vale4eva Posted February 16, 2007 Report Posted February 16, 2007 oh man thats so annoying, i just wrote a whole reply and accidently deleted it, damit! Anyway, il try and remember what i wrote: OH. MY. GOD! That was brilliant writing Nicole, very gripping. And im glad he told Rach everything, she really cares about Jack and Martha doesnt she! Shes a good friend. Im slighty worried that Henry's going to make a reapearance in the next chapter. Im also sensing a major showdown. Hopefully this time Jack can take Henry down once and for all. Looking forward to the next one.....Hopefully some more Jack and Martha interaction!? Quote
puja Posted February 16, 2007 Report Posted February 16, 2007 Must. Not. Cry. That was an incredibly emotional chapter; fantastically written! I really, really felt for Jack; bless his little cotton socks. All I can say is that Henry best not hurt him! He's been through enough as it is. “I won’t let that happen, Rachel. Trust me; I’d die before he gets to her. I gave myself up for her last time; I’ll do it again if I have to.” He exclaimed. Aww; that was so sweet of him to say Half term+Nicole=UPDATES! Can't wait for more! Quote
-Laura- Posted February 16, 2007 Report Posted February 16, 2007 Awww that was a good chapter Nicole! Im so glad Jack finally let his feelings out to someone! Am a little concerned about Henrys whereabouts though and everyones safety because of that! Hope they finally catch him before he hurts anyone else and Jack and Martha can finally be happy! Great writing Nic! Update soon! Quote
beckyboo Posted February 16, 2007 Report Posted February 16, 2007 Hey wahey an update Excellent chapter Nicole even though there was no Jack and Martha but that just means there will be double in the next chapter My poor Jacky has been through hell :( - Big hugs for Jack- Update soon hun And look I never used one xxxxxxxxx Quote
~Amy~ Posted February 16, 2007 Report Posted February 16, 2007 He was going to the airport, to go back to Ireland. *beams with pride!* *waves flag* Awww but poor jack. He sound like he needs a big squishy hug. From someone besides Rachel. The one good thing about that chapter, beside from the mention of the wonderful place that is Ireland; no Richard & Eamon. More soon, please. Quote
baby gurl Posted February 16, 2007 Report Posted February 16, 2007 just read it and brilliant chapter nocle that was great...poor jack loved the argument thing jack and rachel had!! xx Quote
Tasha Posted February 17, 2007 Report Posted February 17, 2007 awww...first thank you Nicole for updating. Second- my poor Jacky baby -big hug- Third- i like Rachel Great chapter more please Quote
bay girl Posted February 17, 2007 Report Posted February 17, 2007 Yay. An update. I was starting to get desperate for a while there. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Hopefully some more J/M. LOL. Quote
Sarah_Lewis Posted February 17, 2007 Report Posted February 17, 2007 Awesome update Nicom cant wait to read the next update =]] Quote
>>Emma<< Posted February 17, 2007 Report Posted February 17, 2007 Great update Nicole. Poor Jack, I feel so sorry for him! I want Henry to go away, and let Martha and Jack be happy. Please update soon, fab. Quote
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