Split (by -Jade-) - comments

[-Jade-]

Maybe someone should start a Jack and Martha fanfiction site.

I agree with you there!

[-lolly-]

Yes please please write more fan fics (especialy martha/jack ones cos they're the best) your a great writer and i would LOVE to read more stories written by you!!!!!

[M&J 4eva]

Great chapter! yes please write more

[Sal_gurl]

Love it Please write more fam fics

[da_love_goddess]

Great chapter. I hope Lucas and Jack get the proof they need to expose Julia. Hope you update soon.

[Nicom]

“Hi, wow you look fantastic Martha!” exclaimed Robbie.

“Hey!” said Tasha and Jack indignantly. Jack realised his mistake. At that moment he had forgotten that they were no longer an item. There was an awkward silence

LMAO! I love that part! When I read it I cringed. Lol.

Great Chapter! =)

[linzie_mac01]

Oh wow, that was absolutley brilliant...great tension!!

And by the way i definitely think you should carry on writing more fanfics, esp about Jack and Martha! lol

[linzie_mac01]

Ooh Martha sometimes I really just want to give that girl a good slap!!

Pull yourself together woman!! You know you wanted to kiss Jack, its not fair to blame him coz you've already hurt him before

Don't worry Jack, you just come here to me... I'll take care of you lol

[Nicom]

Ooh Martha sometimes I really just want to give that girl a good slap!!

Pull yourself together woman!! You know you wanted to kiss Jack, its not fair to blame him coz you've already hurt him before

Don't worry Jack, you just come here to me... I'll take care of you lol

Lol.

Jack don't listen to Martha, she's a bit crazy. =) Very good chapter! =) Go jackandmartha!!! Lol.

[Love_peter_Baker]

Really good. more soon.