Returning Emotions (by Nicom) - comments

[~Annie.]

^Ooo, harsh!

[-ParaisGal-]

JADE! That is nooot fair. Think of us poor innocents. Don't take it out on us, take it out on Nic

[vale4eva]

Oh poo. I thought ud updated then seen as were now on page 70 and not 69!

But damit you havent! Grr.

I think this is the most anticipated fic theres ever been, considering how long were having to wait

So come on guys, whoevers to blame for the waiting its best to just settle it by updating, then all will be good again! You know im right!

Update please

[-Jade-]

It may not be fair - but it's out of my control. Sorry! I'm not just being silly, or taking it out on you guys, I'm serious, she wouldn't talk to me last night so I couldn't do anything with the chapter.

Edited February 16, 2007 by -Jade-

[vale4eva]

It may not be fair - but it's out of my control. Sorry! I'm not just being silly, or taking it out on you guys, I'm serious, she wouldn't talk to me last night so I couldn't do anything with the chapter.

[~Amy~]

You're both as bad as each other.

[Nicom]

Well, I went on msn last night to talk to her about the chapter, and what she should do with it. I said 'hi' she said 'go away'. I said ' that's not very nice, I came on here just for you', she said 'I'm busy' I said 'Fine I'll go' she said "ok". So I left. The reason you guys don't have a chapter yet, is because Nicole blanked me last night.

You're such a snitch..

1. I like to insult you or tell you to go away. You know that. I just like to play.

2. I was incredibly busy, so when you said "fine I'll go" (like you always do) I thought that it was actually a good idea, and logged off myself. lol. I've been REALLY busy, as in painfully "ow my head hurts" busy, so I haven't had much time to do anything. So even if I had known you wanted to talk about the chapter, then I would have said no. Nothing personal Jadey.

But guess what!? I'm not busy now! Hint hint, nudge nudge. You can come on msn if you'd like.

Edited February 16, 2007 by Nicom

[-Jade-]

Well, I went on msn last night to talk to her about the chapter, and what she should do with it. I said 'hi' she said 'go away'. I said ' that's not very nice, I came on here just for you', she said 'I'm busy' I said 'Fine I'll go' she said "ok". So I left. The reason you guys don't have a chapter yet, is because Nicole blanked me last night.

You're such a snitch..

1. I like to insult you or tell you to go away. You know that. I just like to play.

2. I was incredibly busy, so when you said "fine I'll go" (like you always do) I thought that it was actually a good idea, and logged off myself. lol. I've been REALLY busy, as in painfully "ow my head hurts" busy, so I haven't had much time to do anything. So even if I had known you wanted to talk about the chapter, then I would have said no. Nothing personal Jadey.

I know, I know, just messing.

[vale4eva]

Glad thats all sorted. Isnt it so much better when everyone just gets along!

So how bout that chapter now!

Edit- sorry for the lack of patience! I dont know whats gotten into me!

Edited February 16, 2007 by vale4eva

[jackandmarthaforever!!]

Awww!! That was a cute chapter Nicom. Thank goodness that Jack showed Rachel what Henry did to him. I feel so sorry for Jack. It must be hard for him to let it all out but I'm glad he did so. I hope Peter gets to Henry before Henry gets to Martha or Jack. But I have a feeling that is not going to happen. lol. Anyway, I like the bond between Jack and Rachel and I hope Jack tells the police about Henry because if he doesn't he'll not only put himself but the love of his life in danger too. And that would just be jerky.

Anyway loved the writing.

My fav bit:

A grin leapt from Jack’s mouth as he launched forward to her, hugging her tightly.

“Thank you, thank you so much.” He laughed from relief.

Rachel smiled to herself as she tried to breathe through the crushing. She was sure he was lifting her from the ground 2 or 3 inches.

It made me laugh. Jack is like a little child and I love it. haha.

Can wait for more.