Oxidizer Posted May 5, 2007 Report Posted May 5, 2007 Ooh! Can't wait for that! Any idea when it'll be done? And when I say dark, boy, do I mean dark. I don't want to give anything away but in involves rohypnol. Make of that what you will.
Cerise Posted May 5, 2007 Report Posted May 5, 2007 Hmm, I'm not really sure. I've come to a difficult part that I can't seem to get past. I'm writing the final Part (3) of it now but if I went for the easier way of writing it I'd have to extend it to 4 Parts and I don't want to do that And I'm not happy with the first Part, it lacks good writing
Oxidizer Posted May 5, 2007 Report Posted May 5, 2007 Aww! I'm sure it'll come to you. Just give it time.
swfc Posted May 6, 2007 Report Posted May 6, 2007 Andy, I just thought I'd let you know that I updated WIFSYF... I'm having stalker withdrawal symptoms....
Oxidizer Posted May 6, 2007 Report Posted May 6, 2007 Read, commented and loved it. Here's a small Pharmacy teaser for you guys until Part 1 is finished: She leant over the hood of a dark Mercedes that belonged to one Detective Thompson and snorted a line of Colombia's finest that was diced on the shiny surface, still hot from where the engine had only just been turned off. Scanning the area discreetly, the brunette pushed her brown tortoiseshell glasses up the bridge of her nose; a smirk etched upon her lips when she locked her primary target in sight: Drew Curtis walked aimlessly through the underground car park. Two of his friends had left him to engage in the hedonistic activities that surrounded them. They knew he'd be okay.
swfc Posted May 6, 2007 Report Posted May 6, 2007 Thanks Andy. Do I sense some really dark stuff coming? Because I absolutely love those kinds of things. And, that teaser has helped a little with withdrawals. How cool is that? Zozo snorting on TT's car.... I sincerely hope that nothing will happen to Drewsta coz if it does, Shan ain't going to be too happy about it.
Oxidizer Posted May 6, 2007 Report Posted May 6, 2007 Quite dark. All I'm saying is that this is set two weeks before Dan went to see Drew at the boarding school, and he wasn't always the angsty guy we've come to know. Here's another teaser (a little warning - gets a bit sexual): "Don't mention it," Zoe buried her head in his chest, popping open his shirt buttons to reveal a toned thorax, just waiting to be scratched. She bit playfully; making him aroused and scared at the same time. His eyes maneuvered the car park, intimidated and intense, as she reached into his Calvin Klein's. Wasn't she bothered that there were other people there, dirty little voyeurs watching, like a seedy porn movie? Zoe pulled away from kissing the boy's chest and looked up at him with hungry eyes, making him smile nervously in response. His erection straining to be set loose like a serpent entombed in a tank at the zoo. She finally spoke up. Her words broke him in ways he never thought possible. "You wanna have a good time?" "H-How do you mean?" Drew stammered virginally, unable to prevent the groans and gasps that escaped his mouth with each twisting movement she made with her hand, still buried deep in his boxers. Part 2 gets very nasty though. So enjoy the 'naughty' stuff while you can. I'm hoping this'll be up later tonight.
swfc Posted May 7, 2007 Report Posted May 7, 2007 Right, Andy you naughty lil boy I quite liked it.... Definitely worth the wait.... Zoe is one badass chick that's for sure.... And that's probably one of the many reasons why we all love her.
victim-ofthenight Posted May 7, 2007 Report Posted May 7, 2007 cant wait to read Andy mate WTF am i still doing up yet again at 2.30 am lol
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