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Haha, Lucas having bladder problems :P that made me laugh, and the "Matilda's here-", excellent Nicole. And once more thing, Jack and Martha will be friends in the next chapter, and then in the chapter after that Eamon is going to be struck by lightening in a freak storm and Martha confesses her love for Jack and then they become more than friends; lovers! :P:D

Brilliant, please update asap and I look forward to reading your next chapter with all of that in :P

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And does Lucas have a bladder control problem?

That's just plain funny! :D (Hope it's not a serious problem :blink: )

Just read the last two chapters and they were both great. It's nice to read that Martha's alive and in good health (I was starting to get a little worried as you well know! :wink: )

I know my pleas will fall on deaf ears (especially where you are concerned) but, please don't put Jack through too much anguish in relation to the whole Martha/Eamon situation. The guy has spent the last 18months in exile; give him a break, pretty please?? :P

Great work, keep it going!

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Gosh that was a short chapter :P

I really like this relationship between Jack/Lucas.

Poor Lucas he's the butt of everyones jokes!

Is Eamon at church?

superb writing!

Yup. Currently. Jack's gone off now, so he'll miss Eamon when he comes back and has dinner. Just another added bonus for Jack. lol. ( I decided to add that in now, just to make it clear for next chapters.)

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That was brilliant Nicole, hmm I'd say Peter's suspicions are of Eamon because he secretly killed somone and then he goes to prison, Martha confesses her love for Jack and they live happily ever after :P Great writing, looking forward to the next update :D

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That was brilliant Nicole, hmm I'd say Peter's suspicions are of Eamon because he secretly killed somone and then he goes to prison, Martha confesses her love for Jack and they live happily ever after :P Great writing, looking forward to the next update :D

Are you always going to do that? Use whats currently happening then turn it all into a happy ending in the same sentence? lol. It takes a skill, I have to admit.

Well done. lol.

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