Life Is Hard No Matter What Your Age

[xsianx]

Great work

Lol the Holden charm

Can't wait to read more..

[emmasi]

Eee another tash fic to get into. Yay . I love the stories you tell. The Holdens probably have/had the most potential of any family in the bay. It'll be interesting to see how you use it

If I could just offer one little piece of technical advice, you're switching tenses a little bit. eg:

I looked up to see both he and Dad smirking at me. (past tense)

"What" I say to them completely confused. (present tense)

Great fic though. I look forward to reading more

[tasha7905]

Thanks guys. Emmasi thanks for that, I realised I was when I was writing it, thought i had corrected it all, I think because of the last fic when I was constantly writing past tense I seem to have stayed in the habit.

[emmasi]

Oh yeah. Fair enough

[tasha7905]

Just got to make sure I remember not to keep doing it hopefully it will get easier as I write more. Now I just have to figure out what to write

[aejdude]

Great Chapter Tasha.

I'm really liking this new fic , looking forward to reading more.

[Tasha]

we walked to our house a stunning blonde walks into the house next door.

Ok the only blonde i can think of is Tasha, and if it is Tasha that his talking about, im going to collapse. Wait till he sees the gorgeous brunette, shes prettier, and Jack and Tasha is a big nono. But great chapter though

Please update soon

[Jacksthehottest]

^lol. Great two chapters, I'm loving this fic already can't wait to read more, please update soon

[burr]

Well done, I'm really liking it so far. It's so great to have a fic that revolves around family and not just love interests. It reminded me of when the Holden's first came to the bay and they had all that great interaction which now never happens of course. : ( The POV style is really refreshing. Just be careful wth proof-reading.

[katie343]

I'm really enjoying this fic Please post more soon.