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Well, I'll admit it, I've been a bad friend, since I haven't reviewed in God knows how long... lol I've been checking for updates though and so love reading this story! Nicole as always...

1) Your writing is great.

2) You've made me laugh, countless times whilst reading this. I have to say I loved the bit where Jack said:

"One and a half years without salt and vingear, Luc. One and a half years!!!"

Made me a laugh. :D

3) You're a weirdo. :P Just thought I'd add that little fact on the end there.

No, but seriously, this story is so entertaining - I bet people will be wanting to know what Martha's secret is! But I know it, I know it! *shakes bum and laughs* lol :D

Anyways, please please update sooooooon! If not for everyone else, then for me. :D Joke!

But seriously, update, please. :)

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Ok, my face is literally inches away from the computer screen (no wonder I can see fuzzy yellow balls whizzing around!)

Wow! That was a great chapter! I'll be honest, I was slightly disappointed when you mentioned there was no Martha at the start of the chapter...but, the chapter did not disappoint at all!

I loved the Lucas/Jack interaction and in particular the references with the shaving! :lol: A classic brothering moment/scenario.

I know Jack is on a high at the moment (being back home) but I sense there is going to be a crash, banging reality check in relation to Martha...please be gentle with him; don't let him suffer too much!

Excellent writing as usual Nicole, please don't keep us hanging for too long :)

EDIT: I've just realised the ridiculous length of this post. I believe you may have some competition in the rambling department :lol:

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Another excellent chapter Nicole, loved everything about it {even though there was no J/M interaction} :D

I can't wait to find out what Luc and Tony didn't tell Jack about Martha. I hope it isn't that she's living with someone new or married.

Maybe she's had Jack's baby while he's been gone... She could have found out she was pregnant after Jack had been abducted by that horrible Henry... My mind is going to be working overtime now until the next fantastic update :D

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