ldscott Posted November 15, 2006 Report Posted November 15, 2006 These chapters are brilliant! Can't wait to read on!
Adia Posted November 15, 2006 Report Posted November 15, 2006 I was soooooooo fooled by that ending. But great chapter, can't wait till the next one.
Traceve Posted November 16, 2006 Report Posted November 16, 2006 Bet you and Chrissie and a huge laugh about all this Update soon!
Lilone Posted November 17, 2006 Report Posted November 17, 2006 “Dad I know all this but what’s the secret,” asked Drew. “Claire and I have a 6 month old daughter” Drew was stunned and didn’t know what to say, “Mate say something” Pete said hoping for a response. “I don’t know what to say except Erm…. Wow I have a step sister” “Yeah I know mate I’m sorry I didn’t tell you sooner” replied Pete. “No dad it’s cool I’m just glad you told me, when can I meet my sister” asked an excited Drew. “That’s the thing mate I don’t know because she has left Australia and gone to the UK” “The Uk?” “Yes and I really want to find my daughter!” “Well I think you should go for it dad but I want to be there with you!” “Son I know you do but you have your HSC coming up and the best thing you could do is finish school” “But please dad I want to….” “Drew as soon as I find her I will be on the first plane back to see you but you need to finish school” “Your dads right” said Sally. “Ok but I want to be the first person to know” replied Drew. “Ok deal” said Drew as he shook his dads hand. “I better be off” said Drew as he said goodbye and left the house. 3 days later… Pete and Sally arrived outside Claire’s mums house as they prepared to see Frankie. Pete slowly walked up to the front door followed by Sally, Pete knocked on the door as he heard someone walking towards the door as the door opened Frankie said “Well I didn’t expect to see you.” “Frankie please I need your help!” “My help! you was the one who caused Jason’s death and made Claire move away” she shot back at him. “Please can we talk inside” Sally asked calmly Frankie moved away from the door as Sally and Pete entered. Sally and Pete walked into the living room as Pete said, “I’m sorry I couldn’t go to the funeral. I was still in hospital” Pete tried to explain “Look Pete I’m grieving for my son and you turn up wanting my help” replied Frankie. “I need to find Claire and Lilly” peter said. “Lilly?” Frankie replied. “Yes your granddaughter my daughter” Frankie sat down in shock as she said, “Claire hasn’t got a daughter, I would have known” Pete was shocked that Frankie didn’t know as well, "John and Jason knew that’s why Jason came to Summer Bay, to tell me” Frankie was still silent but said “I thought he came to see you because he wanted to know the real reason why you and Claire split up” “No he was found half beaten in the bush, when he woke up he didn’t want to tell us who did it but as time went on we found pout John had beaten him” This put Frankie in even more shock as she said, “I thought Jason was killed by somebody else and John was shot in self defence” “Yes John was shot by another office as he shot his gun towards me.” Replied Pete “Can I just ask who told you about John and Jason’s death?” Pete asked as he wondered about why she was not told the truth. “A female detective and a uniformed office” replied Frankie. “Can you remember their names?” asked Pete “No but they said they were from Yabbie creek station” Pete looked confused as he and Sally just looked at each other, he knew that the only detective working at the station was himself when he eventually gets back to work, but he thought that their might be a temporary detective covering for him. “Ok Frankie we need to know where Claire is, I want to find my daughter and your granddaughter!” “You are going over the other side of the world to find her?” “Frankie I lost 17 years of knowing my son because I didn’t know he existed, I’m not going to loose anymore time with Lilly” “Ok she was transferred to a London to start a new life” Frankie walked over to the draw where she handed Pete a recent letter that Claire had wrote to her. “When was the last time you saw her?” “February the month after you split up with her, she told me she needed to get away. I couldn’t understand but the baby must have been the reason she got away so fast” “Pete I want to come with you!” “Frankie please you stay here just incase she decides to come back and tell you the everything” “Ok but tell her I love her when you find her” said Frankie as she hugged Pete “Take care” Pete gave her a warm smile as he and Sally left the house and headed to the car. Sally and Pete were in the car when Pete asked to go to the police station, “I need to ask Jack something” Sally and Pete arrived at the station were he found Jack sitting at his desk, “Jack can I have a word?” “Sure” replied Jack as he went to walk into the spare interview room. “Sal you come as well” said Pete. “Jack as you might have been told I have a 6 month old daughter who is currently living in London but as I was speaking to Claire’s mum I found out that a female detective and a uniformed officer had informed her of Jason and John’s death but we all no that only uniform officers inform family of deaths, so I wondered if we had a temp detective in until I come back?” “No Pete we have a super Intendant here, Murphy His name is” “The Super is here?” Pete said in amazement. Pete didn’t know weather to be angry or pleased, he could either go mad at him for giving bad thoughts to Claire or be nice to get more information out of him about Claire. “So No female detective? “No only the Super and no more uniform have arrived” “Ok thanks mate” said Pete as he shook Jack hand as he heard “Pete!” being shouted from the reception. As he turned round he saw a very pleased Lara greeting him with a hug, “are you back at work? We have missed you” Preview: Pete and Sally are set to go to the UK but who turns up that could change Pete’s plans? Teaser: “I loved her,” Peter shouted at him. “You just used her” he shot back at him. Pete clenched his fist as he walked further towards him. “You had no right to say that, you was he one telling her that she could do better then me but you hated the fact she rejected you” shouted Pete “I can’t believe you couldn’t see you it, how do you know your Lilly’s dad?” “What do you mean?” shouted Pete “You work it out!”
Traceve Posted November 18, 2006 Report Posted November 18, 2006 Why did Drew have to stay behind? That means he wont be in the next few chapters I wonder who told Frankie.."hint" Tracey back from the dead?
Traceve Posted November 19, 2006 Report Posted November 19, 2006 Why why why why did Drew have to stay behind? That means he wont be in the next few chapters Im a very impatient person though..
swfc Posted November 19, 2006 Report Posted November 19, 2006 “No Lara sorry, I know you can’t work your best without me.” he said jokingly. “I will be back soon though I promise.” said Pete as he went to leave the station but bumped into Superintendent Murphy. “Detective Baker, long time no see!” said the Super as he greeted Pete. “Have you got a minute?” he asked “Sure.” said Pete as he walked into the office leaving Sally near the reception desk. “How have you been?” said Murphy as he shut the door. “Cut the crap will you, I know about you getting Claire a transfer to London! Tell me why Super was it because she didn’t want you, you had to transfer her?” Pete said sarcastically. “Don’t forget who you are talking to.” he reminded Pete. “I don’t care I now have a daughter half way across the world because of you!” Pete shouted “I didn’t make her leave, she wanted a fresh start without you!” This made Pete feel even worse he knew that if he didn’t just up and leave Claire would have told him about the baby but it was still not Murphy’s place to say what he just did. “I loved her!” Peter shouted at him. “You just used her!” he shot back at him. Pete clenched his fist as he walked further towards him. “You had no right to say that! You was he one telling her that she could do better than me, but you hated the fact she rejected you!” shouted Pete “I can’t believe you couldn’t see you it, how do you know your Lilly’s dad?” “What do you mean?” shouted Pete “You work it out!” replied Murphy Pete walked towards him a swung for him, Murphy ended up on the floor with a nosebleed as Pete laid in to him more until Jack and Lara raced into the room and dragged Pete away. “You know what Super, you can forget my job! I quit!” Pete said as he walked out of the station in anger with Sally walking after him. Jack and Lara couldn’t believe what Pete had just said but they didn’t have to long to think as Murphy shouted them into the office to help clean him up. “Pete what was that all about?” she shouted as Pete walked towards the car Pete looked over at Sal as he said, “I might not be Lilly’s father!” Sally looked confused as she said, “Is that what he said?” “Yes that’s what he said and he just wound me up and I exploded!” Pete reply as Sally hugged him. “Pete let’s go tomorrow. You need to know from Claire as soon as possible.” Sally said smiling at Pete. “Ok.” replied Pete as he kissed and hugged Sally before getting in the car and driving back to the house. Pete, Sally and Pippa were going to London to find Claire and Lilly to find out the truth, Pete and Sally had just finished packing their bags when Leah, Dan and Drew arrived to say goodbye and good luck. Pete walked over and hugged Drew and Dan goodbye as well as Leah. Pete smiled as Drew helped him put their bags in the car, “Sal look after him.” said Dan as he said goodbye to her. Sally just smiled and watched Pete re-enter the house were Pete picked Pippa up and started telling her a story, everyone could see how good Pete was with Pippa and how he was with Drew, if Lilly turned out to be his daughter he would make a great dad. “You ready Sal?” asked Pete as he waited by the door with a grin on his face, everyone watched Pete drive off with Sally and Pippa to find Claire and Lilly. Pete was nervous he was hoping that Lilly would be his daughter but he didn’t know what to expect, as they drove further towards the airport Sally said, “Pete ,I want you to know what ever happens I will always be there for you but I want you to know I love you.” Pete smiled at her as he said, “I love you too.” They arrived at the airport were they started to take their bags out of the car, “You ready?” asked Pete as they entered the air port. “I sure am.” replied Sally Preview: Pete and Sally fly off to London but will they get on the plane? Two unexpected people arrive at Leah and Dan’s for a visit.
Traceve Posted November 19, 2006 Report Posted November 19, 2006 Yay! Drew was in the chapter! Go Pete, you bash him good!
ldscott Posted November 19, 2006 Report Posted November 19, 2006 Great couple of chapters, this is gettin reallt interesting,please update again soon!
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