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omg that was such a good chapter and i like this way of writting

its easier to understand and looks a lot better lol :) but your other

ways good too so its really just whats easier for you :) well excellent

chapter cant wait for an update!!! :) maybe today? lol just joking

well... udate asap :)

xoxo

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Two updates in the same number of days :o ...aren't we on a roll?! :P

Only kidding, great update! Absolutley loved the banter between Martha and Jack. They were both giving as good as they got- until Jack had the final word.

Can't wait for Martha's response!

Now, is there going to be a hat-trick of updates, in a matter of three days.... :D

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Kim stared at him in disbelief, shaking his head. “You’re such a girl.”

I burst out laughing when I read that!

Great update I actually prefer the banter etc. to the happy friends thing.

I think the writing style is better but whichever suits you.

Can't wait for more.

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