Tasha Posted September 9, 2006 Report Posted September 9, 2006 Awesome fic. Loving it so far. Jack is so cute when he whinges. Something different from Marthas whining Loved the surfer dude part Please update soon Quote
Home and Away Always!!! Posted September 9, 2006 Report Posted September 9, 2006 Now leave them happy. *glares* Yes! Please? *puts on puppy dog face* And your writing is excellent, please update soon! Quote
-michelle- Posted September 9, 2006 Report Posted September 9, 2006 Great start. Please update soon Quote
M&J 4eva Posted September 9, 2006 Report Posted September 9, 2006 WoW great start can't wait for more Quote
mrsbrody Posted September 9, 2006 Report Posted September 9, 2006 So far this fiction is so cute i'm loving it Martha and Jack are so adorable. Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted September 9, 2006 Report Posted September 9, 2006 You just went and put a massive smile upon my face. And guess what? If I ever want to read a lovey scene I'm going to you from now on you big sop Great chapter. Love it already. Quote
Clair 247 Posted September 9, 2006 Report Posted September 9, 2006 (edited) Fantastic start, can't believe it, I am hooked already! Am loving all this lovey-doveyness! Cannot get enough of it, especially if it's Jack and Martha! Please update soon. Edited September 9, 2006 by Clair 247 Quote
lollipop_lover11 Posted September 10, 2006 Report Posted September 10, 2006 Really good Nicole, but very lovey dovey. Quote
Jacksthehottest Posted September 10, 2006 Report Posted September 10, 2006 OMG Nicole, that made me cry that was excellent, brilliant, amazing and any other word that describes very good, lol. That was so sweet how Jack was telling her how much he loves her, it made me cry and not much fanfics do. Also i loved the way you described the whole situation with Martha's friend Ben, poor Martha and you better not let the same thing happen to Jack.You're writing is excellent as well, you make it seem so real, both of these chapters have been a great start to your fic, I'm already hooked. Keep up with the happy scenes, Please please update soon , i can't wait to read more Quote
Tasha Posted September 10, 2006 Report Posted September 10, 2006 (edited) Wow, great chapter. Poor Martha. Poor Ben So Martha and Ben were just friends, 'cause the way she spoke about him makes me think there was more. But that doesnt matter. Still sad. Nothing better happen to Jack now, or both Martha and I will be devestated But on a good note, Jack is such a sweetie Please update soon Edited September 10, 2006 by jack4martha Quote
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