Oxidizer Posted December 22, 2006 Report Posted December 22, 2006 That's intense and intriguing! I can't wait for that! @ You writing the third part first. I take it you were excited about doing that stuff which we'll find out why later?
luckyrabbit Posted December 22, 2006 Report Posted December 22, 2006 Not really, I just found this part really easy to write Here's some more: "So why?" "Why what?" "Why do you smoke?" It was such a childish question, it was almost charming in it's innocence. Zoe took a long drag and exhaled slowly. "Tracey," she finally answered, flicking excess ash of the end of the cigarette. "She smoked. That's why I do it, so I don't forget her." "Is that why you wear Kim's ring, so you don't forget him?"
Oxidizer Posted December 22, 2006 Report Posted December 22, 2006 That's so sweet! I take it our treasured detective's dead then? I seriously cannot wait for that! Ooh, that reminds me, any idea when the Photograph series starts? I'm hyped about that too! I was watching the episode where Zoe moved in next door to Peter and I thought this was amusing: Colleen: If you don't mind me saying, no amount of cafine can replace a solid, eight hours of sleep. Peter: Tell me about it, I barely got forty winks. Colleen: Oh, that's what happens when you're out painting the town purple. Peter: I wish! It's my new neighbours, they're driving me mad, bumping around at all hours of the night. Could that be Zoe and Tracey screwing each other's brains out or just Zoe making deliberate noises to toy with her favourite little pet? Speaking of neighbours! Here's another small Phoenix Effect teaser, no guess who's moving in... Senior Detective Tracey Thompson sighed as she exited her small rent controlled apartment, located deep in the city of Melbourne’s more darker side. She liberated a cigarette from her bag and looked through the mesh as she lit it up, which stood between her and the car park. A removal van was stationed and men were hoisting furniture and cardboard boxes to the flat next door where someone was obviously moving in. And I was watching Tracey's first episode, when Peter says "I'm surrounded by idiots!" and walks out of the station, Tracey has this look as if to say 'Yes, Petey, and you're the biggest one' Oh, and that's the ep I thought Rice looked the hottest.
luckyrabbit Posted December 22, 2006 Report Posted December 22, 2006 That's so sweet! I take it our treasured detective's dead then? Well, she's hardly going to stand by while her girlfriend screws two underage boys, is she Ooh, that reminds me, any idea when the Photograph series starts? I'm hyped about that too! Soon hopefully, I've got part 2 (which has had a title change and is now called Fall At Your Feet) and 3 done. I just have to finish the first part the whole thing will be ready to go. But I have to admit it hasn't turned out quite as well as I'd hoped it would. I was watching the episode where Zoe moved in next door to Peter and I thought this was amusing: Colleen: If you don't mind me saying, no amount of cafine can replace a solid, eight hours of sleep. Peter: Tell me about it, I barely got forty winks. Colleen: Oh, that's what happens when you're out painting the town purple. Peter: I wish! It's my new neighbours, they're driving me mad, bumping around at all hours of the night. Could that be Zoe and Tracey screwing each other's brains out or just Zoe making deliberate noises to toy with her favourite little pet? They were screwing! I suppose having Peter say banging instead of bumping would've made it too obvious. And it stopped after Peter found out about Maxine Trood, didn't it? Speaking of neighbours! Here's another small Phoenix Effect teaser, no guess who's moving in... It's Peter, right? And I was watching Tracey's first episode, when Peter says "I'm surrounded by idiots!" and walks out of the station, Tracey has this look as if to say 'Yes, Petey, and you're the biggest one' I bet she had fun coming home to Zoe every night and recounting every dumbass thing Peter did that day.
Oxidizer Posted December 22, 2006 Report Posted December 22, 2006 Well, she's hardly going to stand by while her girlfriend screws two underage boys, is she That's true. Lucky fellas. Soon hopefully, I've got part 2 (which has had a title change and is now called Fall At Your Feet) and 3 done. I just have to finish the first part the whole thing will be ready to go. But I have to admit it hasn't turned out quite as well as I'd hoped it would. YAY! I never knew you'd done so much, you've been a busy little bunny! They were screwing! I suppose having Peter say banging instead of bumping would've made it too obvious. And it stopped after Peter found out about Maxine Trood, didn't it? Can you imagine if he used 'banging' instead? Mwahaha! It's Peter, right? Maaaybe, maybe not. I bet she had fun coming home to Zoe every night and recounting every dumbass thing Peter did that day. Totally! I can picture it now, Magenta and Colombia style. I'm writing a oneshot called Shooting Blanks where instead of firing a gun at him after, she taunts him in the tyre factory before running off, more or less telling him 'game on'. ETA: I'm freakin' freezing and am going to bed. Which is weird and stupid because it's only 3 in the afternoon *shrugs it off* See you guys later!
luckyrabbit Posted December 22, 2006 Report Posted December 22, 2006 Okay, this is just getting out of hand, as well as the Lucas/Zoe/Drew in IATHITU there's now hints of Zoe/Rachel. When will the madness end? YAY! I never knew you'd done so much, you've been a busy little bunny! Well, it's not like I had anything else to do Can you imagine if he used 'banging' instead? Mwahaha! Would've all known what he was talking about. That would've been brilliant. And with the rush of knowing that they could be caught by their mortal enemy at any moment, that must've been some really hot sex between Zoe and Tracey. I'm writing a oneshot called Shooting Blanks where instead of firing a gun at him after, she taunts him in the tyre factory before running off, more or less telling him 'game on'. I see that I'm not the only one who's been busy. Sounds awesome. ETA: I'm freakin' freezing and am going to bed. Which is weird and stupid because it's only 3 in the afternoon *shrugs it off* See you guys later! Good night (afternoon?), Ands.
Cerise Posted December 22, 2006 Report Posted December 22, 2006 Hello! Guess who was so mean and killed Tracey in Lost In Insanity 1: A DAy Of Revenge *howls*
Oxidizer Posted December 23, 2006 Report Posted December 23, 2006 Okay, this is just getting out of hand, as well as the Lucas/Zoe/Drew in IATHITU there's now hints of Zoe/Rachel. When will the madness end? Wow! I see Zoe's also been a busy girl. Would've all known what he was talking about. That would've been brilliant. And with the rush of knowing that they could be caught by their mortal enemy at any moment, that must've been some really hot sex between Zoe and Tracey. OMG! I can picture that nicely. You killed Tracey?! Nooooooooooo! Ah well, I guess if it had to be done..
Oxidizer Posted December 23, 2006 Report Posted December 23, 2006 Lil's lurking! Quickly, tie her up and get some more info out of her!
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