Oxidizer Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 That would've been cool. It annoys me so much that with all the possible ways this story could've gone, they chose the lamest, most disappointing one. I know! That really pisses me off! I think that the whole Gillan/Witness Protection storyline was ruined thanks to the sh*tty ending that didn't really answer any questions at all. Urgh, don't even get me started on that, they should've filmed extra footage with Zoe and Tracey in that barn. How about medical drugs? You can really f*ck someone up by overdosing them on insulin or potassium and Zoe would have access to that stuff Ooh! Noted. I think I'm going to enjoy myself writing this stuff.
luckyrabbit Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 Ooh! Noted. I think I'm going to enjoy myself writing this stuff. And I think that I'm going to enjoy reading it. So, teaser for Blank, anyone?
Oxidizer Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 YES! Yes! Yesssssssssssss! And that just totally sounded like an orgasm, didn't it?
luckyrabbit Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 "How are your dreams? Any changes?" Doctor Klein asked, looking at Zoe over the top of her clipboard. "Have they revealed anything about your past?" "No, they're still stuck on the same channel. All fire, all the time." Zoe sighed, picking off a piece of lint that was stuck to the fabric of her dark pants. How many times could a person ask the same question and still expect a different response? "But I guess that makes sense, right? I mean, that would be my most recent and intense memory, the accident?" Klein nodded along to her hypothesis, careful not to give anything away. "Other than the dreams, how are you faring?" "Same as I was the last you asked. I know things but I have no idea how I learnt them. I have scars I don't remember getting. The first twenty six years of my life are just one great, big black hole." she noticed Klein scribble something down and open her mouth to reply. "And if even think about asking how that makes me feel, I am going to jump over this desk and snap your neck." Smirking in response, Klein set down her notes and lent across the desk. "You're still having trouble controlling those violent tendencies, I see." "Only towards people I don't particularly like very much." "Such as?" "You and Keller." "That all?" "Well, I do have a rather limited exposure to people at the moment." Zoe said, cracking her knuckles impatiently. At first she had appreciated the counseling sessions, she hadn't wanted to burden Tracey with all her jumbled thoughts so having Doctor Klein to unload on was a welcomed relief. For the first few weeks. After that they had just become tedious and they constantly found themselves going around in circles and repeating themselves. "I'm sure there are other people in the world who'll **** me off just as badly." "And what will you do to them? Would you hurt them?" "What? No! Just because I make threats, doesn't mean I'm actually going to go through with them. You telling me you never say things that you don't mean, Doc?" "Of course I do, every day in fact. However, I neither possess the training nor skill to follow through. You do. I don't know if you realize how dangerous you are, Zoe." "I wouldn't hurt an innocent person." Zoe said gravely. If some bad guys happened to get injured or even killed in the course of a mission that was fine, expected even, but it wasn't like she was going to maim somebody for screwing up her coffee order. "I'm glad to hear that." Klein smiled, showing off her teeth and making Zoe think that she and Keller must share the same dentist. "Now, why don't we talk about Tracey?"
Oxidizer Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 They're teeth are so fake! Everything else is about them! I freakin' loved that teaser! I'm really hyped about the full thing, when'd you think it'd be ready for posting?
luckyrabbit Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 I have no idea when it's going to be ready, I'm only about halfway done and it's being difficult *smacks fic* And since I'm bored, here's another tiny teaser It was the same as it was every night. The smell of smoke, burning hair and flesh and plastic, mingling together, strong enough to make her want to gag. Flames surrounding her, the heat searing at her skin. Sometimes there were terrified screams, people calling out unfamiliar names as they searched desperately for their loved ones. Other times it was just the hiss and crackle of the fire as it devoured everything in it's path. That was par for the course, as far as Zoe's dreams went. What happened next was not. "I always said Summer Bay would pay." echoed a disembodied yet familiar voice, to distorted for her to recognize.
Oxidizer Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 Hee! Another teasers, another teaser!! That's got me so excited! Looks like her memory isn't completely erased after all, I wonder if she'll get it back or that's just it? Poor Zoe, she must be driven insane by the end of this.
luckyrabbit Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 You mean more insane than she was before? All shall be revealed in time. Writing Tracey in this fic has been giving me a bit of trouble so I watched some of her episodes today and was noticing all kinds of stuff. Like in her first episode, while she's standing there waiting for Peter to notice the box on his desk, she's looking up at the ceiling pretending not to notice it's there. And in the episode where Peter shoots that guy, watch her reaction to him telling her that he thought it was Zoe. She's all shocked and scared, like she's just realizing that Peter could really hurt Zoe.
Oxidizer Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 Heh! She really loves Zoe. Like when they were in Apartment 7 and Peter got his gun out, Tracey was getting worried like 'Are you actually indeninding on using that?' Blank!Tracey rocks! She's so sympathetic yet angry [from what I've seen], I love it!
luckyrabbit Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 Heh! She really loves Zoe. Like when they were in Apartment 7 and Peter got his gun out, Tracey was getting worried like 'Are you actually indeninding on using that?' She's constantly trying to protect her little Zoekins. I think that's why she showed up at the abattoir and caught Zoe herself, because she knew if it was just Jack and Peter, they'd most likey just shoot her first and then ask questions later. But that bit with the box of blanks is hilarious because she's making such an effort not to look, she was like "Box? What box? I don't see any box and I most definitely didn't put it there." Blank!Tracey rocks! She's so sympathetic yet angry [from what I've seen], I love it! Oh yeah, she's angry. She gets to slap Keller in part 3
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