tasha7905 Posted September 11, 2006 Report Posted September 11, 2006 I want to bang Mattie and Luc's heads together, you belong together. . Great update cant wait for another.
shawtyy Posted September 11, 2006 Report Posted September 11, 2006 I want to bang Mattie and Luc's heads together, you belong together. . So do I! Great chapter, update soon.
-ParaisGal- Posted September 19, 2006 Report Posted September 19, 2006 Is this gunna be continued? Great going!
~Angel~ Posted September 19, 2006 Report Posted September 19, 2006 It's going to be continued. Schools started again so i've been busy, i'll try get a chapter up as soon as i can.
~Angel~ Posted September 20, 2006 Report Posted September 20, 2006 I thought I should most 2 chapters, since I've been keeping you waiting... Chapter 27 Rachel walked into the hospital room where Tasha was. “I’m sorry Tasha, you’ve had a miscarriage,” Rachel said. Tasha felt tears coming to her eyes. “I was so excited about being a mum,” she sobbed. Martha took her right hand and Robbie took her left. Jack put his hands on Martha’s shoulders. Tasha hugged Robbie, crying into his shoulder. “I’ll leave you in peace,” Rachel said quietly. “We better go too,” Martha said. She hugged Tasha and then walked out with Jack hand-in-hand. *** “I’m so sorry Tasha,” Beth said. She hugged Tasha. “Trying to steal the baby. And it was her plan in the first place,” Beth muttered. Tasha wiped her eyes which had gone puffy and red from the crying. “Are you sure you’re dealing with it calmly?” Tony asked. Tasha nodded and then started crying again. She ran into her room. “What’s going to happen now?” Beth asked. “We’re going to have to deal with it, I guess,” Robbie replied. Chapter 28 “You’d actually jump of a cliff to get back into my good books?” “If that’s what it takes,” “Well I’ve got another challenge for you,” “What now, you want me jumping through burning hoops on the way down?” “Martha, Martha!” Jack said. “Wake up!” “I was in the middle of such a great dream!” Martha complained. “What were you dreaming about?” Jack asked. “Me and Brad Pitt were kissing,” Martha replied. “Brad Pitt?” Jack said, his eyes wide. “You and Brad Pitt?” “Only joking!” Martha said. “I was dreaming about you!” Jack kissed her. “Why do you have to go to work all the time?” Martha said. Jack raised his eyebrows. “I’m just saying,” Martha said. She kissed Jack. Jack broke away from her kiss and started to kiss her neck. “I guess I can stay home for half an hour,” Jack said. “If you want me to,” Martha grinned cheekily. *** “I’m sorry about what I said,” Jessie apologized. “It’s okay,” Jack said. “I remember Martha telling me she’d always love me,” Jack said. “Right…” Jack said uncomfortably. Jessie left. Martha came up to Jack and kissed him. Jack pulled away. “What’s wrong?” Martha asked. “Nothing, I just remembered I’ve got to do something,” Jack said. He ran out leaving a puzzled Martha. *** Martha saw Jack walking. She caught up with him and hugged him. Jack unwrapped her arms from around him. “Oh! I’ve got to go,” Jack said quickly. “No you don’t,” said Martha. She grabbed his wrist to stop him from going. “You’ve been avoiding me for the whole day and I want an explanation,” Martha said. “Why don’t you go ask Jessie,” Jack muttered. “What’s he said?” Martha asked. “Nothing,” Jack said. “I just think that you two belong together not us,” Jack said. He started walking away. “Jack don’t do this to me!” Martha shouted. Jack heard her but didn’t stop. “I love you, not Jessie!” Martha yelled. “I love you too,” Jack muttered under his breath.
tasha7905 Posted September 20, 2006 Report Posted September 20, 2006 Oh Jack dont be such a muppet, poor Martha. Poor Tasha too. Hope there is more soon.
beckyboo Posted September 20, 2006 Report Posted September 20, 2006 Jack she loves you Shes havening your baby not Jessie's update like ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xsianx Posted September 20, 2006 Report Posted September 20, 2006 Jessie and Martha. Jack and Corey - Sorry had to be said. Lol Awww nooo Jack don't listen to Jessie!
Sarah_Lewis Posted September 20, 2006 Report Posted September 20, 2006 That is awesome i love it =p update as soon as possible =p
Tasha Posted September 21, 2006 Report Posted September 21, 2006 Jack is such a loser. And what the heck is Jesse up to?? “I remember Martha telling me she’d always love me,” Jack said. Is that meant to be Jesse's name instead of Jack's?? Kah! Jesse is such a loser. Why do people alwayz try break Jack and Martha up Great chapters though Please update soon
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