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“Fabulous idea! I’ve not spoken to Tasha in days!” Eamon exclaimed, walking over towards the table with Martha.

Is it just me or did Eamon sound gay when he said that..

*whistles innocently*

Oops, you guys... I didn't actually mean that she was jealous. She was just amazed at the fact that he was so happy to go back to work.

“Sorry!” Lara apologized, standing straight and keeping her balance. “My mistake. I just didn’t want to miss my new partner.” She explained, looking over Tony’s shoulder to Jack. She gave him a smile.

“What?” Martha spoke up, instantly becoming sober. She sat up straight on her chair, her eyes perked and alive, darting between Lara and Jack

She isn't happy. If you remember back when they were together, they had issues about him going to work. then she was prooved right when he got taken away. But now he's still going back... If you understand... It should become more clear next couple of chapters anyway.

Did I detect that Martha was beginning to get jealous when she thought that Jack had moved on. Nicole I have a new plan :P Jack starts going out with Lara, and then Martha gets dead jealous and then she leaves Eamon and tells Jack that she wants to be with him again, and then Jack leaves Lara and the live happily ever after and Lara and Eamon get together :P What do you think? I like it :) Update soon please

Nice try. lol.

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“Fabulous idea! I’ve not spoken to Tasha in days!” Eamon exclaimed, walking over towards the table with Martha.

Is it just me or did Eamon sound gay when he said that..

Aww, Lara! I agree with Emma (JackandMartha4eva). Make Martha jealous! :D

Great update.

Update soon! :)

yh he did sound kind of gay...lol

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Great Chapter. I still don't like Eamon.

Oh and you need to make Martha jealous. There should be a girl; any girl, who likes Jack and Martha should get jealous.

Exactly. And Nicole, I am finally commenting ( I told you I read it!) That chapter was fab, I love your long chapters, keep them up!

Cant wait for the next update :D

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