Jacksthehottest Posted December 19, 2006 Report Share Posted December 19, 2006 Wow brilliant writing, loved the flashback, poor Jack. Please update soon, can't wait to read more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gawguss_tiff Posted December 19, 2006 Report Share Posted December 19, 2006 that was really good and i agree with sian the you handesome devil part was hilarious lol and you really did write racheals concerns really well lol its did make sense sian but i really want jack and martha to get back together please lol well great chapter update asap Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Amy~ Posted December 19, 2006 Report Share Posted December 19, 2006 Yay keep it going with the frequent updates! No J/M scenes? I like nosey Rachel, Colleen would be proud So Eamons a mummys-boy! I don't like this *posh voice* Clarice, go away! More soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted December 19, 2006 Report Share Posted December 19, 2006 update soon.....i agree...^^^ need some jack and martha in it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted December 19, 2006 Report Share Posted December 19, 2006 I liked the story about the name. (ealier) Poor Eamon and poor Martha nothing worse than having an interfering mother in law - quick Martha - Runnn. Its like Pauline Fowler off Eastenders! Think about her husband poor guy. I really liked the Rachel/Tony and Rachel/Jack scenes Well written N. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted December 19, 2006 Report Share Posted December 19, 2006 Right, I'm really bad at not posting comments even though I actually do read this fic religiously so I'm going to really try from now on. I love this fic and I loved that chapter! My favourite bit of course was where Eamon's parents go all over the top - I'm surprised at just how much more patient martha seems (must be a reflection of her relationship with Eamon Nah, I'm just kidding, J&M are a way better couple... move over Eamon). I found the bit about the tackiness really funny. Can't wait for the next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bay girl Posted December 19, 2006 Report Share Posted December 19, 2006 Nic, where's all the J/M fun fighting scenes. I want more. More. LOL. Great update. I really can't wait for Jack to crack. LOL. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gawguss_tiff Posted December 19, 2006 Report Share Posted December 19, 2006 lol wow i really dont like eamons mum lol you did the eamon scence for sian didnt you? lol no j/m scences when are they going to get back together already i hope they do soon like next chapter? lol well great chapter i loved it lol lol update ASAP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted December 20, 2006 Report Share Posted December 20, 2006 Nic, where's all the J/M fun fighting scenes. I want more. More. LOL. Agreed!! But i love that Martha doesnt like Eamon's parents The poor girl. And poor Jacky too, please talk to Rachel. Great chapter though Please update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Laura- Posted December 20, 2006 Report Share Posted December 20, 2006 Wow! Two updates to read! Fantabulous! This is so good even though there is a lack of JaMarthaness! lol Loved the names you picked for the parents! They really suited the characters! And poor Jack in the chapter before! I just wanted to hug him! I can't wait for him to finally break down even though its going to be sad i think it will be good to read! And maybe Martha can find him and comfort him and start to realise just how much hes been/is still going through and realise all her feelings of love are still there! Aww! Great writing Nicole and update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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