jack4martha_forever Posted August 4, 2006 Report Posted August 4, 2006 OMG Yay. Thats like the best thing ive read all day. Tashas is leaving Please update soon
tasha7905 Posted August 4, 2006 Report Posted August 4, 2006 Bye Tasha. I Hope Robbie doesnt do something stupid like persuade her to stay. Great chapter cant wait for more. Sorry to hear about your gran.
beckyboo Posted August 4, 2006 Report Posted August 4, 2006 Come on hurry up and post some more u cnt leave us wondering what Martha is going to say to Jack!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please pretty please with cherry on top lol !!!!!!!!!!!!! xxxx great fic keep going!
-Annie- Posted August 5, 2006 Report Posted August 5, 2006 ^^Be patient becky, angel_a has other things to deal with at the moment.
Jasminka_13 Posted August 5, 2006 Report Posted August 5, 2006 Sorry to hear about your gran *huggies*. Good work in the story thing, its awesome. Don't worry about updating for a while. Ok. *more huggies*
~Angel~ Posted August 8, 2006 Report Posted August 8, 2006 Here's the next chapter, sorry it's so short... Chapter 10 “Martha, get up of the sofa and go tell him,” said Alf. “Martha you’re pregnant with his child he deserves to know,” said Sally. “That’s exactly what I told her!” said Kit. Martha listened to the three of them silently. “Martha you’ve got…” Alf began. “Just stop it!” said Martha. Alf, Sally and Kit shut up at once. “Thanks for the advice but no thanks!” said Martha. “I’ll choose when the time is right!” She got up of the sofa and went up to her room. “I’ll go now,” said Kit slowly. *** Rachel saw Jack sitting in ‘Noah’s’. She went up to him. “Hello,” she said. “Hi,” said Jack. “Congratulations, I forgot to say it to you earlier,” said Rachel. “Congratulations for what?” said Jack. “For Martha being pregnant!” said Rachel. “Martha’s pregnant?!” said Jack. Rachel realized what she had just done. “She didn’t tell you?” said Rachel but Jack had already left. *** He walked up to Sally’s front door and knocked. Martha answered it. “Oh, Hi Jack,” said Martha. “You’re pregnant and you didn’t tell me!” Jack cut across her. “How did you find out?” asked Martha, surprised. “That doesn’t matter! What matter’s is when were you planning on telling me,” said Jack. “I was going to tell you!” she said. “Martha! Your pregnant and your s…” he started. Martha looked at him. “Your pregnant and your single,” said Jack. Martha felt tears watering up in her eyes. “Your single, because I don’t want anything to do with you anymore,” said Jack. He turned around and walked away. Martha started to cry.
loobieloo Posted August 8, 2006 Report Posted August 8, 2006 oh noooo! Don't do it Jack !!! Turn around and tell her you love her!!! Awww great chapter there I nearly cried at the end lol. sooo sad! When's the next chapter going to be up? I am tooo addicted to the fics on here! Everyones writing is just too good
xsianx Posted August 8, 2006 Report Posted August 8, 2006 Jack!!!!!!!!!! You love her you idiot! Poor Martha...
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