loobieloo Posted September 23, 2006 Report Posted September 23, 2006 You guys rock for making JaCorey! Can't wait for the update. lmao its annoys most people but hey, it is better than martha and jack I'm just writing the 1st chapter now so it should be up soon:)
mrsbrody Posted September 23, 2006 Report Posted September 23, 2006 Normally I'd hunt you down for breaking up Martha and Jack and making him gay but I have a feeling I'll like this fiction so your saved. It will be different thats for sure but with two hot gay guys it might work can't wait to read more.
angelgirl Posted September 23, 2006 Report Posted September 23, 2006 Lol!That introduction made me laugh!Can´t wait for an update!
Oxidizer Posted September 23, 2006 Report Posted September 23, 2006 lmao its annoys most people but hey, it is better than martha and jack lol. You're so right! I'm just writing the 1st chapter now so it should be up soon:) YAY!
loobieloo Posted September 23, 2006 Report Posted September 23, 2006 Ok heres chapter one its quite short but i will be updating regularly probaby about twice a day Chapter one Martha stood there, shocked to silence. “No,” she gasped not wanting to believe what he was saying. “Yes Martha, I’m gay, I thought you would have guessed sooner, I mean I’ve hinted loads!” “No you haven’t! How have you hinted?” “The constant wearing of pink shirts, Borrowing your make-up, wearing the false tan, it is obvious.” “But…. A pink shirt doesn’t mean your gay, and the make-up and false tan was just for a laugh.” “I loved every minute of it you knew that!” She knew he had liked it but wanted to ignore it. How could he be gay? It was so wrong. How could he act like he loved her when he was gay? The tears started to flow down her cheeks as he gave her a hug. “Get off me! How could you do this? How could you act like everything was ok when you loved him not me, all this time, all we’ve been through!” “Martha I do love you, just not in that way.” “And why Corey, Jack? Why him? It’s hard enough to think of you as being gay, but Corey? It’s too much!” “I…” “Just go! GO!” “Ok but Martha I have something else I want to tell you before I go.” “What now? It can’t be any worse than what you’ve just told me.” “Well……. Corey’s pregnant” With that he turned and walked out of the door, leaving Martha totally gob smacked and lost for words. Lmaooooo sorry I had to make him pregnant Please review
[.jessa-belle.] Posted September 23, 2006 Report Posted September 23, 2006 Ok heres chapter one its quite short but i will be updating regularly probaby about twice a day Chapter one Martha stood there, shocked to silence. “No,” she gasped not wanting to believe what he was saying. “Yes Martha, I’m gay, I thought you would have guessed sooner, I mean I’ve hinted loads!” “No you haven’t! How have you hinted?” “The constant wearing of pink shirts, Borrowing your make-up, wearing the false tan, it is obvious.” “But…. A pink shirt doesn’t mean your gay, and the make-up and false tan was just for a laugh.” “I loved every minute of it you knew that!” She knew he had liked it but wanted to ignore it. How could he be gay? It was so wrong. How could he act like he loved her when he was gay? The tears started to flow down her cheeks as he gave her a hug. “Get off me! How could you do this? How could you act like everything was ok when you loved him not me, all this time, all we’ve been through!” “Martha I do love you, just not in that way.” “And why Corey, Jack? Why him? It’s hard enough to think of you as being gay, but Corey? It’s too much!” “I…” “Just go! GO!” “Ok but Martha I have something else I want to tell you before I go.” “What now? It can’t be any worse than what you’ve just told me.” “Well……. Corey’s pregnant” With that he turned and walked out of the door, leaving Martha totally gob smacked and lost for words. Lmaooooo sorry I had to make him pregnant Please review OMG I LOVE YOU!!!! I think i am becoming a JaCorey fan!!!!!!!!! OMG That is hilarious, he is pregant OMG more more more, ha, the pregant thing had me in stiches
loobieloo Posted September 23, 2006 Report Posted September 23, 2006 Wahay another JaCorey fan!!! Glad you like it
Home and Away Always!!! Posted September 23, 2006 Report Posted September 23, 2006 I'm very scared. I think I'm going to have nightmares tonight. It's funny but frightening.
xGlowingAngelx Posted September 23, 2006 Report Posted September 23, 2006 It was ceratinly.....different. Great relief. Ahhh he's pregnant, they'll make good parents
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