xxgulcanxx Posted September 3, 2006 Report Posted September 3, 2006 That was a great chapter Jack's pleased i take it. Wonder who Tasha and Robbie catch up with.update soon
Jacksthehottest Posted September 3, 2006 Report Posted September 3, 2006 hey, this is great i just caught up, I'm glad Martha and Jack are happy can't wait for more
beckyboo Posted September 3, 2006 Report Posted September 3, 2006 Hey fantastic chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More soon ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
~Natasha~ Posted September 3, 2006 Report Posted September 3, 2006 Protection "Take it easy, Jack" Martha tells him as he walks through his new home, living with Beth, his Dad and brother and Matilda since the house was wrecked. "I'm fine, you however look really pale" Jack points out as he points to the sofa, ordering Martha to sit down. "To be honest, I feel terrible" She lies down on the sofa. "I thought morning sickness stopped after the first few months" "It's amazing that you didn't have it when you didn't know you were pregnant" Jack laughs. "No, I did but I just thought it was bad hangover or something" Jack just carries on laughing at her. "I've got to go, see you later" Martha tries to get up to stop him but she didn't have the energy. "Whatever" --------------------- "This is taking forever" Tasha says as they were trying to book into the hotel. "I've got a screaming baby and a suitcase that is about to explode" Robbie laughs but Tasha did not find it amusing. "Happy birthday me!" Robbie sighs, they finally moved forward a bit but someone pushed in front of them. "Hey!" "Oh, sorry" The person carried her little boy away; he couldn't have been more then two years old. "Oh my god" They all stared at each other. --------------------- "You must feel a lot better" Jack said as he came home to find Martha looking at paint samples, and there was a baby name book by the side of her. "How do you know what to call it if you don't know whether it's a boy or girl?" "I've decided I want it to be a surprise, is that okay?" Martha asks, Jack just nods at her. "You should read that baby name book, it has loads" Jack grabs it off the sofa and starts to read it, giving some of the names very strange looks. "Well what names were you thinking of?" Jack asks while slamming the book on the table. "Not sure if it's a boy, but I have loads of girls names" She smiles. "Any idea for a boy?" "Name it after me!" Jack jokes. "I think you better think of the name" He tells her. --------------------- "Kirsty!" Tasha smiles and rushes up to hug her. "I've not seen you in ages, where is Kane?" As soon as Tasha asks that, Kirsty bursts into tears. "What's happened?" "He's lost, at sea" Kirsty explains to them. "He has been for two months" "Aw that’s terrible" Tasha tries to comfort her. "Have you not heard from him at all?" "No and every time I hear that they have found a dead body in the sea, I fear that it's him" Kirsty sobs. "So why are you staying here?" Tasha asks her while smiling at the small boy. "Because we can't afford to stay in our flat anymore" She tells them. "Jade has been staying with us, but she's away and doesn't know we've been thrown out" "That’s awful, you got thrown out?" Tasha replies shocked, she looks at the little boy again. "We have loads to catch up on" "Yeah, this is Cameron" He suddenly turns very shy and buries his head in Kirsty's neck. "And who is this gorgeous baby girl?" She asks them both. "Ella, she's not even two months old yet" Kirsty cheers up a bit as they swap children, Kirsty held Ella and Tasha had Cameron. "You must be happy to be a Dad, Rob" Robbie and Tasha fake a smile and Robbie turns around, he was at the front of the queue so he booked them in. Preview: Will Kirsty return to the Bay? What is wrong with Ella?
xxgulcanxx Posted September 3, 2006 Report Posted September 3, 2006 awww that was great whats wrong with ella? update soon.
shawtyy Posted September 3, 2006 Report Posted September 3, 2006 Just read both your fanfics and they are really great! Update soon.
xsianx Posted September 3, 2006 Report Posted September 3, 2006 Aww! loved the two chapters glad Martha and Jack are ok Atleast Robbies keeping Tasha away from Jack. Update soon please.
Tasha Posted September 4, 2006 Report Posted September 4, 2006 Awww...so sweet. Great chapter Please update soon
~Natasha~ Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 I know that they all might as well set up camp in that hospital, so this part is no different (maybe next part possibly). But after this there could be some happiness for one of the couples. And I'm not going to make Ella seriously ill too because I don't want to (), so basically ignore the last preview or don't take it too seriously. xxx Protection Kirsty had to stay in the city so Tasha and Robbie returned with Ella later that week, they had a great time although they could not help but think about what Kirsty was going through with Kane being missing and everything else. "Robbie do you have to go with Jack, Kim and Ryan to play football on the beach?" Tasha asks while looking very concerned. "I said I would" "I can't come and watch; I think Ella might be coming down with something" Tasha worries while holding her daughter. --------------------- "Are you sure you are up for it?" Martha asks Jack whilst lying on the sofa, holding her stomach. Jack nods, kisses Martha and the bump. "Fine, I'll be down later to watch" She comments. "Love you both" He smiles as he walks out through the door. "See you later!" --------------------- Two hours later they were still playing on the beach, Robbie had decided not to come due to Ella's sudden illness so it was just the three of them. With Rachel, Leah and Martha watching and cheering every time Ryan got the ball past Kim so it was amazing they didn't loose their voices. Jack took a break as he went to go and talk to his wife. "Looking good" She grins as yet another goal goes in the 'net'. They giggle as Kim finally gives up. Jack runs back on and starts kicking the ball to Ryan again. The ball suddenly flies towards Martha and hits her in the stomach, she falls backwards in shock and Jack rushes over. "Are you okay?" "Yeah I'm fine" Jack then looks very surprised when Martha smiles. "The baby just kicked when you were playing" Jack also smiles but also looks very confused. "That's great" He still looked worried for her, so they went home. --------------------- "ELLA's GONE!" Robbie shouts as he walks to her cot, he reads a note 'It's her destiny' --------------------- "Martha, it's your favourite part" He shouts, as he was sat down and watching a film. "Martha?" Martha comes out of their room, crying and rushes over to hug him. "Jack, I don't feel well" She clutches her stomach and suddenly goes really dizzy. "It really hurts" Preview: An unlikely hero saves Ella from Mumma Rose's evil clutches!
beckyboo Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR NOOOOOOOOOOOOO baby holden has to be okay!!!!!!!!! great chapter post more ASAP!!!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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