Tasha Posted August 28, 2006 Report Posted August 28, 2006 Lol "Well dont Einstein" Jack is so cute Great chapter. Im glad their rescued. I hope Tasha is the critically ill one
beckyboo Posted August 28, 2006 Report Posted August 28, 2006 OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGg This will make Martha see how much she loves Jack Although somehow I think Jack will be the critcally ill one for some reason Jack4martha well done keep up the good work!!!!!1 Post more today please please please with sugar on top!!!!!!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxx
Tasha Posted August 28, 2006 Report Posted August 28, 2006 If Jack is the critically ill one, then Martha better forgive him. Then again, she'll get annoyed that Tasha was at Jack's house in the first place. Grrrr...Natasha we need an update soon, because the suspense is killing me
Jacksthehottest Posted August 28, 2006 Report Posted August 28, 2006 hey great start, glad you are doing a sequal, can't wait to read more i hope Jack's ok, please update soon
~Natasha~ Posted August 28, 2006 Report Posted August 28, 2006 Last part before I go on holiday tomorrow, next part will be on Saturday at least. xxx Protection Jack, Tasha and Kim were at the hospital, Kim had come around and Rachel was in his room. The doctors were still working on Tasha and Jack who had both inhaled a lot of smoke. Martha was at Jack's bedside, trying to call Robbie who did not know that his wife was in hospital! --------------------- "Jack, please wake up!" Martha had tears in her eyes, she was talking to Jack and telling how mush she loves him and that everything would be okay from now on. "I love you, I've never stopped loving you" She grabs hold of his hand and brings it up to her face. "Things are going to be OK now, I promise" --------------------- Meanwhile when Robbie had found out about Tasha, he rushed to the hospital with Ella. By the time he did, she was already awake. "Tash! I'm so sorry" Robbie explained as he handed Ella over to Tasha. "I love you" "I love you too, Rob" She smiles at him, he smiles back so she kisses him. "What were you doing at Jack's anyway?" Robbie asks her, Tasha removes her breathing mask again. "I was putting things right" She explained. "What do you mean?" He moves closer to Tasha and cuddles her and Ella, a proper family. "It was a mistake" Robbie hugs his wife and tells her its okay. --------------------- "Jack, please" Martha pleads with him to wake up. "I have something really big to tell you" Just at that moment, Jack's machine starts to beep really loudly. Preview: Jack lives, Martha collapses!
beckyboo Posted August 28, 2006 Report Posted August 28, 2006 Marthas Pregant i bet ya!!!!!!!!1 U have to post one more chapter before you go away!!!!!!!!!!! you cant leave it like that!!!!!! Amazing chapter tho well done!!!!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxxx
miss HAA Posted August 28, 2006 Report Posted August 28, 2006 That was a great chapter i can't wait to see what happens next
Jamey-Maria Posted August 28, 2006 Report Posted August 28, 2006 Natasha I get the feeling that you don't like Martha and Jack that much looking foward to when you finally update, great writing. Have fun on your holiday
xsianx Posted August 28, 2006 Report Posted August 28, 2006 Noooo Jack! Don't die... *Reads preview* Yay he doesn't! Uh oh poor Martha. Looking forward to mroe soon.
Tasha Posted August 29, 2006 Report Posted August 29, 2006 Lol its funny how whenever Martha collapses, we all immediately know that she is pregnant. So Jack is in a critical condition But im glad he lives. And im glad everything is ok with Jack and Martha now Oh and a baby Holden *dances* Please update soon
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