caitrules Posted January 3, 2007 Report Posted January 3, 2007 You didn't delete a kiss? oh... well then I take back the traitor part of my last post unless tiff actually is right and you deleted something better than a kiss, in which case, I don't take it back Traitor Quote
~Amy~ Posted January 3, 2007 Report Posted January 3, 2007 So close! *shakes head* Actually, I didn't delete a kiss. Well then what did you delete? More soon please! Quote
kayla Posted January 3, 2007 Report Posted January 3, 2007 maybe aliens landed and abducted eamon? am i close ? Quote
baby gurl Posted January 3, 2007 Report Posted January 3, 2007 if it wasn't a kiss then what?????????? xx Quote
-Laura- Posted January 3, 2007 Report Posted January 3, 2007 Great chapter! Loved the Martha and Jack fishing scene! They are so cute and made for each other they just need to open there eyes to each other and see that! lol And if it wasn't a kiss then what did you delete?! Please update soon Nicole! Quote
-Jade- Posted January 3, 2007 Report Posted January 3, 2007 Right, I better keep to my promise of posting comments. I thought that last chapter was totally fab!! Omg, you could so just feel the chemistry! Shame about that Eamon guy. I wish he'd just...go away. lol Please please update soon, and I'm not at all happy that you took something out. Quote
linzie_mac01 Posted January 4, 2007 Report Posted January 4, 2007 Now that's what i'm talking about...some action, well nearly, but very close! I bet her deleted scene went something along the lines of: "I Lo...hate you" Martha said softly "I know" Jack sighed Goddamnit Nicole! Why ...just why did you delete it? Quote
puja Posted January 5, 2007 Report Posted January 5, 2007 I've missed this fic! (not because of your updates, but because of my stupid assignments! ) The whole J+M chemistry is brilliant; you write it so well. My favouite bit was when Jack was swirling Martha around I know this is old news, but; Eamon has a boyfriend! *sighs in relief* I now believe there is light at the end of the tunnel! Please update soon. Quote
zzazzb Posted January 5, 2007 Report Posted January 5, 2007 awsum chapter! can't bevieve you might have DELETED a KISS! i have an idea if it was a kiss you deleted and you wont put a kiss in soon the you could at LEAST be kind and....maybe....show us the part that you deleted *smiles sweetly* that WOULD be kind Quote
[.jessa-belle.] Posted January 5, 2007 Report Posted January 5, 2007 At least there is still more fishing...I like fishing You better put in the part you delted...in the next chapter Quote
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