~Angel~ Posted September 21, 2006 Report Posted September 21, 2006 don't worry people, i'm just trying to keep you in suspense. next chapter might be up later today or tomorrow
~Angel~ Posted September 29, 2006 Report Posted September 29, 2006 Sorry I took so long. I've got the worst teacher ever this year and she's given us a project to do, so I've been quite busy. Here's the next chapter... Chapter 29 “Lee’s coming over today,” Lucas said to Tony. It was loud enough for Matilda to hear. “I invited Dean over Mum!” Matilda said even louder. “Hey sis, Hey future bro-in-law,” Kit greeted them. Lucas and Matilda glared at each other. “So you’re not exactly going to be my Bro-in-law…” Kit started. “Lee must be a good kisser because every time you’re seen with her you’re kissing her!” Matilda said. “She’s better than you!” Lucas exclaimed. “Calm down,” said Kit. “Dean’s better than you!” Matilda shouted. “Lee’s the best!” Lucas shouted back. “Stop it! Both of you,” Kit said. “Hi,” said Henry walking in. He saw Matilda and Lucas glaring at each other, their faces had gone crimson. “Lucas, can I talk to you?” Henry asked, nervously. “Sure,” sighed Lucas getting up. “I was just trying to protect Mattie,” Henry said, when they got outside. “you can go out with her again.” “You’re too late,” said Lucas. “She likes someone else now,” *** “Mum, I’m meeting Dean in an Hour for our first date,” Matilda said. “That’s great,” said Beth. Lee and Lucas burst through the door, laughing. “That was hilarious!” Lee giggled. “I know!” Lucas laughed. “Did you see her face, it was classic!” “I think I’m crying with Laughter,” Lee said wiping her eyes. Then she saw Matilda and Beth. “Oh, hi Mrs. Hunter, Hi Mattie,” she smiled. “Whatever!” said Matilda. “Matilda!” said Beth. “Hello Lee,” “I’ll go,” Lee said quietly. “Bye,” She kissed Lucas on the cheek and quickly ran out. “What should I wear tonight?” Matilda asked Beth, holding up 2 dresses. “Are you going on a date with Dean?” Lucas asked. “Yeah,” said Matilda. “have a good time,” Lucas said, smiling. He walked into his room. Matilda was surprised by his response. “So he really doesn’t care,” she muttered to herself. But Lucas was inside his room looking at a picture of Matilda and Lucas on Martha and Jack’s wedding day. He stared at the picture long until he couldn’t take it any longer and he threw it onto his bed.
xsianx Posted September 29, 2006 Report Posted September 29, 2006 Don't you just want to smash Matties and Lucas heads together?!?! Lol great writing, looking forwrad to the next.
Tasha Posted September 30, 2006 Report Posted September 30, 2006 ^^ what she said Great chapter though Please update soon
tasha7905 Posted October 2, 2006 Report Posted October 2, 2006 They are both so stubborn just admit you want to be together Great update, I cant believe they are both dating others. Cant wait for more.
~Angel~ Posted November 11, 2006 Report Posted November 11, 2006 sorry that I haven't updated in ages but I've been really busy with school work and projects and stuff. Here a preview for what's going to happen in the coming two chapters *Jack thinks about his actions but will Martha forgive him? *And what does Jessie do to Martha that Martha can't prevent from happening? Jack is such a loser. And what the heck is Jesse up to?? “I remember Martha telling me she’d always love me,” Jack said. Is that meant to be Jesse's name instead of Jack's?? Kah! Jesse is such a loser. Why do people alwayz try break Jack and Martha up Great chapters though Please update soon yes that is supposed to be Jesse, sorry about that
gawguss_tiff Posted November 12, 2006 Report Posted November 12, 2006 wow this is great i love it soo.. sad that jack just broke up with her though... i hope she doesnt go running to jesse lol
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