jack4martha_forever Posted August 15, 2006 Report Posted August 15, 2006 awwww...Martha doesnt want to christen Baby Bree...meh! Great chapter Please update soon
Guest Posted August 16, 2006 Report Posted August 16, 2006 The Diner Beth walks in and see's Irene Irene: Hey love how are you Beth: Fine do you mind if I tell you something Irene: Um sure The back of the counter Beth: This will only be between me and you and my kids Irene: Ok what is it Beth: It mattie she got Cancer Irene: What but she only 17 she cant go soon she not even my age Beth: I know and all we can do is give her the most support and care she needs Irene: Yeh Mattie (1990-2006) that is so so soon Beth: Well 6 months of her life what the hell am I going to do when she gone Irene: I will be there for you all the way even when Mattie gose Both Irene and Beth hugs The Masion Amanda picks the phone up Amanda: Hello this is Amanda Vale here Rhys: When can I come is taking long Amanda: Don't worry but you will need to hide from Beth Rhys: Why Amanda: Because Married and if you stuff her life I make your life hell Rhys: Give it your best shot Amanda: Yeh will why dont you get the hell away from here you little fool The Bar Martha is working as Beth got a few days off Martha: Thanks grandad Alf: No probblem love Martha: Um make sure Bree is asleep when when you read a book or sing a song to her Alf: Sure love The Beach Cassie: Oi Belle what are you up to Belle: Um nothing I just came to see Drew Cassie: Ok see you The Holden House it night Beth and Tony watch TV Tony: What a day Beth: Yeh I will be off to bed are you coming Tony: Yep There is a knock Beth gose and answer Beth is shock Who is at the door? Is Mumma Rose back to get tasha or has she teamed up with someone else? Tasha is in danger?
jack4martha_forever Posted August 16, 2006 Report Posted August 16, 2006 great chapter Please update soon
Guest Posted August 16, 2006 Report Posted August 16, 2006 The Holden House Beth: What are you doing here Rhys you broke my heart and now you are back Rhys: No it not that Me and Sheally broke up Beth: Good for you get the hell out of my life Beth slammed the door and gose to her bed The Bush A figure walks up to a caravan and gose in inside It Mumma Rose The close by bush Tasha: Martha do you want to go on a camping trip with me Martha: Well um sure we are we going Tasha: Tomorrow maybe Martha: Ok sure Little they know that Mumma Rose is listing to them The Diner Beth walks in and sees Rhys Beth: What the flammin hell you are doing here Rhys: We need to talk Beth: There is nothing to talk about what you did to broke my heart I am married to someone else now Rhys: Good for you Beth: What do you want just leave me alone you tart Irene see Beth yelling Irene: Hey what all the yelling about Beth: Sorry Irene but look who back Beth shows Rhys Irene: Rhys what are you doing here Rhys: Um nothing just seeing Beth Beth: Look there is nothing to talk about Rhys: Fine then Rhys walks out The campsite Martha: Did you hear that Tasha Tasha: Not sure I will just cheack it out Martha: OK Tasha gose and walk into the bush Tasha: Hello anybody Mumma Rose: Well I am here Tasha spins around It Mumma Rose Tasha srecms but Mumma Rose tied her up and gose to her caravan It looks like Tasha been kidnapped but Will Martha discoverd the truth about Mumma Rose return? Will Rhys kidnapped Beth from Tony? (This Is a quick promo but one death is before the big rip) At the end of October At Leah and Dan's wedding Annieverstery There will be the biggest rip ever and 6 will die and some geust will die so prepare for the showdown
Guest Posted August 17, 2006 Report Posted August 17, 2006 Guys I will do a short one as I have exams over the next two weeks ok The Holden House Beth throws a hissie fit because Rhys is back in town Tony: Beth He will be gone in a flash Beth: No Tony he wants me and he was a sicko Tony: He was I know I will see him Beth: No Tony what happens if you get in a fight Tony: Don't worry I will knock him out The Beach Mattie walks along and spotted Rhys she walks up to him and has a go at him Mattie: What are doing here you broke my mum heart when you left you made it clear you still loved Sheally Rhys: Now Mattie why don't you go away Mattie gives Rhys a good old slap in the face The Patterson/Baker House Dan: Leah why are you not at work today Leah: I am on break today Dan: Oh ok so me,you and Ryan will go out for the day Leah: Ok also VJ will come as well Guys this is not finished yet but it wont be updated in two weeks time but I may do it tomorrow but we will have to wait and see
jack4martha_forever Posted August 17, 2006 Report Posted August 17, 2006 Marthaaaaaaaaa. I just felt like saying that since nothing has happened to her YET Haha, Rhys tries to kidnap Beth, what happened to Shelly? Please update soon
Guest Posted August 17, 2006 Report Posted August 17, 2006 This will be the next part as I start school late today Cotinues from The Patterson/Baker House Dan: Ok let get ready The Flat Rhys: Hey It me Rhys I am going to Beth's tonight so I can get her but first I will get that Tony out the way Dani: Dad do what ever you want you are still not going back to mum Rhys: Yes well it wont be long Rhys hangs up the phone The Holden's House Beth is alone she hears a nosie Beth: Who is that Tony are you there The nosie is making a huge rattle as Beth gets the phone and rings Tony The Bar Tony's phone rings it Beth Tony: Beth slow down The Holden's House Beth: Tony I think there is someone is here someone comes and grabs Beth around the mouth Beth starts srecaming Tony runs to the car and drives so fast he almost knock someone over The Holden's House Tony: Beth Rhys: Well well look at this Tony: Tell me where is Beth and if you hurt her you will be dead Tony hears Beth srecms Tony runs to her but rhys puch Tony Tony and Rhys are having a fight Rhys gets crack up in the nose Tony wins Tony sees Beth tied up to her window Tony: Beth it ok I am here now the cops will be coming I think Beth: I am so scared now and soon the whole suthurland's will be on me Tony: No they wont us Holdens can run them over The Fair Mattie: Cassie do you want to come and go on the rollercoster with me Cassie: Sure it your day and your money Mattie: Yeh thanks for coming to spend the day with me Cassie: That ok Over the otherside of the fair is Dan and Leah also Ryan and VJ Ryan: Dad look there the zoom tube Dan: Yeh do you want a ride on that Ryan: Yeh with VJ Leah: Um if VJ comes then Dan will have to come Ryan: Ok what about you Leah: Um no I wont be coming on Ryan: Why Leah: Well I will be taking a photo of you coing down The Police station Jack: Well Mr Sutharland what are we going to do to you Rhys: Look I never hurt Beth Jack: Well I dont care I am putting you at rape charged Rhys: Well cop you will never win Jack: We will see The street Martha is walking baby Bree in a pram Tasha comes up to them Martha: Oh hey Tasha Tasha: Hey where are you off to Martha: Nothing but I can I ask you a big favour Tasha: Sure Martha: I was going to ask you and Robbie to be godparents Tasha: Um if this what you want then yes we will be happy to be Bree godparents Remeber when I said Mattie only got 6 months to live well 6 months is nearly there Will Kane, Kirsty, Dani and Sheally return to summer bay? Irene gets a blast from the past Is Mumma Rose still out there or has she return to the city? Um about the Mumma Rose kidnapped Tasha well Tasha eventally esapced but Mumma Rose comes back to see Tasha but shock that Tasha is not there.
jack4martha_forever Posted August 18, 2006 Report Posted August 18, 2006 Mumma Rose better go back to the city and leave Martha and Baby Bree alone Great chapter though Please update soon
Traceve Posted August 18, 2006 Report Posted August 18, 2006 Hahah Matilda poked you in the face! *sticks out tougne at Rhys* Will Rachel be in it soon??? Update soon!
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.