eye_catching_gangsta Posted July 21, 2006 Report Posted July 21, 2006 Episode five: After party: They were in the surf club. After the funeral’s of Tony, Kit and Kim the attainders of their gathered in the surf club and mourned over Tony, Kit and Kim. As they are mourning Beth says some words. Beth: Listen. Over this part week, I feel this has been so horrible. I mean not with three dying but with others getting personal injuries and illnesses, but this is all because of one person, Dan Baker. He killed Tony and I believe that he bombed the fairground and killed all those other people. Drew: Hey, that is slander. Beth: Oh look there is another Baker. Drew: How dare you. Beth: Shut up astray. Drew: What did you just say? Beth: Well you are. Drew: You ungrateful B***h. Beth: See look what the Baker’s have turned into. Drew: Look everyone, believe this women if you want to but I know for a fact that Dan is innocent. Some residents believe Drew but others believe Beth. Drew leaves the surf club leaving everyone to think. Is the town getting split? Meanwhile at Robbie and Tasha’s flat, Josie is sitting down while Tasha is trying to talk to her while Robbie is at the funeral. Tasha tries to talk to Josie to see why and what she is on the run from? Tasha: Josie, what did you mean by on the run. Josie: It is a long story. Tasha: I have got all day. Josie: It all started about three months ago. I got married to a gangster. Tasha: A gangster? Josie: His name was Jack but people called him by his gangster name, J dog. Anyway it started just over two weeks ago now. I was doing the cleaning for Jack, when it happened. Tasha: What did? Josie: One of his kids came home, Chelsea with all cuts and bruises over home. About half an hour later, Jack came home and found her dead in her room. He blamed me and attempted to kill me. I ran away. Tasha: So is that the only reason you are back. Josie: Pretty much. Tasha: Do you just realise that this town is on the road to destruction, the town is dividing because of this fairground disaster. Robbie has lost his sister and step dad and I have just had a baby. You thought this was a really good time to come, didn’t you. Josie: Sorry but he will kill me if he finds me. Tasha: S**t. Josie: Otherwise I would of not came back. Tasha: Ok, here is the deal. Josie: Ok. Tasha: You can stay in this flat, but you our not to leave it for nothing. Got that? Josie: Yes and by the way. Tasha: What? Josie: Thank you. Tasha smiles and walks away while Josie is in relieve because she does not have to see Jack again but will the gangster come back to haunt her in due course? Belle is so shocked to be finally meeting her sister and her father, who live in the outskirts of Summer Bay. She and Irene exit the car and knock on the door which seems to be the Rose’s. Then Belle’s dad’s wife (Melissa) opens the door. Belle: Excuse me, do you know if Karl and Wesley Rose live here . Melissa: Yes they do. Who wants to know? Belle: His daughter and her sister. Melissa: You better come in. Melissa shows them to the lounge. While they are walking through the corridor Belle looks at family photos. Then she comes face to face with her father and sister. Melissa: Karl, say hello to you daughter. Karl: What you mean my daughter? Belle: Amanda Vale, ring any bells. Karl: Oh right. Wesley this is Belle, your sister. Wesley: Excuse me. You just have told me I have a sister. Who do you think you are? Karl: Don’t back chat me like that. Wesley: Dad. I’m fourteen years of age, I can do what I like. Karl: Wesley say hello to your sister. Wesley: All right, the name is Wesley. Irene: So why not keep in contact for all of these years. Karl: Amanda did not and I could not trace her down. Belle: So where do we go from here. Karl: Well, we was thinking of moving to a bigger house in Summer Bay in a couple of weeks, so if we take it from there. Belle: All right. Karl: Excellent. Irene: Come on Belle we better be making a move. Belle: Ok. Bye then. Karl: Bye. Melissa shows Irene and Belle out. As Karl hears the door shut, he smacks Wesley round the face for being so rude and obnoxious. Wesley: You F*****g idiot, I hate you. Karl: Well get use to it, you spoilt brat. Karl walks out leaving Wesley to cry in Melissa’s arms. Is this going to be a father and daughter feud. At the police station, Dan is being prepared to be taken away by the police and into jail until they can sort out a court hearing. Leah, Colleen, Ryan and Drew are all present at this time. He speaks to Colleen first. Dan: Listen Colleen, I know we have not always seen eye to eye but can you please just look at for Leah and the others please. Colleen: I will then you will be free. Dan: Hope so. Dan and Colleen hug then he moves along and says a few little words to Ryan about life. Dan: Listen mate, whatever anyone says to you I want you to be the bigger man I walk away. Got that? Ryan: Yes dad, l love you. Dan: I love you to mate. Dan then cuddles Ryan and sees Drew who is a bit upset on what happened earlier. Dan: Hey mate, what’s up. Drew: I am just upset about what happened today, that is all. Dan: Do not worry, Beth is just in the wrong and my trial is in two weeks so I will see you then ok. Drew: Ok. Then finally Dan sees the love of his life Leah who is having bad memories about what happened to Vinnie in prison. Leah: I am really scared. Dan: Don’t worry about me in prison I will be fine, you got that. Leah: Yes. Dan: I love you. Leah: I love you to. Dan and Leah kiss. Dan is then dragged away by police. Leah and Colleen begin to cry while Ryan and Dan look a bit upset. Meanwhile at the surf club the party is still going on. Beth then goes into the toilet and finds Martha lying on the floor in pain. What is wrong with her? Next time: Martha’s cancer trauma reaches a heartbreaking climax. Will Martha die? Jack says a love poem to Martha.
tasha7905 Posted July 24, 2006 Report Posted July 24, 2006 Great. Cant wait for the next episode, although by the sound of it, it will be emotional. More soon please.
eye_catching_gangsta Posted July 28, 2006 Report Posted July 28, 2006 Episode six: Goodbye my lover: Jack screams in horror as Martha is dying right in front of him. He then tries to get her back to life himself but it is just not working. She is dead! One hour before: Martha is rushed to hospital. The doctor’s take her to recess. Jack and some other Summer Bay residents who followed the ambulance await for the news on Martha. A nurse then shows everyone to a waiting room where they wait on news for Martha. Jack feels really guilty. He knows that Martha had cancer while the rest of the people did not even know that she was really ill. Jack then tells them the truth. Jack: I got something to tell you all. Sally: What? Jack: Martha had a stretch heart from the affect of the explosion, causing her to get cancer. Alf: Wait a minute, she did not tell none of us about it. Jack: I know she only told me. Sally: How serious is the cancer. Jack: Very. Alf: Why would she want to keep a secret from me? Jack: I do not know, but I just want her to live. I mean I have just lost my dad, my step sister, a good friend, I do not want to loose my wife too. Beth: You won’t. Jack: How do you know. For all we know she could be at deaths door right now. Beth: It is most likely just a false alarm. Jack is just hoping that Beth’s prediction is right and it is just a false alarm but the news that the doctor is about to deliver will send massive shockwaves throughout Jack’s mind. Doctor: May I speak to Jack Holden please. Jack: Just tell me what is it? Doctor: Please, can we go somewhere more private. Jack: Just tell me here. Doctor: Your wife only develop cancer just a week ago. We have done some test and Martha only has a very short time to live. Jack: But why? I mean she only got cancer a week ago. Doctor: Were you aware that Martha was three weeks pregnant. Jack: No! Doctor: Your baby caused Martha to have a short period of time to live. Jack: Can I please see her please, on my own. Doctor: Sure. Jack followed the doctor to Martha’s hospital room while the others waited in the waiting room on news. Jack Is walking down the corridor. He is just thinking of all of the deaths that have just happened recently and he is just thinking of life without Martha. He then begins to cry. Then he sees Martha lying very peacefully. However she is not able to speak because she is to weak to speak. It is very tragic. He then lays by Martha’s side just watching her and staring into her eyes. Jack then decides this is going to be the last moment that he spends with his wife so he decides to read a love poem to her. Jack: Roses and violets, just do not mean nothing in this world. It is you. You make me get through everyday because I just know your by your side. My affections just melt away when I look at you so please I just want you to know, I love you. Martha then slowly goes to sleep and that is when Jack realises she is gone. Jack screams in horror as Martha is dying right in front of him. He then tries to get her back to life himself but it is just not working. She is dead! Next Time: My fan fiction gets more saucy. Shockwaves ripple through the bay of news of Martha’s death. Josie gets a cruel text message. Wesley finds love with a local resident- whom? Matilda and a enemy fight. Sorry that this episode was a bit shorter. It was because I did not have enough time with exams and stuff. Now it should be longer. Next episode will be one of the best in the series so far.
beckyboo Posted August 9, 2006 Report Posted August 9, 2006 OMG this is amazing please post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
jack4martha_forever Posted August 9, 2006 Report Posted August 9, 2006 OMG my heart stopped and tears just poured outta my eyes. I cant believe Martha is dead. Thats horrible. You cant kill her. Bring her back to life please. That baby killed Martha *cries*
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