Pierced Musie Posted February 15, 2007 Report Posted February 15, 2007 Dark and unmoving. That is what summed up her surroundings but that was not what her mind was focused on. She panted, trying to get her breath back as the fear set in. She looked round the large room, her eyes wide and her motions like a caged animal. She took in the charred remain of what was once a barn. The air in the room was stale, making her gag. She moved her hand up to her mouth and begin to cough, trying to bring up something, anything, to make her feel better. That was when she realized that it wasn't just her arm that was bare. She glanced down at her body, sprawled out on the floor, seeing her damp bare skin. Alone, in a burnt down barn, and completely naked, she did the only thing her confused mind would let her do. She screamed in pain. Across town, another girl screamed in pain. Her friends watched her as she looked to the heavens, her eyes blackened and her screams getting louder by every second. Then it stopped, one girl passing out into darkness while the other collapsed into the awaiting arms of her boyfriend, tears in her eyes. "I can feel her. She's scared and alone," she whispered, the silence that followed deafening. "What the hell did we do?" Wrote this last night. No plan. No other parts. Just this. Think of it as a teaser. Oh and cake for those who can guess who the girl in the barn, the girl with the black eyes and the boyfriend are.
Oxidizer Posted February 15, 2007 Report Posted February 15, 2007 Whoa! That is fcuking sweet! I've got mixed feelings, I'm getting J/M vibes, but I reckon it's Sarah & Felix and Zoe. Any guesses right? ETA: I finally updated NOUAS. I think there might be an new part up once every week 'til its finished. Now I'm hell-bent on finishing ITC.
Pierced Musie Posted February 15, 2007 Report Posted February 15, 2007 You got one right! Zoe = Barn girl. But the black eyed girl and the boyfriend are young and of the now.
Oxidizer Posted February 15, 2007 Report Posted February 15, 2007 @ 'Zoe the Barn Girl' Orange and Smacca!
Pierced Musie Posted February 15, 2007 Report Posted February 15, 2007 *smacks forehead* Matilda & Ric! It's Matilda & Ric! With Belle, Drew & Lucas involved.
Oxidizer Posted February 15, 2007 Report Posted February 15, 2007 OMG! I said all of those but edited it thinking it was Cassie/Maccie after re-reading the 'black eye / boyfriend' thing!
Pierced Musie Posted February 15, 2007 Report Posted February 15, 2007 *goes back to laughing like a maniac* Hmph, I want to add my own villian to that thread but it is spoiler riddled! *cries*
Oxidizer Posted February 15, 2007 Report Posted February 15, 2007 Aww! Can't you put it in spoiler tags? Black bars are very slick and stylish.
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