Guest Posted September 20, 2006 Report Posted September 20, 2006 ^^Beth is the only one out of those two that have died and she died of a brain hemeraige (How ever you spell it) Will Beth come back as a ghost for Tony?
dr kimberley Posted September 20, 2006 Report Posted September 20, 2006 ^^Only for you But not until later down the track because I write this ahead of when I put it on this site. Chapter 3 (The hospital) Rachel- Come on Colleen stay with us. (Alf rushes in) Alf- What the hell happened Drew? Drew- She wanted to do weights so I let her. Alf- You're an idiot. She's 76 years old for gods sake! Drew- I'm sorry. Alf- Sorry don't cut it. I hope you get out of Summer Bay for good! (Rachel comes out) Alf- How is she? Rachel- She'll live. Drew- Oh thank god. Alf- Yer thank god. (Alf punches Drew in the face) Rachel- Alright break it up! (Drew runs off) ******************************************************************** (Jack and Martha's house) Martha- What did I do to get an adorable son and daughter? Jack- You married me. It's obvious they get the looks from me and hopefully the brains otherwise they're doomed. Martha- Oy. If you ask me they would look the same without you. Jack- You're dreaming. Anyway I've gotta get back to work. Bye (Kisses Martha and then walks out) Marth- La la la. (Hears a sound in the bedroom and goes to have a look before being knocked out by a crowbar) ******************************************************************** (Amanda's house) Dan- Amanda open the door now! Amanda- Not you too. Go away! Dan- No, now open up. Amanda- No! (Dan kicks door down) Amanda- What the hell are you doing. You will have to pay for that door now. Dan- I don't care. Come with me. Amanda- Where? Dan- For a walk on the beach, you need to get outside and stop drinking your sorrows away. Amanda- Ok. Give me 10 minutes to get dressed. ******************************************************************** (Irene's house. There is a knock on the door.) Irene- Come in. (Tasha walks in) Tasha- Hey Irene. Irene- Tash love, it's great to see you. What are you doing here. Tasha- I'm just here to get my ex husband back. Irene- Good luck. Tasha- What is that meant to mean? Irene- It means I don't think he'll take you back. Tasha- Oh I have a few tricks up my sleeve. ******************************************************************** (Police station) Jack- Zoe definatly isn't alive this time Fitzy. Fitzy- Are you sure? Jack- Positive. Which means it's someone else. I wonder who this time? Fitzy- Do you think you have the brains to solve it? Jack- Hey, Martha has already picked on me today. Not you too. Fitzy- You really love her don't you? Jack- Yep. She makes my life worth living. I don't know what I'd do without her. ******************************************************************** (Jack and Martha's house. Martha is laying on the floor unconscious.) (Rachel knocks at the door) Rachel- Hello, is anyone home? (Rachel walks off) ******************************************************************** (Tony and Robbie's house. Tony and Robbie are currently fixing the house up.) Robbie- What a mess. Tony- I know. I hope Zoe isn't back again. (Rachel knocks at the door) Tony- Come in Rachel- Hey guys. Have you seenMartha leave the house? Tony- No she hasn't left all day. Why? Rachel- I went to see her but she didn't answer the door. Tony- That's weird. I'll go and see if she's there. (Tony leaves) Robbie- And then there were two. Rachel- yeah. Robbie- How is Colleen? Rachel- She'll live. (Rachel and Robbie stare at each other before having a passionate kiss.) ******************************************************************** (Sally's house. Drew enters) Cassie- What happened to you? Drew- Alf punched me in the face. Cassie- What? Why? Drew- Because Colleen brought a membership and wanted to do the weights and then had a heart attack. Cassie- Oh dear. Drew- I know. It's all my fault. Cassie- She wanted to do the weights. Don't put youself down. Drew- I love you. Cassie- I love you too. ******************************************************************** (Jack and Martha's house) (Sally and Brad arrive) Sally- Is she answering? Tony- No. I've yelled loud enough. Maybe I should call Jack. Brad- No point getting him in a panic when it could be nothing. Tony- You're right. Sally- I'll go around the side and take a look. Tony- Thanks Sal. Brad- I bet she's fine. (Sally runs back) Sally- Quick, we need to get inside. Tony- Why? Sally- She is unconscious on the ground! ******************************************************************** Next time on Home and Away: . How does Tasha stir up trouble for Robbie and Rachel? . Will Martha nad her babies be ok? . Who is getting married? . Who is Colleen falling for?
Tasha Posted September 20, 2006 Report Posted September 20, 2006 Maaartha. Oh god i hope her and the kids are alright. Even though ive already read this fic i forget what happened Good to see Colleen is fine, but poor Drew Please update soon
Guest Posted September 21, 2006 Report Posted September 21, 2006 lol Robbie and Rachel that so random but funny and I like to see what tricks Tasha got up her sleaves
Sarah_Lewis Posted September 21, 2006 Report Posted September 21, 2006 omgness Rachel and Robbie lol teehee awesome, update soonish =p
-michelle- Posted September 21, 2006 Report Posted September 21, 2006 Great chapter. Cant wait for more.
dr kimberley Posted September 22, 2006 Report Posted September 22, 2006 Chapter 4 (Jack and Martha's house. Tony knocks door down) Tony- Martha! Please wake up. Brad- I'll call the ambulance. Sally- Where are her babies? Tony- Oh god! They've been taken. Brad- The ambo's are on their way. ******************************************************************** (The beach. Amanda and Dan are walking at the beach while Colleen stares at Dan) Colleen (Muttering to herself)- I can't love Dan I just can't. ******************************************************************** (Robbie and Tony's house) Rachel- Does this mean we're together? Robbie- I guess it does. (Tasha enters) Tasha- Suprise Robbie- What the hell are you doing here? Tasha- I came to tell you that I would like to hook up again tonight because last night was fun. (Rachel runs out crying) Robbie- HOW DARE YOU DO THAT. GET OUT! Tasha- Toodles sweetheart. I'll be waiting in bed for you. HAHAHA. ******************************************************************** (Irene's house) Paris- How does it look? Drew- Shiny. (Irene enters) Irene- Hey sweetheart. (Kisses Paris) Drew- I've gotta go and see Cassie. (Drew leaves) Paris- Do you love me? Irene of course I do. Paris- Then marry me. (Irene faints) ******************************************************************** (The hospital. Doctor comes out) Tony- How is she? Doc- She'll live. She wants to see her children. (Tony enters hospital room) Tony- How are you? Martha- I want to see my babies. Tony- This is so hard to tell you... Martha- Just say it. Tony- Your babies have been kidnapped. (Martha starts bursting into tears and trying to get out of bed) Tony- You need to rest. Sally and Brad are looking for your babies. (Jack runs in) Jack- I just heard. Oh babie. (Jack and Tasha hug) ******************************************************************** (The police station) Sally- Is there anything else I can do? Fitzy- You've done all you can. Brad- Don't hesitate to ask if you need any help. Fitzy- Thanks for the offer but there is nothing else you can do. ******************************************************************** (Irene's house) Paris- Are you alright? Irene- I'm fine. Paris- Do you have an answer? Irene- Of course I'll marry you. (Irene and Paris kiss) ******************************************************************** (The beach) Amanda- I feel so much better now. Dan- Good. Amanda- Dan I'm in love with you. (Just at that moment a Tsunami comes) Next time on Home and away: . Will Dan and Amanda die? . Which business gets destroyed? . Will Robbie and Rachel get back together? . The person who trashed Tony and Robbie's house is revealed but will they be caught? . Who has a brain tuma?
Sarah_Lewis Posted September 22, 2006 Report Posted September 22, 2006 That was awesome cant wait to read more soon =p
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