Drew Posted November 4, 2006 Report Posted November 4, 2006 I'm glad that people are smiling Well I'm only posting two a week so I dunno... When you see it updated, then you'll know haha. I know the first chapter was a let down but that storyline regarding Alf, it plays a big part with the new series. (Not all the time, but it's a chunk of the story) Hopefully you guys are satisfied with how the cliffhangers resolve
~Rosey~ Posted November 4, 2006 Report Posted November 4, 2006 As long as my Rachie doesnt die, i'll be happy
SfanS Posted November 4, 2006 Report Posted November 4, 2006 TWO A WEEK!? Okay, I can live with that...I suppose. But you have such a great fic. I hope you realise I'll be ckecing (andpestering Oopsd, did I say that out loud?) every day!
Oxidizer Posted November 4, 2006 Report Posted November 4, 2006 Two updates a week? Sounds freakin' awesome!
Drew Posted November 6, 2006 Report Posted November 6, 2006 A Preview. Episode 22 up tomorrow AMANDA: Hello? Hello?! I need an ambulance! My husband’s been shot! [PAUSE] I don’t know, I’m not a doctor, in the chest! Can’t you just get an ambulance out here now!? [Dan walks in slowly] Fifty-Two, Sunny Cove road. [Amanda hangs up, they look at each other] DAN: Why me Amanda? AMANDA: What do you mean? DAN: You were yelling at me to stop hurting Macca, then you shot him instead of me… Why? [Amanda looks like she’s about to cry] AMANDA: Isn’t it obvious? [Amanda says trying to cheer herself up, Dan looks confused] Dan… DAN: Amanda, don’t. [Amanda walks slowly to Dan] AMANDA: Why do you think I tried to ruin the wedding? Keep Ryan’s birthfather a secret from you? Saving you tonight? DAN: Amanda… AMANDA: I still love you Dan, always have, always will. [Dan looks emotional] DAN: Don’t Amanda… Just don’t. AMANDA: I love you Dan, nothing is going to take that away from me. And I know on some level, you still love me too. [Amanda’s next to Dan now, they just stare at each other, Dan pulls in for a kiss. They pull away and look at each other. Amanda smiles, she goes back in for a kiss. They move up against the wall and continue to kiss]
Oxidizer Posted November 6, 2006 Report Posted November 6, 2006 Wow! Excellent writing - captured the moment perfectly. Awesome stuff, dude!
shen Posted November 6, 2006 Report Posted November 6, 2006 great teaser Drew! Can't wait until the update tomorrow!!!!!
Drew Posted November 6, 2006 Report Posted November 6, 2006 Thanks guys By the way guys, have you checked out that idea I made for extremly long fics ? It's in the ND section.
Guest Posted November 6, 2006 Report Posted November 6, 2006 Thanks guys By the way guys, have you checked out that idea I made for extremly long fics ? It's in the ND section. Drew I am loving this every bit and it so real if you pictured it in your mind
SfanS Posted November 6, 2006 Report Posted November 6, 2006 ooohhh. Amanda and dan, sitting ina tree....and I forgot the rest....Oh, what a little sl**.
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