~Angel~ Posted October 4, 2006 Author Report Posted October 4, 2006 Aw! Jack and Lucas are so cute together! You can just imagine Lucas being all worried about his big brother like when jack hurt his ear and Lucas was all worried about him Please update soon and add some Martha bits too ! Quote
katie343 Posted October 5, 2006 Report Posted October 5, 2006 Please post more soon I can't wait for Martha's reaction. Quote
-Annie- Posted October 5, 2006 Report Posted October 5, 2006 (edited) Missed me?! 'Cos I'm back! Well my little munchkin Nicole, I would love to say how totally awesome those chapters were! Loved it all! And Jack is baaacckkk! Score! Edited October 5, 2006 by -Annie- Quote
Guest Posted October 5, 2006 Report Posted October 5, 2006 What a great fic and please continue Quote
lollipop_lover11 Posted October 5, 2006 Report Posted October 5, 2006 Aw, I knew you wouldn't kill Jack, you care about him too much. I was positive he would return. Great chapters Nicole. Quote
-Jade- Posted October 5, 2006 Report Posted October 5, 2006 (edited) Well, I'll admit it, I've been a bad friend, since I haven't reviewed in God knows how long... lol I've been checking for updates though and so love reading this story! Nicole as always... 1) Your writing is great. 2) You've made me laugh, countless times whilst reading this. I have to say I loved the bit where Jack said: "One and a half years without salt and vingear, Luc. One and a half years!!!" Made me a laugh. 3) You're a weirdo. Just thought I'd add that little fact on the end there. No, but seriously, this story is so entertaining - I bet people will be wanting to know what Martha's secret is! But I know it, I know it! *shakes bum and laughs* lol Anyways, please please update sooooooon! If not for everyone else, then for me. Joke! But seriously, update, please. Edited October 5, 2006 by jackandmartha!!! Quote
puja Posted October 5, 2006 Report Posted October 5, 2006 Ok, my face is literally inches away from the computer screen (no wonder I can see fuzzy yellow balls whizzing around!) Wow! That was a great chapter! I'll be honest, I was slightly disappointed when you mentioned there was no Martha at the start of the chapter...but, the chapter did not disappoint at all! I loved the Lucas/Jack interaction and in particular the references with the shaving! A classic brothering moment/scenario. I know Jack is on a high at the moment (being back home) but I sense there is going to be a crash, banging reality check in relation to Martha...please be gentle with him; don't let him suffer too much! Excellent writing as usual Nicole, please don't keep us hanging for too long EDIT: I've just realised the ridiculous length of this post. I believe you may have some competition in the rambling department Quote
shawtyy Posted October 5, 2006 Report Posted October 5, 2006 Great chapter Nicole! Please update soon I really want to know what Martha's secret is. Maybe she is married or got a boyfriend. Quote
katie343 Posted October 5, 2006 Report Posted October 5, 2006 (edited) I'm so glad you updated Jack is soo funny why won't he talk about it seriously I wish I could meet James Jack's still hotter though. Please post more soon Edited October 5, 2006 by katie343 Quote
irish_angel Posted October 5, 2006 Report Posted October 5, 2006 (edited) Another excellent chapter Nicole, loved everything about it {even though there was no J/M interaction} I can't wait to find out what Luc and Tony didn't tell Jack about Martha. I hope it isn't that she's living with someone new or married. Maybe she's had Jack's baby while he's been gone... She could have found out she was pregnant after Jack had been abducted by that horrible Henry... My mind is going to be working overtime now until the next fantastic update Edited October 5, 2006 by irish_angel Quote
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