Oxidizer Posted November 25, 2006 Report Posted November 25, 2006 I was in London earlier (it's a 30 minute train ride) - got a new jacket. This certain storyline wouldn't involve a certain detective who returned from the grave, would it? Guh. I know. I can't believe how Zoe's return was handled. It was so unprofessional and rushed and don't even think DB had the intention of explaining. And yep, there'll be that experimenting scene I did, and here's a teaser (well, what I've written so far), a little warning, this story is going to be dark and brutal: The jet black car with two iron bars installed across the windows pulled up outside the cold and cruel looking building which would be fourteen-year-old Eve Jacobsen’s home for the next six months. The driver exited the transfer vehicle and opened the door. “Come on, get out, we haven’t got all day.” He groaned in annoyance as Eve sat there, staring blankly back at him, unnerving him. “Now!” he yelled bitterly accompanied by a slap across her face, which almost made her growl as she got out of the car. The driver placed his hands on her shoulders and forcefully pushed her forwards towards the entrance of the young offenders institute. “Get a move on!” he yelled, nudging her in the back painfully. She turned around and smirked, looking at him square in the eye, before replying with a sweetened tone to her little voice. “I’m going to kill you. And anyone else who think they can break me.”
swfc Posted November 25, 2006 Report Posted November 25, 2006 I was in London earlier (it's a 30 minute train ride) - got a new jacket. This certain storyline wouldn't involve a certain detective who returned from the grave, would it? Guh. I know. I can't believe how Zoe's return was handled. It was so unprofessional and rushed and don't even think DB had the intention of explaining. And yep, there'll be that experimenting scene I did, and here's a teaser (well, what I've written so far), a little warning, this story is going to be dark and brutal: Nice. Trust me not to know my geography. And I want to do archaeology. Who am I kidding? Oh, you went shopping. Very nice. Yes, it does. I ranted on that detective's thread. I tried to be as polite as I could so as not to offend any of his followers. Apparently, there are some people who are also a bit annoyed at the storyline too, so I'm not the only one. But, back to the topic at hand. I sincerely think he's gone off his rockers. He was so good when he first came on board and then he suddenly went downhill with all the glitches in the story. And the so called lies he said about time constraint as well as censorship issues. Seriously, that excuse was one of the most pathetic excuses that I've heard so far this year. In fact, it tops the list of my 'Pathetic excuses list.' I agree. He had no intention of doing so. He most probably thought, well, they served their purpose so, be gone now. It's like, thank you very much. You did what you were told to do. Now, goodbye. And, slams the door in their face. I can't wait for that experimenting scene. I love the teaser btw. Especially the last line where she says, “I’m going to kill you. And anyone else who think they can break me.”
Oxidizer Posted November 25, 2006 Report Posted November 25, 2006 Hee. I didn't even know why I thought I'd go to London, I was just bored of this town so thought I'd bring £50 with me and buy something. It was a random day. I take it you're not happy with the way Peter's been rewritten? He seems a bit 'rushed' - and I don't like him and Amanda together (I'll ge stoned by some for saying that ), but I find all of the couples laughable and pathetic now. None of them have any substance anymore thanks to whichever idiot decided on making almost every single couple switch with someone else. WTF was that all about?! I can't even express how annoyed I am with DB for ending the stalker storyline like that. It's nothing personal, I'm sure he's a decent guy, but his writing skills when it comes to 'explosive' climaxes really are a joke. Teehee , I'm glad you liked the teaser. There'll be some violence with a character called Jezebel, she's the resident hardnut, but could end up regretting crossing Eve's path... This fic will be inspired by a movie called Scum and the remake of Halloween.
swfc Posted November 25, 2006 Report Posted November 25, 2006 Hee. I didn't even know why I thought I'd go to London, I was just bored of this town so thought I'd bring £50 with me and buy something. It was a random day. Ah well, I'm sick of going out at the moment. Being made to walk the entire town and two different suburbs actually killed me. I take it you're not happy with the way Peter's been rewritten? He seems a bit 'rushed' - and I don't like him and Amanda together (I'll ge stoned by some for saying that ), but I find all of the couples laughable and pathetic now. None of them have any substance anymore thanks to whichever idiot decided on making almost every single couple switch with someone else. WTF was that all about?! Nope. I'm not at all. I wanted more father/son scenes. Instead, we get, father/son scenes with angst. It's like, geez. Enough of that. They guy's been made into a sissy with his relationship. I hate to say it but that's how I see it has become. Trust me, I'm being put off by him and Amanda more and more each day now. Which is not supposed to happen. The idiot happens to be a certain SP that we all love. It's beein ruined. I liked it how things were before. As much as I love the fact that Peter is alive, a part of me really wishes that he had just died if they were going to give him such a pathetic storyline. I can't even express how annoyed I am with DB for ending the stalker storyline like that. It's nothing personal, I'm sure he's a decent guy, but his writing skills when it comes to 'explosive' climaxes really are a joke. Yeah, I'm sure he is. But, the way in which he's handled the storylines for this year was really wrong. I think he sort of bit off too much that he could chew or something in the lines of that. I can never remember that quote. I think he had great ideas but just couldn't really express it well. Teehee , I'm glad you liked the teaser. There'll be some violence with a character called Jezebel, she's the resident hardnut, but could end up regretting crossing Eve's path... This fic will be inspired by a movie called Scum and the remake of Halloween. Loved the teaser, dude. I'd ask for more but I'll wait. Jezebel. The name itself already sounds like trouble. I bet you Eve won't even blink an eye at all over her. Can't wait for her to meet the Mistress if Hairflips. I'm going to be a bit thick and say that I have not seen nor heard of 'Scum' at all.
Oxidizer Posted November 25, 2006 Report Posted November 25, 2006 Ah well, I'm sick of going out at the moment. Being made to walk the entire town and two different suburbs actually killed me. Yikes! That sounds pretty rough. Nope. I'm not at all. I wanted more father/son scenes. Instead, we get, father/son scenes with angst. It's like, geez. Enough of that. They guy's been made into a sissy with his relationship. I hate to say it but that's how I see it has become. Trust me, I'm being put off by him and Amanda more and more each day now. Which is not supposed to happen. The idiot happens to be a certain SP that we all love. It's beein ruined. I liked it how things were before. As much as I love the fact that Peter is alive, a part of me really wishes that he had just died if they were going to give him such a pathetic storyline. I understand exactly where you're coming from. I know characters are supposed to/will change once they've return from the dead but the way Peter and Zoe were/are being handled is just annoying to say the least. It's like a total demolition of the characters and all of those layers have been reworked. The only thing that's the same are their looks and names. Yeah, I'm sure he is. But, the way in which he's handled the storylines for this year was really wrong. I think he sort of bit off too much that he could chew or something in the lines of that. I can never remember that quote. I think he had great ideas but just couldn't really express it well. That's the right quote I think. And I totally agree. He had some wicked ideas but carried them out wrongly. He could've merged two certain storylines together instead (stalker/pyro) for a decent and explosive finish. Loved the teaser, dude. I'd ask for more but I'll wait. Jezebel. The name itself already sounds like trouble. I bet you Eve won't even blink an eye at all over her. Can't wait for her to meet the Mistress if Hairflips. I'm going to be a bit thick and say that I have not seen nor heard of 'Scum' at all. She's not going to be a very nice person at all - even Eve's a bit put off by her... at first. Tracey's going to be the vulnerable one and you'll know why due to a sadistic prison guard. I'm not surprised you haven't heard of it - it's a 70s film I think and Britsh, so... And OMFG! A spider just fell from somewhere (either the ceiling or my hair) and landed on my eyelash! *screams like a big girl* and now I can feel something crawling up my f*cking leg!
swfc Posted November 25, 2006 Report Posted November 25, 2006 And OMFG! A spider just fell from somewhere (either the ceiling or my hair) and landed on my eyelash! *screams like a big girl* and now I can feel something crawling up my f*cking leg! ROTFL LMFAO I'm sorry, Andy. It took me a full blown minute or two to stop myself from laughing. *takes a huge deep breath* Anyway, back to the topic: I did it for a friend tho so I guess it should be okay. Helped me sleep so I guess there was some good that came out of it. Exactly! They look the same and they have the same names. But, apart from that, it's like a 360 degrees personality change. It's like, something happened to them when they apparently "died." And they're no longer the same person anymore. Oh, how freaky. It's plain boring to watch them now. [And I'm definitely going to be shot by that certain detective's followers one of these days] Exactly. I completely agreed. The pyro/stalker. Everything was so obviously related to each other. But, he chose to have one of them as a mafia thing to bring back Peter. It's a bit far fetched if you ask me. So many ways to deal with the storyline but he goes and takes the easy way out. I mean, I understand that H&A's got younger viewers but that didn't look like a problem at all last year. Why this year? What changed? How in the world did you come across that movie anyway? I just sounded so blonde. Lol. Tracey being vulnerable is so awww....
Oxidizer Posted November 25, 2006 Report Posted November 25, 2006 I'm glad your enjoying yourself at the expense of my terrifying experience! Guh, I know. The way everything's been written this year really is just lazy and rushed. I the the Josh killer reveal ep was done well though, and as a bonus we got Zoe at the end. A few staker eps were pretty good, like the tyre factory return, Maxine Trood, the bomb and the abattoir stuff. The other episodes were pretty bland and the 'same old deal'. Hee, it's gonna be interesting to write, because Tracey's the older one but Eve will be looking after her. So cute thinking about it. I'm looking foward to the Jezebel stuff - still thinking of nasty stuff she can do before a certain event stops her. From memory I think I heard about the film when my aunt was watching it a few years ago. I was pretty young and I was like 'omfg! this stuff is pretty sick' so naturally I loved it.
swfc Posted November 25, 2006 Report Posted November 25, 2006 Lol. It was funny. I tried not to laugh. But, the part where you said "Screams like a big girl" just cracked me up so much. OMG, yes! I loved the Josh's killer revealed episode. It was the best so far. And totally unexpected. Not going to rave about that here. So true, Zoe was back at the end. And looked so dang hot too. The bomb I love because it was Tracey's first episode and might I say she was just so cute. All innocent and bitchy at the same time. And the alarm clock in the abbatoir with the bullet that said 'PETER' on it was just awesome. Why can't the PB be the old PB? Urggh! I'm so not looking forward to next Friday to be honest. Eve looking after Tracey? Awwwww. It's just too cute. I hope their meeting will be pretty sweet. Like Eve stands up for Tracey or something. Ooo, a certain event? Now I am intrigued. I hope she doesn't hurt them. But, if she does so, Eve and Tracey will most probably get revenge anyway. Then my deepest sympathy would go to Jezebel.... Not Lol. I can't believe you can remember stuff when you were young. I can't remember any whatsoever. Who knows. Maybe I just blocked it out from memory or something.
Oxidizer Posted November 25, 2006 Report Posted November 25, 2006 I remember everything from when I was young. It's okay, I think I'd probably laugh too. Maybe Peter seems out of character because he hasn't got a serial killer to catch anymore? I don't think there's anyone to torment him anymore unless that silly gang mention Zoe and he could have flashbacks. Ooh, yummy mental image! Well Eve sees something pretty shocking and Tracey's forced to tell the truth, and that fires her up big time and she decides to looking after vulnerable Tracey from there. Jezebel is a pretty vicious bully and beats anyone up for even looking at her wrongly, so she gets her just desserts, but this is Eve we're talking about so it'll be exteme.
swfc Posted November 25, 2006 Report Posted November 25, 2006 Haha... Yeah. No more Zoe to torment him and no potential girlfried to betray him hence why he's become sane . I love him insane more than the sane, lovesick puppy that he is. Imagine, he takes the girl before the son. What kind of father is that? Okay, I'm just going to shut up about him coz this is the Zoe thread, not the PB thread. I wished the whole bit about the drugs and dreams came true. That would make far better torture. Then again, the gang mentioning Eve would be interesting. Then he'd be all normal again because he'd be obsessed with Zoe. Imagine him getting all paranoid again. *mental images* Uh oh, Jezebel better watch out. Eve's angry and there's no stopping her. Hmm, I'm thinking torture. Or fire. Something to do with axes, maybe. *hopes*
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