Jacksthehottest Posted September 24, 2006 Report Posted September 24, 2006 firstly Home&AwayGal, thanx for nagging Nicole to update. Omg i didn't believe Jack was gone, but now he really is, Nicole that's not fair , hows this supposed to be a long fic without Jack. Now to the chapter, that was excellent, especially the way you described everything, you could really tell what it was like. poor Martha, you nearly made me cry. Please update soon this is great can't wait to read more because i have no idea where it will go from here. Quote
xxgulcanxx Posted September 24, 2006 Report Posted September 24, 2006 Thanks for updating, i can't believe Jack's gone update soon. Quote
xsianx Posted September 24, 2006 Report Posted September 24, 2006 Thanks for nagging Home&AwayGal I admit I cried lol Beautifully wrote Nicole I forgot you killed Jack because of the beautiful writing and then at the end I remember. Poor Martha, Loved the Tony and Martha scene Quote
bay girl Posted September 24, 2006 Report Posted September 24, 2006 That was a great Tony and Martha scene. Poor Martha. And Jack. Please still be alive. Come back. Quote
Tasha Posted September 25, 2006 Report Posted September 25, 2006 I cant believe you killed Jack :o Im so sad now, what a way to start off my dad Great chapters though, well the writing was great, not the part where Jack dies and Martha suffers Please update soon Quote
-Annie- Posted September 25, 2006 Report Posted September 25, 2006 (edited) That was amazing Nicole. Honestly, all that description in there....woah...that would have to be the best chapter you have EVER written! Seriously that was brilliant, the emotions, the setting, the description...oh it was fantabulous! Poor ol' Martha! Doesn't have much luck in Nicole's fics does she? Hmm....well is it just me, or does anyone else think that Jack isn't dead, but he's just gone into Protection? *pats nose knowingly* Edited September 25, 2006 by -Annie- Quote
puja Posted September 25, 2006 Report Posted September 25, 2006 Fantastic chapter! I agree with Annie, possibly the best chapter you have ever written. The description, the emotion, everything was just perfect and so empathetic. I loved the Tony/Martha interection. It wasn't forced and it was so natural. More soon please Quote
Nicom Posted September 27, 2006 Report Posted September 27, 2006 I don't know when my next update will be... due to the goddamn virus. I have stupid IE and have already caught it twice, so i'm not going to chance any more! I'll be back when the sites safe, but until then, I shall be gone. Sorry, I have no idea when the next update is.. Talk soon. x Quote
-Annie- Posted September 28, 2006 Report Posted September 28, 2006 (edited) Damn viruses! Awww...come back soon Nicole! *waves sadly* Okay, now that SHE's gone, whose got any dirty goss on Nicole? *evil laugh* He he he he... Edited September 28, 2006 by -Annie- Quote
puja Posted September 28, 2006 Report Posted September 28, 2006 Damn viruses! Awww...come back soon Nicole! *waves sadly* Okay, now that SHE's gone, whose got any dirty goss on Nicole? *evil laugh* He he he he... LOL! Hmmmmm, i'll get back to you! Quote
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