jack4martha_forever Posted August 5, 2006 Report Posted August 5, 2006 I just read this whole fic...its really good...nice work...like the whole Zoe/Tracy being nice thing. Zoe cracks me up with her witty comments and sarcasm and smart remarks. She is a smart girl Awwww...my poor Jacky poo *big hug* I hope neither him or Martha are being targeted, coz then i'll die Please update soon
swfc Posted August 5, 2006 Report Posted August 5, 2006 Rabsey!!!!!! It's so awesome!!!!! Yay!!!! Macca's dead!!!! Thanks for killing him off!!!!! *jumps for joy in jubilation* and also, *opens a bottle of wine to celebrate*
Traceve Posted August 5, 2006 Report Posted August 5, 2006 Rabsey!!!!!! It's so awesome!!!!! Yay!!!! Macca's dead!!!! Thanks for killing him off!!!!! *jumps for joy in jubilation* and also, *opens a bottle of wine to celebrate* How can I compete with that comment!? Great update! more soon..Please!!
luckyrabbit Posted August 5, 2006 Report Posted August 5, 2006 I just read this whole fic...its really good...nice work...like the whole Zoe/Tracy being nice thing. Zoe cracks me up with her witty comments and sarcasm and smart remarks. She is a smart girl Thank you very much, I hope you keep reading. Awwww...my poor Jacky poo *big hug* I hope neither him or Martha are being targeted, coz then i'll die Don't worry, Jack and Martha are going to be fine...for now This isn't a teaser for the next chapter, just something I'm thinking about using in the future. I just want to run it by you guys to see if you think it's in character or not. "Very impressive." Lara said. "Does that mean you're ready to accept that I am the Unquestioned and All-Knowing Master Of The Universe?" Eve asked, raising an eyebrow. "Shouldn't that be mistress?" Rice corrected, his disdain for her shining through. Eve titled her head thoughtfully. "No. Mistress makes it sound like I'm a whore for the whole universe…and that's just gross." So should I use it? Yes/No?
swfc Posted August 5, 2006 Report Posted August 5, 2006 Love it!! Especially the "Unquestioned and All-Knowing Master Of The Universe?" bit! Someone should hit Lara and Rice on the head for being so mean!
luckyrabbit Posted August 5, 2006 Report Posted August 5, 2006 Someone should hit Lara and Rice on the head for being so mean!Maybe someone will Well, Rice anyway. Lara ends up warming up to Eve pretty soon.
swfc Posted August 5, 2006 Report Posted August 5, 2006 Good! Coz they deserve it! For being such idiots! Yay! Lara likes Zoe.... I mean, Eve.... So used to calling her Zoe! Colleen.... she's a classic!
jack4martha_forever Posted August 5, 2006 Report Posted August 5, 2006 lol yes please do you that i love it And dw i will continue reading it. As long as Jack and Martha as safe for the whole fan fic. And how did Macca die?
luckyrabbit Posted August 5, 2006 Report Posted August 5, 2006 And how did Macca die? You'll find out in the next chapter
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