shot on the left side of his chest. Kim falls to the floor] Oh god! [Rachel stands there in shock, she looks at the gun very confused] RACHEL: What the hell? [in the background the clock reads 12:05am] AMANDA’S MANSION-LOUNGE ROOM [The fight is continuing] AMANDA: Dan stop it, I’m not joking! [Dan punches Macca harder each time] You’re killing him! You’re killing him! Stop it! [Amanda looks back at Macca’s gun. She runs over to it and struggles to pick it up because she’s scared. She closes her eyes and pulls the trigger. There’s total silence. In the background the clock reads 12:11am] THE REVENGE HOUSE-REVENGE ROOM [Tracey rises the gun] TRACEY: If we can’t be together in life… We’ll be together in death… [Tracey begins to cry. From outside the house you hear the gunshot go off. In the background the clock reads 12:56am] THE HOSPITAL-EMERGENCY [Continued from before] DOCTOR GREEN: Charge to three sixty! [Julie charges it] Clear! [The room is now in silence, the noise of the machine tells the room that Alf’s heart rate has stopped. Sally and Pippa stand there in shock, not knowing what to do or how to act. Doctor Green looks at the clock, it’s 12:30am] I’m so sorry… SALLY: Oh no! [sally says crying] A RANDOM MYSTERIOUS WHITE ROOM [it’s a long hallway, everything is white. Alf is walking down the hallway. He sees a figure close by. As he walks over to them he notices who they are, it’s Alsia] ALF: Alsia? [Alsia weakly smiles] What’s going on what is this? ALSIA: Something you shouldn’t be worried about. [Alsia holds Alf hand] ALF: What is this… The end? [Alsia smiles, Alf seems shocked] END Martha’s pregnant… Whose the father? Cassie joined the Believers… Who will she sacrifice? Rachel shot Kim… Will he survive and what was Rachel so confused about? Amanda pulled the trigger… Who did she shoot? Zoe was stabbed, Tracey pulled the trigger… Who survived? Alf went into unconsciousness… What lies ahead for him next? Will Bay Crush even return? Only time will tell… Oooooooooooooo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted August 31, 2006 Report Share Posted August 31, 2006 That was awesome! Never saw any of that coming - wickedly awesome stuff, dude! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted August 31, 2006 Report Share Posted August 31, 2006 OMG i knew Martha was pregnant. Well anyone with a brain wouldve known that (no offence to those who didnt) but yeh. OMG i hope Jack is the father, even though right now i have doubts. *cries* There has to be a Bay Crush 2007 pleeease Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drew Posted August 31, 2006 Report Share Posted August 31, 2006 OMG i knew Martha was pregnant. Well anyone with a brain wouldve known that (no offence to those who didnt) but yeh. OMG i hope Jack is the father, even though right now i have doubts. *cries* There has to be a Bay Crush 2007 pleeease Yeah, to obvious that Martha was pregnant... Shouldn't of said anything in the spoilers etc I began the next chapter today, but it wont be posted for awhile... As this story is now on a break Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted August 31, 2006 Report Share Posted August 31, 2006 A break? Nooooooooooo.......! Ah well, it's understandable. Just as long as there'll be a BC07 I don't mind, as long as it's here sometime! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shen Posted August 31, 2006 Report Share Posted August 31, 2006 OMG!!!!! omg omg omg! That was amazing Drew!!!!! Excellent! I can't wait until you write more (if you do...please do!) Everything..was so unexpected in an expected kind of way if you know what i mean! LOVED IT!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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