amz89 Posted October 30, 2006 Report Posted October 30, 2006 Last 4 chapters were great Callan interesting!!! Please post again soon!!!
Jackieleanne Posted October 30, 2006 Report Posted October 30, 2006 Thanks you two, I've had an exhausting weekend and have a full day at Uni today ill try and post more when I get home depending how I feel.
tasha7905 Posted November 1, 2006 Report Posted November 1, 2006 Great fic Jackie. I hadnt even thought of Callan. I really hope they get to Matilda in time. Cant wait for your next update.
Jackieleanne Posted November 1, 2006 Report Posted November 1, 2006 Thanks Tash, hopefully next chapter will be up on Friday, ive got a lot of work for Uni just started getting all the assignment work so I'm not going to beable to update as much as what I did lastweek when I was off especially as I'm at Uni until five most days and most of the time being tired my cretiveness is out the window.
Jackieleanne Posted November 3, 2006 Report Posted November 3, 2006 Chapter 17 Ric’s P.O.V “Matilda” I scream running towards the rocks where we had heard her scream coming from, running faster than I have ever run before faster than my own legs could carry me I needed to get to her and fast I couldn’t lose my Matilda, “Mattie” I say stopping as we reach the rocks and see no sign of her, “Oh my god no Matilda” Beth cries falling to the floor “Beth” Tony says softly you can tell he’s downhearted like the rest of us but he was trying to keep his spirits up to be Beth’s rock, “her bracelet the one her father got her look” she says holding out the torn bracelet, she was right as well that was the bracelet Matilda always wore, “Mattie” I cry falling to my knee’s beside Beth resting my head in my hands, I put my hand over Beth’s looking at Matilda’s bracelet wanting to hold onto a part of her, its then that I see the bracelet covered in her blood, “What’s going on?” I hear Jack say as he runs up behind us, “her bracelet Mattie’s bracelet its covered in blood, they’ve took her Jack” I say “we have to find her now we can’t stop we have to get out there I don’t care if we are searching all night for her I’m not letting him take her” I say getting to my feet and climbing down from the rocks. “Ric you need to go home and rest we have been out here all night its been six hours since we found her bracelet, its five am we need rest we are all exhausted” Granddad says putting his hand on my shoulder, “Granddad I’m not stopping until she is found I need to find her, anything could have happened to her could still be happening to her, we know what Callan tried to do to her last time if we hadn’t of got their in time what if he tries to do that again” I say continuing to walk ahead, “you go home Alf I’m with Ric on this one though Matilda’s like a daughter to me, I can’t give up on her I have to keep looking for her” Tony says “I’m with dad and Ric as well” Lucas says before taking a drink from his water, “me too” Kim and Jack both say. “Ok well look after yourselves and good luck let me know if you here anything” Granddad says “It’s going to be ok son” he whispers softly in my ear before leaving.
sevenpuddings Posted November 3, 2006 Report Posted November 3, 2006 Awww, nooo! Poor Ric, poor Mattie, poor Beth! *cries* that was sooo sad! I hope they find her soon... and I hope that Ric holds nothing back when he meets Callan! Evil, evil boy! Don't leave us hanging for too long Jackie, please, please, pretty please?
Jackieleanne Posted November 3, 2006 Report Posted November 3, 2006 Thanks Jess if I can get some assignment work done I met get more up later. Working tommorow night after i've been to theatre tommorow afternoon but I have Sunday off so might get a few updates then as well but I can't promise anything depends how much of my assignments I get done.
kase Posted November 3, 2006 Report Posted November 3, 2006 A-Greed! Please update soon Jackie, the not-knowingness is very hard! That was very sad, and heartwrenching. The poor family. I'm so worried for Matilda, if its been SIX hours. I really hope she's okay! Aww!
Jackieleanne Posted November 3, 2006 Report Posted November 3, 2006 Thanks Kase ill try and post again today but no promises.
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