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Somewhere A Clock Is Ticking


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Well, I've just started the next chapter and it's giving me a little trouble (I've got a Martha scene that'll probably be cut.) So I can't really give you an accurate timeframe. :ph34r:

Nothing better happen to my Rachie!!! *sobs*

Or else.!

Don't worry, Rachel isn't in any danger yet, Eve isn't going to let her new friend get hurt :P
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So I've cut the Martha scene, so the next chapter is just going to be all Eve, Tracey, Lara, Jack, Kim, Rachel and Charlie, now doesn't that sound fun? :P

Teaser:

"Talk to me about what?" Jack asked, pausing in the doorway, a piece of paper clutched in his hands.

"What do you want?" Eve snapped, she was still annoyed with him for screwing up.

"Uh, we may have a problem."

"You mean, other than the fact that you're still working here?"

Tracey briefly covered Eve's hand with her own and stood up, getting in between the two. She had no great love for Jack but for the sake of everyone's sanity, somebody had to play referee. "What is it?"

"I just got a fax, Charlie McKinnon has been released from the Paulson Psychiatric hospital."

Eve looked at him blankly. "And this has to do with us how?"

"He's a psycho, he was stalking Kim Hyde."

"What is it with that boy and stalkers?" Eve remarked to herself. "They his psych notes?" she asked, holding out a hand for the papers Jack was clutching.

"Yeah. Do you think that I should pay him a visit, warn him about making any trouble."

Eve briefly looked over the report. "No. You're going to stay away from him. According to this, Charlie has responded well to his treatments, he's taking anti-depressants and is required to attend counseling sessions twice a week. You start harassing him, you could undo all of that progress, send him off his meds and into a downward spiral. We have enough on our plate without you creating a problem where there isn't one."

"But he's dangerous-"

"He was dangerous." Eve corrected. "But with continued rehabilitation there is no reason why he can't become a useful member of society."

"And you're qualified to make that judgment, are you?"

"More than you are."

"She has a degree in psychology," Tracey elaborated further. "She knows what she's talking about."

"And unless Charlie actually does something illegal, you’re going to leave him alone. Got it?"

Jack nodded reluctantly. "But the second he steps out of line-"

He was cut off by a knock on the door. "Sorry to interrupt," Lara said, not looking very sorry at all. "But we just got a call from Colleen Smart, she's reported hearing noises outside her mobile home and she's to scared to leave to go to work, she thinks it's the Stalker." she finished, rolling her eyes.

"Jack, since your so eager to get out there, you can go and check it out."

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