The Shocking Return

[Guest]

I am writing my Fan Fic on mircosoft word then I will copy and paste it on here ok

[~Rosey~]

I like it Kepp up the good work

[Guest]

The mayor office

Alf is sitting on a chair at his desk ‘Come in Ms Vale

Amanda: Mr Stewart I need you to tell Belle to meet at my place

Alf: Amanda why Belle is living with Irene and don’t tell me you are her mother

Amanda: How did you know?

Alf: Morag and Belle Is not in the right stake now and the real identify of Belle’s Mother will be tested and for all we know that you may not be the mother it could be Irene as I know she gave up a child when she was 14 as well

Amanda: But Belle was born in 1990 and I was 14 at the time

Alf: Well then let stop talking about this and please get out of my Office

The Beach

Kim is walking along the beach with Rachael

Kim: So Rach when is the test result back

Rachael: Um don’t know but I will transferred this to the city

Kim: Ok I will be at the gym if you need me

Rachael: Ok see you

Kim: Yeh um try and not do too much today at work

Rachael: Hey I will be fine

The Diner Colleen is having a farewell party

Sally: Welcome come guys as we are here today to say goodbye to Colleen and Tom now where do I start ok about 19 years ago I met Colleen now when she helps me through many things like coping with my husband death and when Pippa left and I did make a great friend called Lance but now the time has come to an end I want to wish you and Colleen and Tom a very best and a happy ending we will miss you

Irene: Colleen you are such a great friend to me I will never forget the day that you help me when I had hard times I will miss you

Alf: Colleen my friend what a rollercoaster we had since everything that happen it made me think you and my sister Morag it just funny but I will never forget the great friendship we had over the years

Colleen: Thank you so much everyone I had a great time here in summer bay but I hope you all have a wonderful day even after today goodbye my friends

Colleen and Tom goes into a taxi and drives off

Summer Bay High

The bell rings for lunch

Cassie: Hey Mattie what do you have next

Mattie: I have Human Bio

Cassie: Oh I have History with Ric

Mattie: Hey don’t worry about the slant

The other part of the school

Lucas: Hey Ric how was Maths

Ric: Not too bad but I have History with Cassie

Lucas: Oh not good I got PE with my dad now that is even worst isn’t it

Ric: Yeh but he better when he is not teaching

Lucas: Ha-ha very funny

Belle walks up to Dan

Dan: Giddy Belle

Belle: Hey Mr Baker what coming up in Drama today

Dan: Um we will be doing our performance I guess

Belle: Ok but I will be 5 minutes late as the Dean wants to see me

Dan: Ok that fine

Belle: Thanks

Belle walks off

A mystery Car goes past the Hunter/Holden house

The Pad

Jack: Martha will you be alright today as I have to go and do my duties

Martha: Yes I will be ok and I will ring you if I need to

Jack: Ok see you

The classroom

Cassie: Um Ms can I go and see Mattie

Ms Whittle: Yes

Outside Mattie classroom

Cassie: Are you ok Mattie because you look so hot and tired

Mattie: Look I am fine ok I don’t need you to turn into my mother

Mattie faints

Cassie: Mattie wake up come on

Ms Doubt: we need to call an ambulance

Cassie: I will ring Beth

Will Mattie be heartbroken by the truth of her burns and scars?

Is Martha alright?

[Guest]

Should i make a poll who do think the seven people that will die in my fan fic and then i will see who might be right becareful who you choose as it may be some love ones

[-Chris-]

Should i make a poll who do think the seven people that will die in my fan fic and then i will see who might be right becareful who you choose as it may be some love ones

That could be a good idea,

[Guest]

Should i make a poll who do think the seven people that will die in my fan fic and then i will see who might be right becareful who you choose as it may be some love ones

That could be a good idea,

Um -Chris- i dont know how to post with a poll on it

[Guest]

-Chris- the polls are up it in the purple box ok

[Guest]

The Hospital

Mattie is rush into operating therete

Cassie: Will she be ok please tell me

Racheal: Um I dont know yet but we will look at these burns and scars

Cassie: What but I thought she was ok but today I ask her if she needs a doctor and she said no

Racheal: Cassie please if you want me to find out about Mattie then let me go ok

Cassie: Ok can I ring Beth

Racheal: Yes there the telephone over there

The Holden House

Ring Ring Beth comes and picks the phone

Beth: Hello this is Beth Holden here Cassie slow down and I will be straight away

The Hospital

Beth comes running in

Beth: Cassie are you alright

Cassie: No It Mattie she collasped at school today

Beth: But she told me she was ok

Cassie: No It not that It the burns and the scars

Beth: What where is she Oh Racheal please tell me that Mattie is ok

Racheal: Um I cant tell you as It very hard for me to explain this

Beth: But she my daughter

Racheal: I know she is but i cant tell Mattie as well

Beth: Ok we can find a quite place

Racheal: Yes now is that ok Cassie I dont want you to hear this untill Beth decides to tell you

Cassie: Ok

Racheal's Office

Beth: So what the news will she be ok

Racheal: When was the last time Mattie got sunburnt

Beth: just two weeks ago

Racheal: Oh no Beth you can have every right to do anything to me as it heartbreaking

Beth: Ok

Racheal: She got...got...Cancer

Beth: No but she only 17 she cant go now not yet

Racheal: Beth I never want to say this I am so sorry

Beth: Um how much has she got to live

Racheal: 6 months

Beth: No that to soon there must be a mistake

Racheal: I wish I could change it but all we and you can do is help her fight this

Beth: Yes I am sacred if I told her or the kids

Racheal: I think if you tell someone that close to you maybe Tony or Irene

Beth: Um no I just want a quite day ok

Racheal: Yeh sure sorry Beth

The Holden House

Beth walks in nobody is there she picks up a photo of her and Mattie she starts crying

The Pad

Martha feels a pain in her tummy

Martha: Ouch

Matha starts to sreacm Jack comes to the recuse

Jack: Martha just stay calm and I will call an amblance

The Hospital

Martha is now rushed into Labour

Nurse Green: Martha your baby may only be 32 weeks but it will be ok

Martha: What but it not a baby yet

Jack: Martha just hold my hand

Martha sreacms as the baby is pull out

Nurse Green: It a baby Girl

Martha: Jack did you hear that it a beutiful girl

Jack: Yeh I wonder what we could call the baby

Martha: Um what about your mother's name

Jack: Um how about Bree

Martha: Bree Holden I like that

Will Beth tell Robbie that Mattie got Cancer?

[jack4martha_forever]

Awwww...Bree Holden. How cute. Why did Martha say "What but it not a baby yet"? i didnt get that She was 8 months, of course its a baby Silly Girl. But im happy for Jack and Martha. Im not looking forward to these couple of bad things that happens to Martha Poor Mattie

Please update soon

[Guest]

The Holden House

All the Hunters/Holden are eating breakfast but Beth is very quite since she heard about Mattie

Robbie: Mum are you ok you have been very quite since yesterday

Beth: Oh it just that um

Robbie: Come on mum tell us

Lucas: How Mattie

Beth: She fine she will need to stay at hospital for a few days

Lucas: Can I see her

Beth: No I think it best if I see her Robbie I want to talk to you something Privative

Robbie: Um sure

Robbie's room

Beth: Um do you remeber the burns and sacrs Mattie got last year

Robbie: Yeh

Beth starts to cry

Beth: She has....I cant say it Rob

Robbie: No one is here

Beth: She got Cancer

Robbie: No way not now she only 17

Beth: Yes but there nothing we can do but support her I havn't even told Mattie yet

Robbie: You havn't but are you

Beth: But you need to come with me as I can't do it on my own

Robbie: OK how long has she got to live

Beth: 6 months

Robbie: That to soon I mean like what are we meant to do

Beth: Well we will make sure she got all the support she needs right now

Robbie: Ok I will be right by your side ok

Beth: Thanks

They both hug as they both cries

The Beach House

Irene: Hey Darl

Tasha: Oh hey Rennie

Irene: So what up with you today

Tasha: Nothing but working at the bar

Irene: Oh I see Alf gave it to Beth then you can help her

Tasha: Um yep see you

Irene: Ok darl

Irene sits on the chair and reads a letter from Barry she puts it in her box under the stairs

The Pad

Jack: Welcome Bree Holden this is your new home

Martha: This is so great Jack you have done a great job

Jack: Yeh we should make a chrising for Bree

Martha: I don't know about that but yeh I need some time to think about it

Jack: Yeh

The seats

Beth is walking along thinking about the last 6 months for Mattie life but finally agreed to see Mattie

The Hospital

Robbie and Beth walks to Mattie room

Robbie: Mum will you be ok

Beth: Yes sweetie

Mattie: Hey Mum and Rob so what was about my faint

Beth: It a long story and you will probbly hate me for this but I don't know if I can do this

Mattie: Come on tell me how about if Robbie gose out

Beth: Um ok sure but he knows as well

Mattie: Fine then

Robbie rubs Beth back

Beth: Ok remeber last year when the expolsion happen

Mattie: Yes I was baddly burnt

Beth: Yes you were and Racheal told me what it was about

Mattie: Mum please I want to know now

Beth: Mattie what ever happens to you I will be right by your side even with this

Mattie: Ok time is now tell me was happing to me

Beth: You got...Cancer

Beth starts to cry hard out

Mattie: No I can't be dying this is too soon I want adult life how long have I got to live

Beth: Only 6 months

Mattie: No that way to soon

Beth: I am so sorry

Night time a car gose past 'I am back summer bay'

Who is back in summer bay?

Is Amanda friends with this person that comes back?