jack4martha_forever Posted August 18, 2006 Report Posted August 18, 2006 great chapter. loved it. update tomoz please. Good night Ummm...its 946pm here. I think Sydney is 2hrs behind NZ
Guest Posted August 18, 2006 Report Posted August 18, 2006 I think you are right sydeny is 2hrs behid us
jack4martha_forever Posted August 18, 2006 Report Posted August 18, 2006 Yep yep. And one hour behind with daylight saving Now go sleep mister!
Guest Posted August 18, 2006 Report Posted August 18, 2006 Hey guys I am up now but I am wating to write the next part as I need to think what would come next
Guest Posted August 18, 2006 Report Posted August 18, 2006 Martha and Jack's Beach House Martha: Babe should we ring Tony and Beth Jack: Sure but I will do the speaking Martha: Yeh um I will just get Bree and Kath's dinner ok Jack: Sure Bree: Mummy can I have fish for tea Martha: Um ok love why don't you and Kath go and play with the toys Bree: Ok let go Kath Kath: Ok Martha is cooking tea while Jack talks to Tony who is in Summer Bay Jack: Hey dad how are you Tony: Good so how are you and Martha Jack: Good oh yeh I was wondering if we can have Bree's birthday at home in Summer Bay Tony: Sure and yes but Summer Bay has change so much Jack: Yeh I reckon I can't wait Tony: Hey I better go as Beth needs to be pick up from Hospital Jack: Ok tell Lucas that his nieces want to hey hi to him Tony: Sure see you soon Jack: Yep goodbye Martha calls out to Bree and Kath Martha: Bree and Kath come here dinner is ready Jack: So what did you make Martha: Well I made Fish salad with dressing on it Jack: Oh sounds yummy Everyone is enjoying their tea Bree: Mummy when can I see Uncle Lucas Martha: Um soon and we are going over to Austraila for a hoilday and have your birthday with our family now would that be fun Bree: Yeh and we can stay at Uncle Lucas's place dose he have a girlfriend Martha and Jack turns quite Martha: No love he dosn't Jack: It was sad for him when she left him Bree: What happen to her Jack: Love she died Bree: How did she die Jack: She was very sick and she was only 17 Bree: That young I don't want to die that young Martha: Love you won't just eat your tea ok Bree: Ok The next day The Airport Bree: Mummy the plane's Martha: Yeh now we are flying off Bree: Yay we are coming Uncle Lucas Sydeny- The Airport Martha: Let go guys let go the car and drive off Jack: Oh yeh Ok there we are they are now heading towards the start of Summer Bay Guys the next part is finished I have to deicde which people is with and where they are
Guest Posted August 18, 2006 Report Posted August 18, 2006 Ok this will be the infomation on the others who are still in Summer Bay Beth (2003-2017) Tony (2005-2017) Irene (1992-2017) Lucas (2005-2014,2017- Belle (2006- Tasha (2003-2017) Racheal (2006-2017) Brad (2006- Robbie (2003-2017) Drew (2006- Ric (2005- Sally (1988- some new and old charcters will be main ones Bianca (2006- Stella (2008- Ella (2006- James (2011- Harry (2007- Tama (2007- VJ (2002- Vlad (2015- John (2015- Abby (2016- I put the year and the date left for the charcters that will be leaving and their time of arrival It sounds like a great one
Guest Posted August 18, 2006 Report Posted August 18, 2006 Now let the fate of these Charcters and the ones that say goodbye I will put A year by Year cast up if you think it a good Idea but yeh I know how many people been in and out
Guest Posted August 19, 2006 Report Posted August 19, 2006 The Streets Jack: Um there it is Martha pull the car up the drive way and they all get out the car Beth opens the door Beth: I miss you guys so much oh and my two little grand childerns that is so great Tony: Hay guys welcome back Jack: Thanks dad The Beach House Irene and Belle are talking about Irene's health Belle: Irene we need to go Irene: No I will be fine I have a great health you know Belle: Yes I know that Irene but we need to get there ok Irene: Fine have it your way The Diner Lucas is serving food while Ric comes in Lucas: Oh sup bro Ric: Sup um so how Belle Lucas: Fine she taking Irene to the hospital Ric: Ok I hope Irene will be fine The Armstrongs House Racheal is packing her bags Brad: Rach don't go what about the hospital Racheal: I don't care I had enogh of this place it time I move on and if you want talk to me then come to NZ because that where I am ok Brad: Rach It too late Brad couldn't stop Racheal from leaving Goodbye Racheal Armstrong As Summer Bay continues on losing and returning people It never be easy even when a death is just around the corner so many will leave? PS sorry if this is so short and boring I don't know if I can keep on writing this Fic as it gone down hill
jack4martha_forever Posted August 19, 2006 Report Posted August 19, 2006 lol its good Whys Rach leaving ?? update soon
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