Jacksthehottest Posted August 24, 2006 Report Posted August 24, 2006 hey that was a great chapter i like the idea of Jesse coming back good storyline, but hopfully he doesnt spilt Martha and Jack up. Can't wait for more
tasha7905 Posted August 31, 2006 Report Posted August 31, 2006 Great fic. Poor Matilda. Cant wait for more.
~Angel~ Posted August 31, 2006 Report Posted August 31, 2006 Sorry I took so long, here's the next chapter... Chapter 24 Tasha sat tied to a chair in a barn in the middle of no-where. “Hello Tasha,” said Mumma Rose. She walked up to her. Tasha gasped. “I see you’re pregnant,” said Mumma Rose, looking at Tasha’s bump. “Who’s the father?” asked Mumma Rose. “Robbie,” Tasha lied. Mumma Rose took out a knife, “Then I’m going to have to destroy the baby maybe even you,” said Mumma Rose. “I lied, It’s Jonah,” said Tasha. “You’ve finally got your destiny,” said Mumma Rose. “You’re sick, you all are sick!” said Tasha. “It’s a way of life,” said Mumma Rose. “You beast!” said Tasha. “You drugged my best friend! You nearly drowned my husband! You got me pregnant! Now what do you want?” “Your baby, My grandchild,” said Mumma Rose. a grin spread across her face. *** “Did she say where she was going?” Jack asked. “She said she was going for a walk…” said Robbie. “Did she say where?” Jack asked. “Along the beach,” said Robbie. Martha looked worriedly at both of them. “Me and the search party are going to go look for her,” said Jack. “I’m coming too,” said Robbie. “No, you should stay here,” said Jack. Robbie nodded. “Anyway, we’ll be back soon,” said Jack. “Be careful!” said Martha. “I do want you back,” “I’ll try my best to stay alive,” Jack smiled. Martha pulled him into a long kiss. “Okay, I should be going,” said Jack. He kissed her cheek and left. *** “I’m not going to give you the baby, ever!” said Tasha. “Well, I’m going to have tot take it for myself then,” said Mumma Rose. “Why are you doing this to me?” Tasha asked. Mumma Rose pursed her lips and didn’t answer. “Can you believe how lucky Jonah is? He gets to see the birth of his child,” said Mumma Rose. Jonah was led in from the door by two men. Tasha gasped. “You’re sick! Your whole family is sick!” said Tasha. “I’m sorry Tasha,” said Jonah. “Shut up Jonah,” said Mumma Rose. “I want to get this over with!” Jonah bit his lip to keep himself from talking. “Drink this,” said Mumma Rose. She handed a glass to Tasha. Tasha threw the glass onto the floor. “No!” said Tasha. Mumma Rose’s face grew red, she kicked the chair Tasha was sitting on and it fell to the ground along with Tasha. Tasha’s stomach hurt. Then the siren of a police car was heard. “Hands up!” said Jack, his gun pointing towards Mumma Rose and Jonah. “You have the right to remain silent!”
xsianx Posted August 31, 2006 Report Posted August 31, 2006 Dramatic chapter!! Love it! update soon please.
xsamie Posted August 31, 2006 Report Posted August 31, 2006 I loved this, it's getting better and better every chapter.
beckyboo Posted August 31, 2006 Report Posted August 31, 2006 Hey. this chapter is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!1 post more ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!1 xxxxxxxxxx
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