Emily Perry

[luckyrabbit]

Maybe tomorrow on SACIT, there are some scenes that just aren't gelling tonight

It's all good; Share, share, that's fair, right?

Neato. I swear I've heard that saying before but I can't think where. Faith?

Yep, Faith, my second third favourite psychopath

They should've returned and stabbed Sally like Rabsey said! How awesome would that have been? They could've seen Sally look shocked and say "You!" before you see a gloved hand stab her and then at the end show Zoe looking over her as she dies.

Here's how I will would've done it.

Sally [senses someone behind her][turning]: *says whatever she said on the show* *stops short when she sees who it is.*

It's Zoe, right up in Sally's personal space, she backs Sally up against the car and get's right in her face, there's no escape.

Sally [gasps]: You.

Zoe [smirks]: Me. You didn't really think you were going to get away with it that easily did you? *knifes Sally in the gut.*

[sally falls foward against Zoe, who steps back letting Sally fall to the ground. Sally reachs out, desperate for help, she grabs the leg of Zoe's pants. Zoe kicks her hand off as a car pulls up.]

Zoe: Look at it this way, Sal, at least Flynn won't be lonely anymore.

[she gets in the car, leaving Sally bleeding, dying on the dirty ground.]

[switch to Sally's pov, her vision is blurred, the last thing she sees is the car's red taillights as it drives away. Fade to black]

That would've been one killer of a cliffhanger.

[Oxidizer]

Tomorrow? Why do I have a feeling this'll be one awesome Saturday?

I Faith! She's so badass, isn't she? Zoe reminded me of her when she was being escorted into that prisoner transfer van.

Now that is how it should've been done! Seriously, how awesome would that have been?! And no guesses for who would've been driving either, huh?

I'm annoyed. I thought of a quick oneshot about that scene where Zoe pulls up by the welcome sign but I've forgotten what I was going to do now.

[luckyrabbit]

Tomorrow? Why do I have a feeling this'll be one awesome Saturday?

No promises though, there are a few scenes that I want to be perfect.

I Faith! She's so badass, isn't she? Zoe reminded me of her when she was being escorted into that prisoner transfer van.

Zoe reminds me of Faith a lot, they should have their own show. I have a feeling it would be very popular in correctional facilities.

Now that is how it should've been done! Seriously, how awesome would that have been?! And no guesses for who would've been driving either, huh?

And to keep their cover that they're still dead, they'd frame Rocco for her murder. Then they'd go about systematically destroying Peter's life.

I'm annoyed. I thought of a quick oneshot about that scene where Zoe pulls up by the welcome sign but I've forgotten what I was going to do now.

I hate it when that happens.

[Oxidizer]

No promises though, there are a few scenes that I want to be perfect.

That's understandable. I'm just all too glad you and your fics are back!

Zoe reminds me of Faith a lot, they should have their own show. I have a feeling it would be very popular in correctional facilities.

Makes sense to me. I wish they could! They should do a spin-off of H&A like they did with Angel about Zoe and Tracey's life in the city.

And to keep their cover that they're still dead, they'd frame Rocco for her murder. Then they'd go about systematically destroying Peter's life.

Loves! And then they came do what they did in Control. If it wasn't for the fact that I know they monkeys didn't have a brain I would've asked why the heck they didn't go down that route. It would've been so much better. Even if we didn't get a lovely explosion.

I hate it when that happens.

Same here! I've remembered it now and it's up and posted. That was done quicker than I thought.

ETA: And the typomaniac strikes again! I guess I should've seen that coming given the speed I was typing.

[Pierced Musie]

I was working on the computer at Connexions when a bunny hopped onto the desk

Zoe strikes up a friendship with Matilda but how is it possible? Through cyberspace of course!

[Oxidizer]

Musie, you're a genius! So when d'you think it'll be finished? Ooh, will it be like the beginning of Hard Candy? That'd be tight.

[Pierced Musie]

... I said I thought it up this morning. I haven't started it yet

It may be like the beginning of Hard Candy.

[Oxidizer]

Damn. I can't wait until you do! I'm excited now. *bounces and nods enthusiastically*

[swfc]

Loving your cliffhanger version, Rabsey. It would've been the perfect ending. So far, my favourite two endings would be Rab's cliffhanger and the one with the wedding explosion as the finale. Either way, I'm happy

*sits and waits patiently for an update of SACIT*

*waves to anyone around*

[Oxidizer]

Chris! Fancy seeing you here.

They definitely should've had a cliffhanger revolving around the stalker stuff. I still can't believe how much they screwed up with this storyline.

I know Zoe wanted to f*ck with his mind, but she shouldn't have got Tracey to contact Peter about her survival. I wanted her to sneak back unannounced and THEN Peter could return after realising who it must be and bring Tracey with him.

Zoe should've been a counsellor under her Maxine Trood alias and triggered Lucas' problems as a way to give little hints (ie. she trashed the Hunters' house when she was around before). I wish she stole another nurse's ID and worked as the psychiatric register (they needed one after Rachel was booted out - which would've been perfect for Counsellor Trood to step in).

Imagine all of the psychological damage and suffering she could've inflicted! That would've been better revenge. And once she's got everyone where she wanted them she couldn't started planting bombs and starting fires etc.

I'm glad they made her have a gun fetish though. That was a sweet touch.

The barn explosion still could've been the climax - just use flashbacks of Tracey and her relationship. Claire could've been brought back to be killed off along with Peter and anyone else whose contracts were running out.

They could've had the pyro storyline before her actual return and have it so it was her doing that as well. It didn't have to be every episode but little hints throughout the year and end the season with the explosion cliffhanger.

Why couldn't they have done this properly? We didn't even get Zoe/Kim interactions!